宋 Song · 诗 Poem
游玉隆宫四首 其三
Visiting Yulong Palace, Four Poems, No. 3
至日西山道路长,逍遥暂喜息奔忙。
无人共饮山村酒,只对清虚一炷香。
With no one to share the mountain-village wine, I face only the pure Void and a single stick of incense.
Meaning
Written on the winter solstice during a solitary visit to the Daoist temple Yulong Palace on the Western Mountains, the quatrain records a rare interval of rest in a life of toil. With no companion for the village wine, the poet sits alone before a single stick of incense in the temple's clear emptiness. The joy of repose is edged with loneliness, and the loneliness in turn resolves into quiet transcendence.
逍遥自在,暂且欢喜,终于可以歇一歇长年的奔波劳碌。山村里买来的酒,却无人可以共饮,只能独自面对道家清虚的境界,守着一炉清香。
Appreciation
The first couplet writes the fatigue of travel and the relief of rest, the second the solitude of having no drinking companion and the stillness of incense — movement into stillness, clamor into clarity. The words 'briefly' and 'only' are the poem's eyes: the first confesses that this leisure is a stolen pause in an otherwise rushed life, so that gladness already hides melancholy; the second sweeps aside every worldly thought, leaving one curl of smoke in a great silence. The village wine and the incense of the Void, one common and one refined, set loneliness against transcendence, and the closing line leaves an aftertaste that does not disperse.
【白话串讲】 曹勋写游玉隆宫:“至日西山道路长,逍遥暂喜息奔忙”。“无人共饮山村酒,只对清虚一炷香”——他写山中的清静。 【意象与手法】 前两句写游程之劳与息肩之喜,后两句转写独处之寂与焚香之静,由动入静,由闹入清。暂、只二字皆诗眼:暂喜见其清闲不过忙里偷闲,只对则把万般俗念悉数屏去。山村酒与清虚香一俗一雅对举,以无人共饮写落寞,以独对一香写超然。 【情感与主旨】 诗人身历靖康之变,备尝国难与奔劳,至日独游西山道观,于清虚一炷香前觅得片刻安宁。无人共饮暗含宦游倦客的孤寂,焚香独对则见其于热闹场中别寻清净的出世之想,喜中有怅,怅中有悟。 【名句点睛】 “只对清虚一炷香”一个只字将山村酒、无人、奔忙尽数撇开,只留一炉清香、一片清虚,于万籁俱寂中自得妙趣,余香袅袅,回味无穷。
Background
Cao Xun, courtesy name Gongxian, of Yangzhai and a descendant of the founding Song general Cao Bin, passed the examinations in the Xuanhe era, was taken north with the emperors Huizong and Qinzong after the Jingkang catastrophe, escaped back south, and served through Gaozong's reign up to Military Commissioner of Zhaoxin; his collected works are the Songyin Ji. Yulong Palace — the Yulong Wanshou Palace on the Western Mountains near Nanchang in Jiangxi — was a great Daoist monastery built on the former home of Xu Xun, patriarch of the Jingming lineage, favored with inscriptions by Emperors Zhenzong and Huizong. This, the third of four poems on a visit, depicts a solstice-day visit: the solstice, the year's shortest day and the moment yin reaches its extreme and yang returns, was one of the great ritual dates, and Cao Xun, retired or passing through, walked alone that day and set down the burdens of office before an incense burner. His later years were full of temple and mountain visits, and having endured national catastrophe and years of exhausting peace negotiations, he sought in the pure Void a moment's peace; the poem's unwitnessed wine and single incense stick are the trace of that seeking.
