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元 Yuan · 散曲 Sanqu song

水仙子·咏江南

Water Nymph · Chanting the Southland

张养浩

Zhang Yanghao

写景scenery 闲适leisure and ease

一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐,芰荷丛一段秋光淡。
看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘。
画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐。
爱杀江南。

A river of misty water mirrors the clear haze on the hills;
on both banks the houses join their painted eaves;
among the water-chestnut and lotus beds a stretch of autumn light lies pale.
Watch the sandbank gulls dance again and again,
while a scented wind rolls up ten miles of pearl blinds.
A painted barge comes in from the sky's edge;
a wineshop banner flutters out on the breeze.
How I love this southland to death.
Listen

Meaning

A whole river of misty water mirrors the clear haze on the hills; on both banks the houses join eave to painted eave; and from the beds of water-chestnut and lotus a stretch of pale autumn light shows through. Watch the sandbank gulls rise and dance again and again, and the fragrant wind roll up ten miles of pearl blinds. A painted pleasure-boat comes in from the edge of the sky, and a wineshop banner flutters out on the breeze. Truly I love this southland to death.

一江烟波水光映照着晴日山岚,两岸的人家屋檐连着画檐,菱荷丛中透出一段澹淡秋光。看那沙鸥再三起舞,十里香风卷起珠帘。画船儿从天边驶来,酒旗儿在风外招展。真是爱煞了这江南。

Appreciation

This song works by massing images and by letting stillness give birth to motion. The first three lines spread out an autumn dwelling-scene of water, houses and lotus beds, moving from far to near in cool, pale colours. With the gulls that dance and the wind that rolls up the blinds the picture begins to move, and the painted barge and the wineshop banner add a touch of ordinary town life. The closing cry of love is pure vernacular speech, and it shows the true colour of the sanqu song.

【白话串讲】 “一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐”——张养浩写江南:烟水照着晴岚,两岸人家画檐相接。“芰荷丛一段秋光淡”——“画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐”——画船从天边来,酒旗在风里飘。“爱杀江南”——他爱死江南了。 【意象与手法】 此曲善用列锦与动静相生。起三句以水光、人家、荷丛铺开秋居图,由远及近、设色淡雅 【情感与主旨】 张养浩为元代名臣、散曲大家,晚年数度辞官归隐,放情山水。此曲当为南游或任职江南时所作,以〔水仙子〕咏秋景 【名句点睛】 散曲赏析重点。其一,层次:梳理'江—岸—荷—鸥—风—船—旗'铺排,体会由静到动、自然到市井。其二,炼字

Background

Zhang Yanghao was a famous official of the Yuan and one of the great masters of sanqu; in his later years he resigned office several times and gave himself to landscape. This song was probably written while he was travelling or serving in the south, and uses the Water Nymph tune to sing of autumn. Unlike his Sheep on the Mountain Slope: Meditation at Tong Pass, with its grief over the rise and fall of dynasties, this piece is pure delight and ease, reflecting the composure of his retirement and the Yuan taste for making a song out of whatever lies before the eye. It is a representative work of the leisure school, fit to stand beside Ma Zhiyuan and Bai Pu.

《水仙子·咏江南》为元代张养浩所作,是写江南水乡之景、赞江南之美的散曲。张养浩(1270—1329),字希孟,济南人,元代散曲家。此曲:一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐,芰荷丛一段秋光淡。看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘。画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐。爱杀江南!全曲写江南水乡之景,是张养浩散曲的名篇。

Art

This song is skilled in the massing of images and in making stillness breed motion. The opening three lines lay out an autumn dwelling-place with the light on the water, the houses along the banks and the lotus beds, working from distance to nearness in pale, elegant colour. 'Watch the sandbank gulls dance again and again, while a scented wind rolls up ten miles of pearl blinds' turns to movement, and the verbs for dancing and rolling bring the whole picture to life. 'A painted barge comes in from the sky's edge; a wineshop banner flutters out on the breeze' dots the scene with the life of the town, and the colloquial diminutive attached to barge and banner adds a homely charm. The close, a plain vernacular cry of love for the southland, is direct statement, and shows the native colour of the sanqu song.

《水仙子·咏江南》艺术上以江南水乡的描摹与赞美的热烈见长。全曲分三节:首写江南之景——“一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐,芰荷丛一段秋光淡”写烟水晴岚、画檐相接、芰荷秋光;中写江上之趣——“看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘”写沙鸥飞舞、香风珠帘,“画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐”写画船天边至、酒旗风中飐;末写赞美——“爱杀江南”写爱杀江南。全曲以江南之景写赞美之情,正是张养浩散曲热烈清丽的笔法。

Allusions

The song takes what lies before the eye, yet its images all have a tradition behind them. The water-chestnut and lotus come from the Songs of Chu, where the poet 'cuts water-chestnut and lotus to make a coat', and stand for purity. Painted eaves and pearl blinds are Tang and Song images of wealth and elegance; the wineshop banner has been a fixture of southern scenery since Tang poetry. The sandbank gull carries the leisured, retired sense of Du Fu's 'one gull between heaven and earth' and of Su Shi's league with the gulls and egrets. All this is absorbed without a seam, so that familiar images yield a new scene, which is exactly the sanqu virtue of being popular without being vulgar.

