唐 Tang · 诗 Poem
赠别·其一
Farewell - First
娉娉袅袅十三余,豆蔻梢头二月初。
春风十里扬州路,卷上珠帘总不如。
Along the ten-li Yangzhou road in the spring breeze, the beauties who roll up their pearl screens are none her equal.
Meaning
She is graceful and slender, a little past thirteen years; like the cardamom bud at the tip of the branch in early second month. Along the ten-li Yangzhou road in the spring breeze, the beauties who roll up their pearl screens are none her equal.
她身姿轻盈、十三岁多一些的年纪,正如二月初豆蔻枝头娇嫩的花苞。春风中十里扬州路,卷起珠帘的美人总也比不上她。
Appreciation
Du Mu's two 'Farewell' poems were written in the ninth year of Dahe (835), when Du Mu, at thirty-three, was about to leave Yangzhou for Chang'an — a gift to a courtesan. The first praises the beloved girl's loveliness; calling a girl of thirteen or fourteen 'cardamom bud' became a timeless phrase. Yangzhou was then prosperous, its singing-girls countless; Du Mu, downcast in a provincial post, roamed the gay quarters, and this poem shows both talent and a lingering reluctance to leave Yangzhou. The second poem writes the deeper parting feeling. A reader meets a gift that is at once gallant and graceful.
【白话串讲】 “娉娉袅袅十三余,豆蔻梢头二月初”——杜牧写一个十三岁的歌女,像二月初的豆蔻花。“春风十里扬州路,卷上珠帘总不如”——扬州十里春风,卷起珠帘看遍,都不如她。 【意象与手法】 起句'娉娉袅袅'叠韵联绵,状体态之轻盈柔美;'十三余'以数目点睛,娇憨如见 【情感与主旨】 《赠别》二首作于唐文宗大和九年(835),杜牧三十三岁,将离扬州赴长安,赠妓之作 【名句点睛】 本诗常考比喻与衬托。'豆蔻梢头二月初'以花喻人,考其如何以初春豆蔻写少女娇嫩年华,后成'豆蔻年华'熟语
Background
The two 'Farewell' poems were written in the ninth year of Dahe (835), when Du Mu, thirty-three, was about to leave Yangzhou for Chang'an — a gift to a courtesan. The first writes the loveliness of the girl he admired; using 'cardamom bud' for a girl of thirteen or fourteen became a timeless phrase. Yangzhou was then prosperous, its courtesans many; Du Mu, stuck in a low post, roamed the gay quarters, and this poem, amid the charming, shows his talent and a hidden reluctance at leaving Yangzhou. The second writes the parting feeling of 'much love seems like no love'.
《赠别·其一》为晚唐诗人杜牧所作。杜牧(803—约852),字牧之,京兆万年人,晚唐诗人,与李商隐并称“小李杜”。此诗为杜牧离扬州时赠别一位歌女之作:那女子娉娉袅袅,年方十三有余,正如二月初豆蔻梢头娇嫩的花苞;春风十里的扬州路上,卷起珠帘的美人总也比不上她。全诗以豆蔻写其青春娇美,以十里春风写其出类拔萃,是赠别诗中的名篇,也是写少女之美最传神的诗作之一。杜牧在扬州任职时与歌女交游,此诗既写其美,亦寓依依惜别之情。
Art
The opening 'graceful and slender' is a reduplicative, rhyming compound figuring the light, soft beauty of her bearing; 'a little past thirteen' dots the number, her coquettish charm vivid. The next line sets a metaphor, 'like the cardamom bud at the tip of the twig in early second month', comparing the girl to the early-spring bud not yet open — fitting in colour and fragrance, fresh and alive. The last two lines use the prosperity of 'the ten-li Yangzhou road in the spring breeze' as contrast; 'the beauties who roll up their pearl screens are none her equal' sets the many beauties' inferiority to this one woman's unique perfection — the brush is airy, not pressing, gorgeous yet not vulgar, exactly the romantic nature of young Du.