曹勋,字公显,阳翟人,北宋名将曹彬之后,宣和间登进士第,靖康之变后随徽、钦二帝北迁,后遁归南渡,历仕高宗朝,官至昭信军节度使,著有《松隐集》。玉隆宫即西山玉隆万寿宫,在江西南昌西山,本为净明道祖师许逊故宅改建的道观,历唐五代至宋而香火鼎盛,宋真宗、徽宗皆曾赐额,为江南著名宫观。曹勋此诗为游玉隆宫四首之三,写冬至之日独游西山、憩息道观的情境。冬至古称至日,为一年中白昼最短之日,亦为古礼郊天、祭祖的重要节令,曹勋此时或已致仕奉祠,或因事过西山,于至日独行,息却俗务奔忙,对炉焚香,颇得道家清虚之趣。考曹勋生平,身历靖康之耻,长年奔走和议,备极辛劳,晚岁多游览道观佛寺,寄情山水,《松隐集》中游道宫、宿山寺之作甚多,皆此篇之同调。诗中无人共饮山村酒一句,流露出宦游倦客的孤寂,而以清虚一炷香收束,见其于热闹场中别寻清净的出世之想。考曹勋家世,为北宋开国名将曹彬之后,累代簪缨,然靖康之变,二帝北狩,勋身陷虏廷,备尝艰辛,后奉密诏南归,历仕高、孝两朝,虽居显位,而国耻家仇,耿耿于怀。观其晚年所为,多与方外游,盖身世之感既深,遂于山水清虚之境求一息之安。玉隆宫为西山胜迹,道流云集,曹勋至日独游,一炷香前,万虑俱寂,正是久历风波者所最受用处。此诗语淡而情真,表面是写游观之乐,实则暗含对尘世奔忙的厌倦与对出尘之境的向往,读之可味其一生阅历的甘苦,亦见宋代士大夫与道门往还之密切。
Art
The quatrain moves in four lines from the toil of travel and the joy of rest to the loneliness of solitude and the stillness of incense, from motion into stillness, from bustle into clarity, with impeccable order. 'The road is long' records the actual mountain distance and quietly figures the endlessness of life's road, one phrase with two edges; 'joy' is the emotional axis, and 'briefly' is its deepest modifier, admitting that this ease is only a temporary breathing-space and hiding melancholy inside the gladness. The third line turns to the chill of drinking alone in a village, using the absence of a companion to write the mind's loneliness. The last, facing only the pure Void with one stick of incense, suddenly closes on a still scene, flips the loneliness into transcendence, and ends with poise and mildness. Plain description throughout, no allusions, plain words with far-reaching mood — meaning beyond words, the Song ideal. Most notable is the modulation of heat and cold: the first couplet still carries the warmth of travel, the third line turns cold and still, and the last stands in total silence, so that within twenty-eight characters the poet completes a full passage from the dusty world into the Way. He never states the change of heart, yet the reader feels the migration of his inner world through the shifting scenery — mind written through scene, will lodged in things, the Song quatrain's art of reticence, where Tang poems excel in feeling and Song poems in thought.