《水仙子·咏江南》用典少而取景自然。“水仙子”为曲牌名;“晴岚”写晴日山间之气;“画檐”写彩绘之檐。全曲以这些意象写江南水乡,不用深典而清丽自见,正是张养浩散曲的笔法。

Commentary

The Ming prince Zhu Quan, in his Correct Sounds of Great Harmony, said that Zhang Yanghao's songs were 'like a jade tree in the wind', clear, distant and richly suggestive. The modern scholar Ren Zhongmin, in his Outline of Sanqu, praised him for 'writing scenery like a painting, in native and natural colours'. This song has always been the famous Yuan song on the southland, ranked with Ma Zhiyuan's Sky-Clear Sand: Autumn Thoughts and Bai Pu's Sky-Clear Sand: Autumn; critics call it 'a painting made by massing images, elegance achieved through the common tongue', and take it as the representative leisure song of the Yuan.

《水仙子·咏江南》是张养浩散曲的名篇,也是元曲中写江南之景的代表作。此曲写江南水乡之景、赞江南之美,向为论者称道。论者多赏其江南水乡的描摹与赞美的热烈——“一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐”写烟水画檐,清丽之极;“看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘”写沙鸥珠帘,更见其趣;“画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐”写画船酒旗,尤见江南之丽。张养浩以散曲著称,此曲正以清丽热烈之笔写江南之美,是元曲咏江南的代表作。

Prosody

Form Sanqu, a single song to the tune Water Nymph in the shuangdiao mode散曲(水仙子)
Rhyme One northern rhyme throughout (haze, eaves, pale, again, blinds, flutters, southland)《水仙子·咏江南》为元散曲(水仙子),押平声韵。此曲用韵:岚、檐、淡、三、帘、飐、南(盐部),一韵到底,音节清丽。
Tone pattern Northern songs observe no strict level-oblique rule; the lines are of uneven length and padding words are free散曲以音节清丽、情致明快见长。此曲咏江南之景,音节清丽而明快。全曲以曲语贯底,声调与江南之美的内容相合,是张养浩散曲中清丽的一路。
Reading note Zhang Yanghao's famous scenic song, a painting made of massed images, native and natural.《水仙子·咏江南》为元代张养浩所作,是写江南水乡之景、赞江南之美的散曲。此曲以“一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐”写江南之景,以“看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘”写江南之趣,以“爱杀江南”写赞美之情。咏江南之美,正是张养浩散曲的名篇。

Line by line

一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐,芰荷丛一段秋光淡。

A river of misty water mirroring the sunny mountain haze; on both banks, homes with painted eaves joined; in the lotus beds, a stretch of autumn light, faint.

一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐,芰荷丛一段秋光淡。

A river of misty water reflects the sunny mountain haze; on both banks, the houses' painted eaves join; among the lotus clumps, a stretch of pale autumn light.

首写江南之景,是全曲咏江南的起点。“一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐”写烟水画檐——“一江烟水照晴岚”写一江烟水照晴岚(山气),“两岸人家接画檐”写两岸人家彩檐相接——一江烟水,两岸画檐;“芰荷丛一段秋光淡”写芰荷秋光——“芰荷丛一段秋光淡”写芰荷丛中一段淡荡秋光——芰荷丛一段秋光淡。三句写江南之景:一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐,芰荷丛一段秋光淡。以“一江烟水照晴岚”写江上烟水映晴岚,以“两岸人家接画檐”写两岸人家画檐相接,以“芰荷丛一段秋光淡”写芰荷丛中秋光淡荡,正是张养浩散曲写江南之景清丽的起点——江南水乡,如画初展。

The opening writes the Jiangnan scene, the starting point of the song's ode. 'A river of misty water mirroring the sunny mountain haze; on both banks, homes with painted eaves joined' — the misty water and sunny haze, the colored eaves of the houses on both banks; 'in the lotus beds, a stretch of autumn light, faint' — the lotus clumps in their pale autumn glow. Misty water reflecting the haze, painted eaves joined, the pale autumn light among the lotuses — the point from which Zhang Yanghao begins: the Jiangnan water country, like a painting first unfurled.

看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘。

Watch the sand gulls dance, again and again; the fragrant wind rolls through ten li of pearl curtains.

