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长干曲四首 一

The, Song, of, the, Changgan, Four, Poems, No. 1

崔颢

Cui Hao

君家何处住妾住在横塘停船暂借问或恐是同乡

Where, does, your, home, dwell,
I, live, at, the, Hengtang.
Stopping, the, boat, I, ask, for, a, while,
Perhaps, we, are, from, the, same, country.
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Meaning

A poem of the boat and the asking, written by Cui Hao. Where does your home dwell, I live at the Hengtang — the asking of the opening. Stopping the boat I ask for a while, perhaps we are from the same country — the hope of the close. The poem is the boat and the asking: the home, the boat, and the close's same country.

君家何处住,妾住在横塘。停船暂借问,或恐是同乡。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] Where, does, your, home, dwell, I, live, at, the, Hengtang. Stopping, the, boat, I, ask, for, a, while, perhaps, we, are, from, the, same, country. [Structure and Thought] The poem moves from the asking of the home and the telling of the Hengtang, through the stopping of the boat, to the close's the hope of the same country. [Key Technique] The poem's art is the close of the hope: stopping the boat I ask for a while, and the close's perhaps we are from the same country — the boat gathered in the asking and the close's hope. [Emotional Tone] Plain, warm, and hopeful: the poem is the home, the boat and the close's same country.

【白话串讲】 崔颢写《长干曲四首其一》:“君家何处住,妾住在横塘”——“停船暂借问,或恐是同乡”——他写长干曲——或恐是同乡。 【意象与手法】 首句“君家何处住”写女子问男子家住何处;次句“妾住在横塘”写女子自报家住横塘;三句“停船暂借问”写停船暂问;末句“或恐是同乡”写或恐是同乡。以问乡写江南儿女的情致。 【情感与主旨】 崔颢写江南水乡男女的问答,清新而隽永,是乐府诗的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“君家何处住,妾住在横塘”写江南儿女相逢;“停船暂借问,或恐是同乡”写借问情趣。

Background

Cui Hao (c. 704-754), the poet of the Tang, wrote this 'The, Song, of, the, Changgan, No. 1' of the boat and the asking — the encounter of the two boats. The asking of the home with the telling of the Hengtang, and the close's the hope of the same country — the poem gathers the warmth of the poet, the simplicity of the river folk. The poem is one of the famous works of the poet's poems of the folk songs.

此诗为盛唐诗人崔颢的《长干曲四首》其一之作,是乐府诗的名篇。崔颢(约704—754),汴州(今河南开封)人,盛唐诗人,开元十一年(723)进士,其《黄鹤楼》为唐人七律之冠。长干曲为乐府旧题,长干为金陵(今南京)里巷名,地近长江,居民多以舟为业。此诗写江南水乡的男女问答,是民歌体的乐府:「君家何处住」,写你家住何处——女子问男子,家住何处;「妾住在横塘」,写妾家住横塘——横塘为金陵(一说在今南京西南)地名,与长干相近,女子自报家住横塘;「停船暂借问」,写停船暂问——那女子,停船相问;「或恐是同乡」,写或恐是同乡——那问的缘故,或是恐怕同乡。全诗以问乡写江南儿女的情致,二十字写尽水乡的相逢与情思,清新而隽永,是乐府诗「民歌清新」的代表作。要理解此诗,须知长干曲为乐府旧题,本写金陵水乡男女之情,崔颢此组四首以民歌对答之体写水乡相逢,一唱一和,正见南朝乐府《西洲曲》一类的清新传统。此首写女子发问,以「君家何处住」直入相逢,以「或恐是同乡」托出情思,正是民歌「欲说还休」的含蓄笔法。

Art

The poem's art is the art of the asking. The home opens: where, does, your, home, dwell — the dwelling of the home; I, live, at, the, Hengtang — the Hengtang of the living. The hope follows: stopping, the, boat, I, ask, for, a, while — the stopping of the boat; perhaps, we, are, from, the, same, country — the same country of the perhaps — the home, the boat and the close's hope, gathered in the poem.