《赠别·其一》艺术上以比喻的精妙与衬托的手法见长。全诗四句,层层写来:“娉娉袅袅十三余”写其年龄与身姿——“娉娉袅袅”写其体态轻盈,“十三余”写其豆蔻年华;“豆蔻梢头二月初”写其娇嫩之美——以二月初豆蔻梢头之花苞喻其青春娇嫩,含苞待放;“春风十里扬州路”写扬州之繁华——“春风十里”写扬州路的繁华如春,“卷上珠帘总不如”写其出类拔萃——十里扬州、万千卷帘美人,总也比不上她。全诗以豆蔻喻其娇美,以十里扬州衬托其出类拔萃,比喻精妙而衬托有力,正是杜牧“小杜”诗才的体现。
Allusions
The poem brings 'cardamom' into verse; afterwards 'cardamom years' specifically means a girl of thirteen or fourteen — the poem's greatest coinage of allusion. Cardamom is a southern plant; the early-second-month bud at the twig-tip figures youth about to unfold. 'Ten-li spring breeze' is a common phrase writing the abundance of Yangzhou's singing-towers. The whole takes no old story but forges new words, comparing flower to person, wholly natural. 'Pearl screen' uses the traditional curtain image; 'rolling the screen' stands for the beauties leaning by the tower — a common device, not an obscure allusion.
《赠别·其一》用典在“豆蔻”。“豆蔻”为植物名,二月开花,花穗下垂,色浅红,比喻处女或少女年华;此处以“豆蔻梢头二月初”写少女之娇嫩,遂成千古名喻。“春风十里扬州路”写扬州之繁华——扬州为唐代繁华之地,“春风十里”写其路之繁华如春;“卷上珠帘”写美人居处——古时女子居处以珠帘为饰,卷帘见美人。全诗以豆蔻、珠帘这些传统的意象写少女之美,用喻精妙而不事雕琢,正是杜牧“俊爽”的风格。
Commentary
The Qing scholar Wang Shizhen praised the 'cardamom bud' line as 'truly able to exhaust Yangzhou's romance'. He Shang in his Wine-Garden Poetry Talks said 'young Du's couplet "ten-li spring breeze" deeply wins the intent of comparison and evocation'. This poem differs from Han Wo's Fragrant Collection — gorgeous yet with bone. Later some blamed its 'gay quarters' tone, yet admitted the 'cardamom' comparison became the settled judgment of ages. Hengtang Tuishi's Three Hundred Tang Poems also included it, to show a facet of late-Tang manner.
《赠别·其一》是杜牧赠别诗的名篇,也是唐诗中写少女之美最传神的诗作之一。此诗历代传诵,论者多赏其“娉娉袅袅十三余,豆蔻梢头二月初”的比喻——以豆蔻梢头写少女之娇嫩,遂成“豆蔻年华”这一成语的出处;“春风十里扬州路,卷上珠帘总不如”以十里扬州衬托其美,更见出类拔萃。杜牧在扬州时“十年一觉扬州梦”,此诗正是其扬州生活的写照。此诗与其二“蜡烛有心还惜别,替人垂泪到天明”同为赠别之作,一写其美,一写别情,并称名篇。
Prosody
Line by line
娉娉袅袅十三余,豆蔻梢头二月初。
Graceful and slender, just past thirteen; on the cardamom tip, early February.
她身姿轻盈、十三岁多一些的年纪,正如二月初豆蔻枝头娇嫩的花苞。
Lissome and graceful, barely past thirteen; like cardamom buds on the bough, early February.
首二句写少女之年龄与娇美。“娉娉袅袅十三余”写其年龄与身姿——“娉娉袅袅”写其体态轻盈婀娜,“十三余”写其豆蔻年华,一个“余”字更见其青春正好;“豆蔻梢头二月初”写其娇嫩之美——以二月初豆蔻梢头之花苞喻其青春娇嫩,含苞待放、娇艳欲滴。二句以“娉娉袅袅”的叠字写其态,以“豆蔻梢头”的妙喻写其美,把一位十三四岁的少女写得既具体又传神。以“二月初”写时节,更见其如春花初绽的鲜嫩。这一比喻精妙绝伦,遂成“豆蔻年华”的千古名喻。
The first two lines write the young girl's age and beauty. Graceful and slender, just past thirteen writes her age and bearing - graceful and slender writes her lithe, elegant form; just past thirteen writes her cardamom years, one past further showing the youth just right. On the cardamom tip, early February writes her tender beauty - using early-February cardamom-tip buds to metaphorize her youthful tenderness, buds half-opened, fresh and tempting. The two lines use graceful and slender's reduplication for her bearing, and cardamom tip's superb metaphor for her beauty, writing a girl of thirteen or fourteen both concrete and vivid. Using early February for the season further shows her freshness like spring flowers just opened. This metaphor is exquisite beyond compare, hence becoming the age-famous cardamom-years metaphor.
