寄韩谏议

Meaning

Du Fu, old, ill and far from court, writes to his friend Han, who has retired to the shores of Dongting. He mourns their separation, then builds a vast immortal spectacle to suggest his friend's true stature, that of a Zhang Liang, and ends with an urgent question: why does such a man hide by the autumn water instead of serving the state? The poem moves from private longing to public appeal.

如今我不快乐，思念岳阳；身欲奋飞，却病卧在床。美人娟娟，隔于秋水；濯足洞庭，望尽八荒。鸿飞冥冥，日月正白；青枫叶赤，天降霜寒。玉京群帝会集北斗，或骑麒麟，或翳凤凰。芙蓉旌旗，烟雾中飘落；影动倒景，摇荡潇湘。星宫之君醉饮琼浆，羽人稀少，不在其旁。似闻昨日之赤松子，恐是汉代的韩张良。昔随刘氏安定长安，帷幄未改，神采惨伤。国家成败，我岂敢言；色难腥腐，餐风饮香。周南留滞，古所惋惜；南极老人，应享寿昌。美人胡为隔于秋水，怎得安置于贡玉之堂？

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] I am joyless, thinking of you at Yueyang; I long to fly to you but sickness holds me in bed. You, so graceful, are beyond the autumn waters, washing your feet in Dongting and gazing over the world. Wild geese vanish into pale distance and maples redden under frost. In the Jade Capital the emperors gather at the Dipper, riding qilins and phoenixes, while the lord of the star palace drinks himself drunk. Are you now the immortal Red Pinezi, or are you still Han Zhangliang, the statesman? Once you settled Chang'an for the Liu house; your plans are unchanged, but your spirit is sadly hurt. Zhounan's stranded scholar was pitied of old, and may the Southern Pole star grant you long life. Fair one, why do you linger beyond the autumn water, and how can we place you in the Jade Hall? [Structure] Three movements: the reality of illness and longing; a soaring fantasy that elevates the friend; and a closing return to fact, his past service, his present wound, and a final plea. [Imagery] The center of gravity is the immortal procession, qilins, phoenixes, lotus banners, inverted skies. This is Du Fu at his most baroque, yet the fantasy is never decoration; it measures the friend's greatness. [Emotion] Beneath the splendor runs the heavy and checked tone of Du Fu's late style: sorrow stated plainly, then sublimated into spectacle, then spoken again as plea.

【白话串讲】 杜甫写《寄韩谏议》：“今我不乐思岳阳，身欲奋飞病在床”——“美人娟娟隔秋水，濯足洞庭望八荒”——“鸿飞冥冥日月白，青枫叶赤天雨霜”——“玉京群帝集北斗，或骑麒麟翳凤凰”——他寄韩谏议——身欲奋飞病在床。 【意象与手法】 “今我不乐思岳阳，身欲奋飞病在床”写思念之由；“美人娟娟隔秋水，濯足洞庭望八荒”写所思之人隔水难见；“鸿飞冥冥日月白，青枫叶赤天雨霜”写秋景；“玉京群帝集北斗，或骑麒麟翳凤凰”写仙家意象；似闻昨者赤松子、恐是汉代韩张良，写韩谏议之才如张良；结以“美人胡为隔秋水，焉得置之贡玉堂”叹其才而不见用。想象奇幻、感慨深沉。 【情感与主旨】 杜甫寄赠韩谏议之作，写思念之情与韩谏议才如张良而不见用的感慨，是杜甫寄赠诗中的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“今我不乐思岳阳，身欲奋飞病在床”写思念之由；“美人胡为隔秋水，焉得置之贡玉堂”叹才不见用。

Allusions

The fair one descends from the tradition of the Lisao, where the fragrant beauty stands for the sovereign or the virtuous man; here it dignifies friendship with political longing. Washing the feet echoes the fisherman's song that when the Canglang waters are clear he washes his hatstrings and when muddy his feet, so withdrawal appears as moral choice. Red Pinezi was the immortal whom Zhang Liang begged to follow after helping found the Han, and the phrase Han Zhangliang also plays on the friend's own surname. Zhounan is where the Grand Historian was stranded, a byword for talent left unused; the Old Man of the South Pole is the star of longevity; the Jade Hall is the imperial court itself.