此诗艺术上以「对话传神」与「含蓄隽永」为特色,在男女问答的描绘中写尽江南儿女的情致。首句「君家何处住」,以「君家何处住」写女子问男子——那一声问,是女子的发问,「何处住」写问家住何处,起笔即是对话,直入水乡的相逢;次句「妾住在横塘」,以「妾住在横塘」写女子自报——那女子,自报家住横塘,「妾」写自称,「横塘」写地名,正是自报家门的爽朗;三句「停船暂借问」,以「停船暂借问」写停船相问——「停船」写停下船,「借问」写请问,正是水乡的相逢;末句「或恐是同乡」,以「或恐是同乡」写问的缘故——「或恐」写恐怕,「同乡」写同乡之人,那问的缘故,正是恐怕同乡。全诗由问写起,经自报、停船,而归于「或恐是同乡」的情思,对话传神、含蓄隽永,那问的缘故不直说,正是「或恐是同乡」的含蓄,正是乐府诗「民歌清新」的极致。细观其章法,二十字之中,只写问答而不写情思,而那「或恐是同乡」的托词,正是情思的所在——以问写情,以托词写心,正是民歌「不着一字,尽得风流」的笔法。

Allusions

'The Hengtang' (heng tang) is the Hengtang — the dyke of the Hengtang, the home of the lady; 'the stopping of the boat' (ting chuan) is the stopping of the boat — the stopping of the boat, the asking of the traveler; 'the same country' (tong xiang) is the same country — the same native land, the hope of the close.

此诗用典于关键处见深意。「长干」,写长干里——长干为金陵(今南京)里巷名,地近长江,乐府旧题有《长干曲》,写金陵水乡男女之情,「长干曲四首」写长干里的儿女。「横塘」,写横塘——横塘为金陵地名(今南京西南,一说在江宁),与长干相近,「妾住在横塘」写女子家住横塘。「同乡」,写同乡之人——「同乡」写同乡之人,那「或恐是同乡」的问,正是江南水乡儿女的情思。值得注意的是,长干与横塘,皆是金陵的水乡地名,又皆见于乐府民歌——「长干」见于《长干曲》,「横塘」见于《吴声歌曲·懊侬歌》一类的水乡歌谣,那「家住横塘」的女子,正是水乡歌谣中的女儿,那「同乡」之问,正是水乡相逢的情思。这些意象,或写长干、或写横塘、或写同乡,皆围绕江南水乡与儿女情致这一核心,织成一张清新隽永的情网,正是乐府诗「以地写情」的特点。此外,此诗之用「横塘」,亦有深意——横塘与长干同属金陵水乡,古乐府中常以「横塘」写女儿之居,那女子以「横塘」自报家门,正是以地名自见其身世,也正是「借问」之由的含蓄暗示。

Commentary

This poem is one of the famous works of Cui Hao's poems of the folk songs, quoted for the plainness of its speech and the warmth of its close. The stopping of the boat, and the perhaps of the same country, are among the admired passages of the poet's poems. Critics praise the poem's plainness: the asking gathered in the boat, to the close's hope.

读此诗,最值得注意的是「停船暂借问,或恐是同乡」所写出的「水乡相逢的含蓄情致」。那江南水乡,男女舟行江上,萍水相逢。那女子,先发问「君家何处住」——你家住何处?这问,直截了当,正是民歌的爽朗。接着自报「妾住在横塘」——我住在横塘。而「停船暂借问,或恐是同乡」——停下船来暂问一声,或恐是同乡。这一「或恐」,是全诗的关键:那问的缘故,不是别的,而是恐怕同乡。但这「或恐是同乡」的托词,正是民歌的含蓄——那女子停船相问,说是恐怕同乡,而真正的情思,正在这「同乡」的托词之外。水乡儿女的情致,不在「爱慕」之明言,而在「同乡」之托词——那「停船暂借问」的主动,那「或恐是同乡」的托词,正是江南儿女情思的含蓄。崔颢《长干曲》四首,此首写女子的发问,后首写男子的回答,一唱一和,正是民歌的对答。那「君家何处住」的直问,那「或恐是同乡」的托词,正是乐府民歌「清新含蓄」的极致。