春风十里扬州路,卷上珠帘总不如。
Ten li of Yangzhou road in spring wind - all the beauties behind rolled pearl screens are not her.
春风中十里扬州路,卷起珠帘的美人总也比不上她。
Ten li of Yangzhou road in the spring breeze; all the beauties who roll up pearl screens fall short of her.
后二句写其出类拔萃,是全诗的衬托之笔。“春风十里扬州路”写扬州之繁华——“春风十里”写扬州路的繁华如春,美人如云;“卷上珠帘总不如”写其出类拔萃——“卷上珠帘”写美人居处,“总不如”写万千美人总也比不上她。二句以十里扬州的繁华衬托其美:春风十里、珠帘美人,何等繁华,而“总不如”三字,把她放在万千美人之上。这一衬托,把她的美写到极致——不是孤芳自赏,而是众芳难及。以“总不如”收束,既是赞美,亦是惜别:如此佳人,却将离别。这一笔含蓄不尽,为下首“蜡烛有心还惜别”的别情作了铺垫。
The last two lines write her preeminence, the poem's foil brush. Ten li of Yangzhou road in the spring breeze writes Yangzhou's prosperity - ten li of spring wind writes the Yangzhou road's prosperity like spring, beauties like clouds. All the beauties who roll up pearl screens fall short of her writes her preeminence - rolling up pearl screens writes the beauties' dwellings; all fall short writes the ten thousand beauties cannot match her. The two lines use ten-li Yangzhou's prosperity to set off her beauty: ten li spring wind, pearl-screen beauties, what prosperity, yet all fall short in three characters, placing her above ten thousand beauties. This foil writes her beauty to the extreme - not solitary self-admiration, but all flowers beyond reach. Closing in all fall short is at once praise and reluctant farewell: such a beauty, yet about to part. This brush is reserved and endless, preparing the next poem's candle has a heart and pities our parting's farewell feeling.
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Related Reading
The first writes beauty ('cardamom bud'), the second writes deep feeling ('much love seems like no love') — together twin gems of parting.
杜牧《赠别·其二》“蜡烛有心还惜别,替人垂泪到天明”以蜡烛写惜别之情,与本首(其一)同为一组。差异在内容:其一写少女之美,以豆蔻、春风写其娇美超群;其二写离别之情,以蜡烛垂泪写别情之深。一写“美”之态,一写“情”之深;一明丽一深婉。两诗并读,可见杜牧赠别诗的完整构思——先写其美,后写别情,美愈美而别愈难。
江南春 Spring in Jiangnan 杜牧 · 同为杜牧写扬州一带风物,一写景之阔大一写人之娇美 Related readingCompare this related work with the poem above through theme, imagery, tone, and emotional movement.
杜牧《江南春》“南朝四百八十寺,多少楼台烟雨中”写江南春景之阔大,与本首同为写江南之作。差异在内容:江南春写景,以千里莺啼、烟雨楼台写江南之阔大;赠别写人,以豆蔻梢头、春风十里写少女之娇美。一写“景”之宏,一写“人”之美。两诗并读,可见杜牧写江南的两副笔墨——写景则阔大,写人则明丽,皆见“小杜”的俊爽诗风。
早春呈水部张十八员外 Early Spring Presented to Zhang of the Water Department 韩愈 · 同为唐人写春日生机,一写少女之美一写草色之新 Related readingCompare this related work with the poem above through theme, imagery, tone, and emotional movement.
韩愈《早春呈水部张十八员外》“草色遥看近却无”写早春草色之新,与本首同为唐人写春日生机。差异在对象:杜牧写少女之美,以豆蔻写其娇嫩;韩愈写早春之景,以草色写其清新。一写“人”之春,一写“景”之春。两诗并读,可见唐人写春的两种生机——人物之春与草木之春。