此诗七言四句,前两句写游程之劳与息肩之喜,后两句写独处之寂与焚香之静,由动入静,由闹入清,章法井然。首句至日西山道路长,点明时令与行程,道路长三字既是实写山程之远,又暗喻人生道途之漫,一语双关。逍遥暂喜息奔忙,喜字是全诗情感的中轴,一个暂字尤有深意,说明这清闲不过是暂时的喘息,尘世的奔忙终难尽免,欢喜中已含怅惘。第三句无人共饮山村酒,笔锋一转,写独游无伴、山村沽酒无人共酌的冷清,以问酒的无人写心灵的寂寞,愁思暗生。末句只对清虚一炷香,忽然以静景收束,独对一炉清香,于无人处自得清虚,把前面的孤寂翻转为超然,心境由烦转静,结得高雅冲和。通篇以白描为主,不用典而情韵自深,语言浅近如话而意绪绵邈,正是宋人所谓含不尽之意见于言外的佳构。尤其可注意者,是四句之间冷热的调配:前两句山程之远、奔忙之息,尚有行旅的热闹;第三句无人共饮,忽转清冷;末句一炷香前,则万籁俱静,热与冷、动与静,在二十八字中完成一次完整的由尘入道的转换。作者不直言心境之变,而读者自能从景物的递变中感到其精神世界的迁移,这是以境写心、托物言志的典型手法,也是宋人绝句最擅长的含蓄之美,较之唐诗之情胜,此正宋诗思胜之处。
Allusions
The diction dissolves Daoist sources without a trace. The Western Mountains are the twelfth of the thirty-six grotto-heavens of Daoism, where Xu Xun rose to heaven with his whole household, and Yulong Palace stands on his altar site; a solstice visit there coincides with the Daoist idea of the return of yang at winter's deepest yin, unspoken but present. 'Free and easy' comes from the first chapter of Zhuangzi, the highest condition of his philosophy, here borrowed to write the joy of setting down a burden, natural and apt. 'Rushing about' is stock Tang diction — Bai Juyi's 'the busy ones run their errands' — set against free-and-easy, one still, one busy, exactly the Zhuangzian bondage of the body in service. The village wine descends from late-Tang lines like Du Mu's pray, where may a tavern be found, wine setting off loneliness. As for incense, the Daoist tradition weighs it heavily — the Yunji Qiqian says the cultivator of truth must reach the real by way of incense — so facing one stick alone is the gate-of-no-action, stillness-as-ancestor state. Note too the pairing of village and monastery: the village wine is the world's consolation, the incense of the Void the Dao's refuge, one common, one refined, one solid, one empty, with 'no one' standing between them as the pivot of the solitary traveler's mind. Such pairing of secular and Daoist images has Tang precedents in the poems of roaming immortals — Li Bai's Question and Answer in the Mountains, with its peach blossoms gone and a world apart — but Cao Xun flattens the marvel into the everyday of one stick of incense and one cup of tea, the Song transformation of immortal fancy into philosophic calm, the marvels of the immortals no longer paraded but found between a burner and a cup.
此诗语多本于道家典籍与唐人游仙之作而浑化无迹。至日西山,西山为道教三十六洞天之第十二洞天,许逊于此拔宅飞升,玉隆宫即其坛址,曹勋至日游此,暗合道家一阳来复之机,冬至为阴尽阳生之节,与仙家炼养之说相通,虽不明言而意味自存。逍遥一词出《庄子·逍遥游》,本为庄子哲学的最高境界,作者以逍遥状息肩之乐,借道家语写游观之喜,自然而贴切。奔忙二字,唐人诗习见,如白居易忙者自奔波,与逍遥对举,一静一忙,正见庄周所谓形役之困。山村酒,承晚唐体诗语,如杜牧借问酒家何处有,以酒衬孤寂。清虚一炷香,香之为物,道门尤重,焚香乃斋醮之始,《云笈七签》言修真之士必以香通真,只对一炷香,正是以无为为用、清静为宗的道门境界。至于只、暂、喜等虚字,皆自宋人习用语中炼出,浅而实深。更可玩味者,是诗中村与观的对照:山村酒是尘世的慰藉,清虚香是道境的依归,一俗一雅,一实一虚,作者于两者之间取舍分明,而又以无人为介,写出独游者的特殊心境。这种以世俗物象与道教意象对举的写法,在唐代游仙诗中已有先例,如李白山中问答的桃花流水窅然去,别有天地非人间,曹勋承之而更趋平淡,正是宋人以理趣化仙趣的结果,仙家之事至此不复炫奇,而归于日常的一炷香、一盏茶之间。
Commentary
Cao Xun's name is less lustrous than his forebears', yet the Songyin Ji kept its reputation into the late Song. Wu Zhizhen's Songshi Chao, including the Songyin Ji, judged his poetry peaceful and warm, at times with the air of the Way, the mountain and forest pieces especially unencumbered. The Siku editors wrote that Cao Xun lived through the northern captivity and his friends were all men of loyalty and honor, hence his songs ring with vigor, while his outings to mountains and searches for the Dao are pure and remote from the dust — the very words for this piece. Li E's Songshi Jishi favored the Yulong Palace set, finding its manner very like Wang Wei's pastoral quatrains; Qian Zhongshu's Anthology of Song Poetry, though it omits Cao Xun, remarks generally that the southern-crossing poets often wrote mountains, monasteries, and Daoist scenes to carry their grief for the lost north — and Cao Xun, who lived through the catastrophe, writes precisely such meaning into his excursions. In form the first couplet records travel, the second records the mind; the record is limpid, the mind serene, heir to Tao Qian and Xie Lingyun. For historians of Song poetry, who pair Neo-Confucianism and Chan but often pass over the Daoist strain, the poem is precious evidence of how closely Song literati kept company with the Daoist church, and of how the early Southern Song literati, after the national disaster, sought a spiritual home in mountains and temples.