Prosody

Form A quatrain of the folk song (wu yan jue ju)诗(五言绝句)
Rhyme The poem rhymes on the level of the group — the cadence of the quatrain that carries the plain warmth.此诗为五言绝句,押平声「阳」部韵,「塘」「乡」等字皆属下平七阳韵,韵脚悠长而圆润,正合诗情「江南情致」的声调。首句「君家何处住」以「君家何处住」起,写女子发问;次句「妾住在横塘」,写自报家门;三句「停船暂借问」,写停船相问;末句「或恐是同乡」,以「同乡」收束,写问的缘故。整体声调由起句的发问,到末句的情思,悠长而圆润,正合乐府诗「民歌清新」的诗情。
Tone pattern The cadence is that of the asking: the level opening with the home, the turning with the boat, and the close's fall with the same country.句式上,此诗全用口语对话:「君家何处住,妾住在横塘」,以「君家」「妾住」相对,一问他家、一自报家,句法自然如对话;「停船暂借问,或恐是同乡」,以「停船」「或恐」写动态与推测,转折而见含蓄。全诗由问写起,经自报、停船,而归于「或恐是同乡」的情思,句式自然如话、对话传神,正是乐府诗「民歌清新」的节奏美学。
Reading note The poem's sound matches its plainness: the cadences of the quatrain, and the close — 'huo kong shi tong xiang' — falls with the country, the sound of the hope of the boat folk.作为盛唐五绝,《长干曲四首·其一》的声律之美,在于以悠长的阳韵与自然如话的句式,写出江南水乡儿女的情致。全诗首句「君家何处住」以女子发问起笔,直入水乡的相逢;次句「妾住在横塘」以自报家门相接,爽朗而自然;三句「停船暂借问」以停船相问写动态,含蓄而隽永;末句「或恐是同乡」以或恐同乡写问的缘故,含蓄而情致。全诗由问写起,经自报、停船,而归于「或恐是同乡」的情思,层层递进而声情相谐,正是乐府诗「民歌清新」的体现。就全诗而言,此诗以水乡问答写江南儿女的情致,清新而隽永,是乐府诗的名篇,与崔颢《长干曲·其二》「家临九江水」同为长干曲之作,而一写女子的发问,一写男子的回答,一唱一和,可见崔颢《长干曲》写江南儿女的民歌笔法,也可见乐府民歌「清新含蓄」的极致。

Line by line

君家何处住

Where do you live, sir?

君家何处住?

Where is your home, sir?

这一句是此诗的起笔,写女子问男子家住何处,是此诗对话的开端。「君家」,写您家——「君」写对男子的尊称,「家」写家,「君家」写您家;「何处住」,写何处住——「何处」写什么地方,「住」写居住,「何处住」写家住何处。以「君家何处住」写发问,比直写「问路」更见主动与直率——那女子,先发问,问男子家住何处,正是民歌的爽朗;「君家何处住」五字,写女子的发问,正是「妾住在横塘」的铺垫——那女子问完,便自报家住横塘,一唱一和,正是水乡相逢的开端。

This line is the poem's opening, writing the woman asking the man where he lives, the dialogue's beginning. Your home writes your household - sir, the respectful address to a man, home. Where do you live writes where dwelling. Using where do you live, sir to write the question is more active and straightforward than directly saying asking the way - that woman, asking first, asking the man's home, precisely the folk song's briskness. Where do you live, sir five characters write the woman's question, precisely preparing I live at Hengtang - that woman, after asking, gives her own home at Hengtang; one sings one answers, precisely the water-town meeting's beginning.

妾住在横塘

I live at Hengtang.

妾家住横塘。

I live at Hengtang.

这一句写女子自报家住横塘,是此诗女子情致的核心。「妾住」,写妾家住——「妾」写女子自称,「住」写居住,「妾住」写妾家所住;「在横塘」,写横塘——「横塘」为金陵地名(今南京西南,一说在江宁),与长干相近,「在横塘」写住横塘。以「妾住在横塘」写自报,比直写「家住南京」更见地名与爽朗——那女子,自报家住横塘,正是水乡儿女的爽朗;「横塘」二字,写金陵地名,正是长干水乡的儿女。这一句,是此诗女子情致的核心,与「君家何处住」相对,一问他家,一自报家,正是水乡相逢的对答——那女子问完便自报,正是「停船暂借问」的铺垫。

This line writes the woman giving her home at Hengtang, the core of her charm. I live writes my dwelling - I, the woman's self-address, live. At Hengtang writes Hengtang - Hengtang is a Jinling place (today's southwest Nanjing, one reading in Jiangning), near Changgan. Using I live at Hengtang to write the self-giving is more place-name and brisk than directly saying I live in Nanjing - that woman, giving her home at Hengtang, precisely the water-town child's briskness. Hengtang two characters write the Jinling place, precisely the Changgan water-town child. This line is the core of her charm, set against where do you live, sir: one asking his home, one giving hers, precisely the water-town meeting's exchange - that woman, after asking, gives her home, precisely preparing I stop my boat to ask you a moment.

或恐是同乡

I thought maybe we are from the same hometown.

或恐是同乡。

I was hoping we might be from the same village.