诗中「濯足」「八荒」「赤松子」「韩张良」「周南留滞」「南极老人」「玉堂」等语，皆含典故故实。「濯足」用《孟子·离娄上》「沧浪之水清兮，可以濯我缨；沧浪之水浊兮，可以濯我足」之意，写超然世外；「八荒」指天下八方极远之地；「赤松子」为古代仙人，传说张良功成后「愿弃人间事，欲从赤松子游耳」，故「似闻昨者赤松子，恐是汉代韩张良」以张良从赤松子游写韩谏议功成归隐；「周南留滞」用《史记·太史公自序》太史公留滞周南之典，写才士淹留于外；「南极老人」即南极老人星，古以为主寿之星；「玉堂」指朝廷宫署，汉代有玉堂殿，「贡玉堂」写荐之于朝廷。诗人以赤松子、韩张良、周南留滞、玉堂等典入诗，不着痕迹，而把韩谏议之功成归隐与叹其才不见用之意写得真切可感，是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法，熔铸古今而不着痕迹，既不炫博以示学，亦不拘泥于旧解，正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味，方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。

Commentary

Commentators since the Song dynasty have singled this poem out as Du Fu's most fantastic friendship poem, praising its strange splendor. Its baroque procession of immortals has no real parallel in his work except, at a remove, the cosmic visions of his late poems to friends. Later readers have noted that the fantasy is functional, not ornamental: it is the only way Du Fu can state that his friend deserves the highest office. The final question, why the fair one lingers beyond the autumn waters, has been read as the poem's real subject, not consolation but protest that the age wastes its best men.

这首《寄韩谏议》，是杜甫寄赠友人韩谏议之作，写思念之情与感慨之怀，想象奇幻，感慨深沉。开篇写思念之由与所思之人：「今我不乐思岳阳，身欲奋飞病在床」——如今我不快乐，思念岳阳；身欲奋飞，却病卧在床。写思念之由：不乐而思，欲飞而病，一个病中怀友的诗人形象跃然纸上；「美人娟娟隔秋水，濯足洞庭望八荒」——美人娟娟，隔于秋水；濯足洞庭，望尽八荒。以「美人」喻韩谏议，隔于秋水，濯足洞庭而望八荒，写其超然世外之境，也写其可望而不可即。中段以奇幻想象写韩谏议之才与归隐：「鸿飞冥冥日月白，青枫叶赤天雨霜」——鸿飞冥冥，日月正白；青枫叶赤，天降霜寒，写秋景之萧瑟；「玉京群帝集北斗，或骑麒麟翳凤凰。芙蓉旌旗烟雾落，影动倒景摇潇湘」——玉京群帝会集北斗，或骑麒麟、或翳凤凰，芙蓉旌旗、烟雾飘落，影动倒景、摇荡潇湘，写天上群仙之奇幻景象，正以天上之景写韩谏议归隐之高；「似闻昨者赤松子，恐是汉代韩张良。昔随刘氏定长安，帷幄未改神惨伤」——似闻昨日之赤松子，恐是汉代的韩张良；昔随刘氏安定长安，帷幄未改而神采惨伤。以张良功成从赤松子游写韩谏议之才与归隐——昔曾定国安邦，今则归隐如仙人。后段写感慨与祝愿：「国家成败吾岂敢，色难腥腐餐风香」——国家成败我岂敢言，色难腥腐、餐风饮香，写其耿介，不与腥腐同流；「周南留滞古所惜，南极老人应寿昌」——周南留滞古所惋惜，南极老人应享寿昌，写惜其淹留、祝其寿昌；「美人胡为隔秋水，焉得置之贡玉堂」——美人胡为隔于秋水，怎得安置于贡玉之堂？以问句叹其才而不见用，愿其能入朝为用。这一结，是全诗的主旨：韩谏议有张良之才，却归隐于秋水之间，不得见用，杜甫惜之叹之。全诗想象奇幻（以玉京群帝、赤松子、韩张良等入诗）、虚实相生，感慨深沉，正是「诗圣」寄友抒怀的典范。

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