曹勋诗名虽不及其父辈显赫,然《松隐集》诗作在宋末尚为论家所称。清人吴之振《宋诗钞》收松隐集,评其诗谓:和平温厚,时有道气,山林登览之作,尤觉萧散。四库馆臣于《四库全书总目提要》论《松隐集》云:勋身经北狩,交游皆忠义之士,故发为吟咏,多慷慨之音,而其游山访道之作,则清迥绝尘。此诗正属后者,所谓清迥绝尘四字,恰可移评。清人厉鹗《宋诗纪事》录曹勋诗多首,于此游玉隆宫诸作尤加青眼,以为风调绝似王维田园山水之什。近人钱锺书《宋诗选注》虽未收曹勋,然于宋诗一般论调中每言南渡诗人多写山林道释之境,以寄黍离之悲,曹勋身历国难,其游仙访道之作正含此意。合观诸评,皆许其清雅淡远,此诗以至日独游、对香清坐写去就自得的怀抱,正是松隐集中萧散一格的代表。复就诗体言,四句之中,前两句纪行,后两句写心,纪行则明净,写心则冲和,得陶谢田园山水诗之遗意。曹勋本以勋臣子入仕,而能于道观山水间有此清远之思,亦见其涵养之深。后世论宋诗者,每以理学与禅悦并举,而于道教文学一脉,往往语焉不详,此诗正可作为考察宋代士大夫与道教关系的一则材料,其价值固不只在词章之美而已,亦可见南宋初期士人于国难之后寻求精神归宿的普遍路径。
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逍遥暂喜息奔忙。
Carefree and briefly glad, I at last get rest from long years of rushing about.
逍遥自在,暂且欢喜,终于可以歇一歇长年的奔波劳碌。
Carefree, for a moment I am glad to rest from the rushing to and fro.
此句以暂喜点出全诗情感基调,喜是真切的,暂字却泄露了心底的清醒与无奈:尘网难脱,奔忙无尽,这份清闲只是浮生中的一段小憩。逍遥本《庄子》语,用在这里,把道家追求的超脱落实为一时一地的体感。一个暂字,使得简单的喜有了层次,欢乐与怅惘并生,是宋人善于在虚字里藏情的典型笔法。且逍遥二字既出,则下文清虚一炷香之神理,已于此预伏,全篇由奔忙而逍遥、而清虚,一层进一层,正是道家损之又损、以至于无为之义的詩化表达,读此句当知全诗主意所在,喜字不过其表,暂字方见其里。
This line points out the poem's emotional key in the word for a moment glad: the gladness is real, yet the word for a moment betrays the sober clarity and helplessness of the heart - the dusty net is hard to escape, the rushing toil endless, and this leisure is but a short rest in a floating life. Carefree originally is Zhuangzi's word, used here to land the transcendence the Taoists seek as the bodily feeling of one place and one time. The single word for a moment gives the simple gladness layers, joy and wistfulness born together, the typical Song way of hiding feeling in function words. Moreover, once the two words carefree appear, the spirit of the later clear void and one stick of incense is already laid here; the whole poem moves from rushing to and fro to carefree, to the clear void, layer upon layer, exactly the poetized expression of the Taoist meaning of diminishing and again diminishing until reaching non-action. Reading this line, one knows the poem's main bent: the word gladness is but the surface, and the word for a moment the within.