这一句是全诗的结穴,写或恐是同乡,是此诗含蓄情思的最高点。「或恐」,写恐怕——「或恐」写或许恐怕,正是「或恐是同乡」的推测;「是同乡」,写是同乡——「同乡」写同乡之人,「是同乡」写或恐是同乡。以「或恐是同乡」写问的缘故,比直写「爱慕」更见含蓄与托词——那问的缘故,不是别的,而是恐怕同乡,正是民歌的含蓄;「或恐」二字,写推测与托词,正是水乡儿女情思的含蓄。这一结句,含蓄隽永,是此诗含蓄情思的最高点,也是「停船暂借问」的回应——那停船相问,说是恐怕同乡,而那真正的情思,正在「同乡」的托词之外,正是乐府民歌「清新含蓄」的极致。

This line is the poem's knot, writing I thought maybe we are from the same hometown, the reserved feeling's highest point. I thought writes perhaps - perhaps, the speculation of I thought maybe we are from the same hometown. From the same hometown writes the fellow townsman. Using I thought maybe we are from the same hometown to write the question's reason is more reserved and pretext than directly saying admiration - that question's reason is nothing else but perhaps fellow townsman, precisely the folk song's reserve. I thought two characters write the speculation and pretext, precisely the water-town child's reserved feeling. This closing line is reserved and meaningful, the feeling's highest point, also answering I stop my boat to ask you a moment - that stopping the boat to ask, saying perhaps fellow townsman; yet the true feeling lies beyond the fellow-townsman pretext, precisely the yuefu folk song's freshness and reserve extreme.

Study

Word focus

借问 'The, asking' — the asking of the boat, the stopping of the traveler. 「停船暂借问」之「借问」,写请问,是此诗对话意象的关键语。「借问」即请问——「借」写借,本有谦敬之意,「问」写询问,「借问」写请问,正是客气的问询;「停船暂借问」,写停船暂问。以「借问」写发问,比直写「问」更见客气与委婉——那女子,停船相问,正是水乡相逢的客气;「借问」二字,写请问,正是「或恐是同乡」的铺垫。这一词,是此诗对话意象的关键,与「停船」「暂」相连,一写停船,一写暂问,正是水乡相逢的动态——那女子停船,暂问一声,正是江南儿女的情致。
横塘 'The, Hengtang' — the dyke of the Hengtang, the home of the lady. 「妾住在横塘」之「横塘」,写金陵地名,是此诗江南意象的核心语。「横塘」为金陵地名——横塘在今南京西南,一说在江宁,与长干相近,「妾住在横塘」写女子家住横塘。以「横塘」写地名,比直写「金陵」更见水乡与具体——那横塘,正是金陵的水乡,女子家住横塘,正是长干水乡的儿女;「横塘」二字,写金陵地名,正是「君家何处住」的对照——一个问何处住,一个报横塘,正是水乡相逢的地名对答。这一词,是此诗江南意象的核心,与「长干」相连,一写长干,一写横塘,正是金陵水乡的地名,也是江南儿女情致的背景。
同乡 'The, same, country' — the same native land, the hope of the close. 「或恐是同乡」之「同乡」,写同乡之人,是此诗含蓄情思的核心语。「同乡」即同乡之人——「同」写相同,「乡」写家乡,「同乡」写同乡之人;「或恐是同乡」,写或恐是同乡。以「同乡」写问的缘故,比直写「认识」更见乡土与含蓄——那问的缘故,正是恐怕同乡,正是水乡相逢的情思;「同乡」二字,写同乡之人,正是「或恐」的推测对象,也是「停船暂借问」的托词。这一词,是此诗含蓄情思的核心,也是全诗情思的落脚点——那女子停船相问,说是恐怕同乡,而那真正的情思,正在这「同乡」的托词之外,正是乐府民歌的含蓄。

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李白《长干行》「妾发初覆额,折花门前剧。郎骑竹马来,绕床弄青梅。同居长干里,两小无嫌猜」,写长干里的婚恋,是乐府诗的名篇;崔颢此诗「妾住在横塘,或恐是同乡」,同样写长干水乡。一写「同居长干里」的婚恋,一写「或恐是同乡」的相逢;李白是「两小无嫌猜」的深情,崔颢是「停船暂借问」的含蓄。并读两作,可见「长干」这一母题在盛唐乐府中的两种情调,也可见水乡儿女从相逢到婚恋的两种情致。

杂诗·君自故乡来 The, Miscellaneous, Poem: You, Have, Come, from, the, Native, Land 王维 · 同为问乡之作,一写君自故乡来的问讯一写或恐是同乡的相逢,问乡母题互为映照 Related reading

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王维《杂诗·君自故乡来》「君自故乡来,应知故乡事。来日绮窗前,寒梅著花未」,写对故乡的问讯,是五绝的名篇;崔颢此诗「或恐是同乡」,同样写问乡。一写「应知故乡事」的问讯,一写「或恐是同乡」的相逢;王维是「寒梅著花未」的乡思,崔颢是「停船暂借问」的情致。并读两作,可见「问乡」这一母题在唐诗中的两种情致,也可见盛唐五绝写「问」的两种笔法。