唐 Tang · 诗 Poem
婕妤怨
The Resentment of a Palace Lady
花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳。
借问承恩者,双蛾几许长。
Pray tell me, she who enjoys the royal favor: how long are her moth eyebrows drawn?
Meaning
Through the bright sounds and colors of the imperial palace, the poem gives voice to a deserted lady's resentment: all the music and bloom belong elsewhere, and she can only ask after the rival who now holds the emperor's favor. The resentment is never named; it lives entirely in the question.
花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳。借问承恩者,双蛾几许长。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] Flowering branches sway out of Jianzhang Palace and phoenix flutes play in Zhaoyang Hall. The deserted lady, unseen, asks one question of the world: tell me about the woman who now enjoys the emperor's favor, and just how long her painted eyebrows are. [Structure] Two couplets, two moves: the first presents the scene of favor, which is elsewhere; the second turns to the question. The lady never appears in person; she exists only as a voice. [Imagery] Flower branches and phoenix flutes are the emblems of the harem's bloom and music, but they are located in named palaces, sights and sounds that exclude her. [Emotion] The resentment works by indirection: the jealousy is real, but it is disguised as curiosity about fashion. The more casual the question sounds, the deeper the wound.
【白话串讲】 皇甫冉写《婕妤怨》:“花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳”——“借问承恩者,双蛾几许长”——他写婕妤怨——借问承恩者。 【意象与手法】 “花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳”写建章昭阳之盛;“借问承恩者”写问承恩者;结以“双蛾几许长”以问句写怨。婉约咏史。 【情感与主旨】 皇甫冉写婕妤怨之作,以花枝凤管写新宠之盛,以“借问承恩者,双蛾几许长”写失宠之怨,是宫怨诗中的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳”写新宠之盛;“借问承恩者,双蛾几许长”以问句写失宠之怨。
Background
Huangfu Ran (c. 717-770) was a mid-Tang poet from Danyang, known for a clear and delicate style. The palace lament was one of the oldest themes in Chinese poetry, descending from Ban Jieyu, the Han consort who, abandoned for the Zhao sisters, compared herself to a fan cast off when summer ended. By the Tang the theme had become a refined art of suggestion, and Huangfu Ran's quatrain is among its most compressed masterpieces, written at a time when poets competed to say the most in twenty characters.
《婕妤怨》为唐代诗人皇甫冉所作诗。皇甫冉(约717—约770),字茂政,润州丹阳人,唐代诗人。此诗写宫怨咏史,为咏婕妤之作。诗中「花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳」写花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳;「借问承恩者,双蛾几许长」写借问承恩者,双蛾几许长。皇甫冉此诗以宫怨咏史、双蛾几许长写其咏史之情,婉约咏史,是皇甫冉诗中的名篇。此篇《婕妤怨》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《婕妤怨》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《婕妤怨》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
Twenty characters carry the entire poem. The first couplet uses two loaded palace names, Jianzhang, built by Han Wudi, and Zhaoyang, the residence of his favorite Zhao Feiyan, so that the whole past of abandoned consorts floods into the present. The second couplet turns on a single tactic: the question. Moth eyebrows were the fashionable style set by whoever held favor, so asking their length is at once a fashion query, a measurement of the rival's power, and a cry of self-pity. The open, bright rhyme of the yang group rings like palace music over a line of grief, and the contrast between the musical surface and the hidden despair is the poem's finest effect.
此诗艺术上以「婉约咏史、以花写情」见长。全诗共四句两联,由花枝出建章而借问承恩者。起「花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳」写花枝出建章:花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳;结「借问承恩者,双蛾几许长」写借问承恩者:借问承恩者,双蛾几许长。全诗以花写情,由花枝出建章而双蛾几许长,婉约咏史,是皇甫冉诗中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
Jianzhang Palace was Han Wudi's vast pleasure palace; Zhaoyang Hall was where his successor's favorite, Zhao Feiyan, danced her way to power. Jieyu, as in Ban Jieyu, was a rank of imperial consort, and the theme of the abandoned consort belongs to her. Receiving favor means holding the sovereign's regard. Moth eyebrows, the fashionable eyebrow style of the day, were set by the favored woman in harem custom, so the length of her brows quietly measured her ascendancy, and the question measures her power.
诗中「花枝出建章凤管发昭阳」「借问承恩者双蛾几许长」等语,皆含典故故实。「花枝出建章凤管发昭阳」用建章、昭阳之典(建章写建章宫,昭阳写昭阳殿),写花枝出建章凤管发昭阳;「借问承恩者双蛾几许长」用承恩之典(承恩写受宠),写借问承恩者双蛾几许长。诗人用建章、昭阳之典入诗,不着痕迹,而把宫怨咏史之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。
Commentary
The poem has been praised for centuries as the finest example of resentment without the word resentment. Critics compare it with Yuan Zhen's quatrain on the deserted palace, where the white-haired maid sits idle naming emperors of the past, for there, as here, everything is said by what is not said. Anthologists of Tang quatrains place these twenty characters beside the longer palace laments of Bai Juyi and find the small poem more wounding. Its technique, jealousy disguised as curiosity, became a model for later palace-lament writing, and its closing question still reads like a door left deliberately ajar.