无人共饮山村酒,只对清虚一炷香。
There is no one to drink the mountain-village wine with, so I face only the realm of pure emptiness and one burning stick of incense.
山村里买来的酒,却无人可以共饮,只能独自面对道家清虚的境界,守着一炉清香。
No one to share the village wine; I face, alone, the clear void and one stick of incense.
转合两句一抑一扬,无人共饮写独游的落寞,酒而无伴,更见冷清;只对清虚一炷香则笔锋一转,由孤寂翻入超然,一炷清香,独对清虚,于无人处自得妙趣。只字把万般俗念悉数屏去,境界由尘世的山村转入道门的清境,全诗也在这一静中收束,余香袅袅,回味无穷。尤妙者,酒本为破愁之物,无人共饮则愁不可破;香本为通真之具,独对一炷则真自可通,同一独处,前一句见其落寞,后一句见其自得,而落寞与自得之间,正是作者心境由俗转清的过程,二十八字中写尽一层人生境界的升迁,读之令人有出尘之想。
The turning and closing two lines, one depressing one raising. No one to share the village wine writes the loneliness of the solitary wandering, wine without a companion, the more showing the coldness. The second turns the brush, I face, alone, the clear void and one stick of incense, turning from loneliness into transcendence: one stick of clear incense, alone facing the clear void, winning a subtle delight in the place where no one is. The single word alone screens away all manner of vulgar thoughts, the realm turning from the dusty mountain village to the clear realm of the Way gate, and the whole poem closes in this stillness, the lingering scent curling, unending in aftertaste. What is more beautiful is that wine is originally the thing to break grief, and with no one to share it the grief cannot be broken; incense is originally the vessel to reach truth, and alone facing one stick the truth of itself can be reached. The same solitude - the former line shows the loneliness, the latter the self-delight; between the loneliness and the self-delight is exactly the process of the author's frame of mind turning from vulgar to clear, writing in twenty-eight characters the rise of a whole realm of life, giving the reader the thought of leaving the dust.
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柳宗元诗孤舟蓑笠翁,独钓寒江雪,于万径人踪灭的极静中写一人之孤绝,意境寒峭,是贬谪士大夫傲岸不屈的写照;曹勋此诗无人共饮山村酒,只对清虚一炷香,于山间道观中写一人之清寂,意境冲和,是倦游士大夫涤荡尘虑的寄托。同是独处,柳诗孤而烈,曹诗静而淡,一近儒者之孤耿,一近道者之虚静,对读可见唐人绝句与宋人绝句在题材同构下心境之异。柳诗之境是天地独与我相对,故其静中有傲;曹诗之境是山水与我相忘,故其静中有淡,一傲一淡,正是儒道两家精神在诗中的分流,而对读两诗,亦可见同为独处,处境同而心源异,诗格遂判,此亦诗史一大关节。
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李白诗众鸟高飞尽,孤云独去闲,相看两不厌,只有敬亭山,以山为友,于无人的寂寥中觅得物我两忘的知己感,豪迈洒脱;曹勋诗则以清虚一炷香为对,以道家境界为归,于无人的落寞中求得超然自适的宁静。李诗是仙家的狂放,曹诗是道门的清修,同一独坐山中的母题,一纵一敛,正是盛唐之雄奇与南宋之涵澹的对照。李白独坐而能相看不厌,是以有情之我遇有情之山;曹勋独对而止于一炷香,是以无求之我契无为之境,前者物我皆雄,后者物我皆淡,时代精神之变迁,于此两首诗的对读中昭然可见,而独处自得之乐,则两诗所同。