看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘。

Watch the sand gulls dance, again and again; the fragrant wind rolls up the pearl curtains for ten li.

此二句写沙鸥珠帘,是全曲写江南之趣的深化。“看沙鸥舞再三”写沙鸥飞舞——“看沙鸥舞再三”写看沙鸥再三飞舞——看沙鸥舞再三;“卷香风十里珠帘”写香风珠帘——“卷香风十里珠帘”写卷起香风、十里珠帘——卷香风十里珠帘。二句写沙鸥珠帘:看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘。以“看沙鸥舞再三”写沙鸥飞舞之自在,以“卷香风十里珠帘”写香风十里、珠帘轻卷之丽,正是张养浩散曲写江南之趣的深化——沙鸥自在,香风珠帘。

These two lines write the gulls and curtains, deepening the Jiangnan charm. 'Watch the sand gulls dance, again and again' — the gulls' free flight; 'the fragrant wind rolls through ten li of pearl curtains' — the scented wind, the lightly rolled pearl screens. The gulls at ease, the scented wind and curtains — the deepened charm of Jiangnan.

画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐。爱杀江南!

The painted boat comes from the edge of the sky; the wine banner flutters in the wind. How I love Jiangnan!

画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐。爱杀江南!

The painted boat arrives from the edge of the sky; the wine banner waves in the wind. I love Jiangnan to distraction!

末写画船酒旗、爱杀江南,是全曲咏江南之美的归结。“画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐”写画船酒旗——“画船儿天边至”写画船自天边而来,“酒旗儿风外飐”写酒旗在风中招展——画船天边至,酒旗风中飐;“爱杀江南”写爱杀江南——“爱杀江南”写爱极了江南——爱杀江南。三句写画船酒旗、爱杀江南:画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐,爱杀江南。以“画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐”写画船自远而来、酒旗随风招展之江南繁华,以“爱杀江南”直抒赞美,正是张养浩散曲写咏江南的归结——江南之美,爱不可言。

The closing writes the boat and banner, the love for Jiangnan, the resolution of the ode. 'The painted boat comes from the edge of the sky; the wine banner flutters in the wind' — the craft from afar, the banner streaming; 'how I love Jiangnan!' the outright praise. The boat from the horizon, the banner in the wind, the love beyond words — the resolution of the ode.

Study

Word focus

晴岚 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “一江烟水照晴岚”之“晴岚”,写晴日山间之气,是全曲写江南水气缥缈的关键词。“晴岚”写晴天山间的雾气——一江烟水照晴岚。这一词写山气之清:不是阴晦之气,而晴岚;不是可状之霭,而晴日之岚。以“一江烟水照晴岚,两岸人家接画檐”写烟水映岚、画檐相接,正是张养浩散曲写江南之景的笔法。
画檐 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “两岸人家接画檐”之“画檐”,写彩绘之檐,是全曲写江南水乡之美建筑的关键词。“画檐”写彩画的屋檐——两岸人家接画檐。这一词写檐之美:不是素朴之檐,而画檐;不是孤悬之宇,而相接连绵。以“两岸人家接画檐”写两岸人家画檐相接,正是张养浩散曲写江南水乡之美的笔法。
沙鸥舞再三 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “看沙鸥舞再三”之“沙鸥舞再三”,写沙鸥再三飞舞,是全曲写江南之趣的意象词。“沙鸥”写沙上之鸥,“舞再三”写再三飞舞——看沙鸥再三飞舞。这一词写鸥之趣:不是静立之鸥,而沙鸥舞再三;不是一次之舞,而再三自适。以“看沙鸥舞再三,卷香风十里珠帘”写沙鸥自在、香风珠帘,正是张养浩散曲写江南之趣的笔法。
爱杀江南 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “爱杀江南”之“爱杀江南”,写爱极了江南,是全曲咏江南的归结词。“爱杀”写爱极(杀为极甚之词)——“爱杀江南”写爱极了江南。这一词写爱之极:不是寻常之爱,而爱杀江南;不是可抑之情,而爱不可言。以“画船儿天边至,酒旗儿风外飐。爱杀江南”写江南之丽而直抒爱杀,正是张养浩散曲写咏江南的归结。

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Both are his, one an easy song of scenery and one a brooding meditation on the past, showing the two faces of his art.

张养浩《山坡羊·骊山怀古》写骊山怀古,与本首同为张养浩散曲。差异在主题:水仙子咏江南咏江南之美;骊山怀古咏骊山之史。一写“景”之丽,一写“史”之叹。两者并读,可见张养浩散曲写景与怀古的两种主题。

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此处关联张养浩《雁儿落兼得胜令·退隐》,与本首在主题、体裁或作者上相关联,可对比阅读以见其同异。