这首《婕妤怨》,是皇甫冉写宫怨咏史之作,写花枝出建章、借问承恩者、双蛾几许长之情,婉约咏史。起「花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳」——花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳。写花枝出建章:花枝出建章、凤管发昭阳——出建章、发昭阳;结「借问承恩者,双蛾几许长」——借问承恩者,双蛾几许长。写借问承恩者:借问承恩者、双蛾几许长——承恩者、几许长。这「借问承恩者,双蛾几许长」,是全诗之结:以双蛾几许长写其咏史。全诗婉约咏史,以花写情,正是皇甫冉诗中的名篇。综观全诗,情真、景切、理深,三者浑融无迹,故能于短短数语之中寄无限深意,令人百读不厌。其含蓄蕴藉之处,正是中国古典诗歌以少总多、言有尽而意无穷的美学精神的生动体现。综观全诗,情真、景切、理深,三者浑融无迹,故能于短短数语之中寄无限深意,令人百读不厌。其含蓄蕴藉之处,正是中国古典诗歌以少总多、言有尽而意无穷的美学精神的生动体现。
Prosody
Line by line
花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳。
Flowering branches come out of Jianzhang Palace; phoenix flutes sound from Zhaoyang Hall.
花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳。
Blooming branches rise beyond the Jianzhang Palace; phoenix pipes sound from the Zhaoyang Hall.
起句写花枝出建章,起笔即见其花枝。「花枝出建章」用建章之典写花枝出建章,「花枝」写花枝、「出建章」写出建章;「凤管发昭阳」用昭阳之典写凤管发昭阳,「凤管」写凤管、「发昭阳」写发昭阳。一句写花枝出建章凤管发昭阳,以花枝出建章写出建章、以凤管发昭阳写发昭阳,写尽花枝出建章、凤管发昭阳之情。以花起兴,婉约而咏史,是「以花起兴」的妙笔。
The opening line writes blooming branches beyond Jianzhang, the start. It uses the palaces Jianzhang and Zhaoyang of Han, where the favored consorts dwell; rising through flowers, restrained and historical, the start of the neglected consort's lament.
借问承恩者,
Pray tell me, she who enjoys the royal favor,
借问承恩者,
Tell me, she whom the Emperor favors.
此句写借问承恩者,是全诗写承恩之态的关键。「借问承恩者」用承恩之典写借问承恩者,「借问」写借问、「承恩者」写承恩者。一句写借问承恩者,以借问写借问、以承恩者写承恩者,写尽借问承恩者之情。以问写情,婉约而咏史,是「以问写情」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
This line writes 'tell me, she whom the Emperor favors', the question's key. Through the question it writes the hidden envy, restrained and historical, the emotional crux.
双蛾几许长。
just how long are her moth eyebrows drawn?
双蛾几许长。
How long are her painted brows?
结句写双蛾几许长,是全诗立意的落点。「双蛾」写双蛾,「双蛾」写双蛾;「几许长」写几许长,「几许」写几许、「长」写长。一句写双蛾几许长,以双蛾写双蛾、以几许长写几许长,写尽双蛾几许长之情。以蛾写情,婉约而咏史,是全诗最动人处,也是「以蛾写情」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
The closing line asks 'how long are her painted brows?', the poem's landing. Through the brows it writes the feeling, the poem's most moving point: the neglected lady's quiet, cutting question about the rival's beauty that wins the Emperor's favor.
Study
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Related Reading
Su Shi accepts parting with philosophical calm, men have sorrow and joy, parting and reunion, as the moon has its dark and clear. Huangfu Ran cannot accept it at all, for the music of Zhaoyang Hall keeps the wound open. One consoles, one aches. Read together, they show two faces of lament in Chinese verse.
苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「人有悲欢离合,月有阴晴圆缺,此事古难全」,写咏史感怀、婉约旷达,是宋词长调的名篇;皇甫冉《婕妤怨》则以「花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳」「借问承恩者,双蛾几许长」写发昭阳、几许长。两诗同写咏史感怀、婉约旷达:一写人有悲欢离合、以悲欢写离合,一写花枝出建章凤管发昭阳、以昭阳写咏史;一为苏轼之旷达、一为皇甫冉之婉约,并读正可见诗写「咏史感怀」的两种笔法,皆于咏史之中见婉约。
八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天 Eight Tones of Ganzhou: To the Tune of the Evening Rain 柳永 · 同写宫苑凝望、婉约清丽,一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、一写花枝出建章凤管发昭阳,皆于宫苑之中见凝望 Both gaze longingly across water with delicate, clear feeling, one at the river and towers, the other at the autumn waters of separation.Liu Yong, a traveler, looks out at the autumn river washing the sky; Huangfu Ran's lady looks out at the autumn water that divides her from favor. Liu Yong's gaze is wide and sweeping, Huangfu Ran's narrow and wound-tight. One is the clarity of the road, the other the clarity of the sealed palace.
柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天,一番洗清秋」,写宫苑凝望、婉约清丽,是宋词写羁旅的名篇;皇甫冉《婕妤怨》则以「花枝出建章,凤管发昭阳」「借问承恩者」写发昭阳、承恩者。两诗同写宫苑凝望、婉约清丽:一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋,一写花枝出建章凤管发昭阳、以昭阳写咏史;一为柳永之清丽、一为皇甫冉之婉约,并读正可见诗写「宫苑凝望」的两种笔法,皆于宫苑之中见凝望。