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感遇十二首 四

Thoughts on Encounters (Ganyu), No. 4

张九龄

Zhang Jiuling

孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕

A lone swan goose comes flying in from over the sea, and dare not look toward pond or moat.
Glancing sideways, it sees a pair of kingfishers nesting on the three-pearl tree.
Stately they stand on the crown of the precious tree — can they be free of fear of the golden pellet?
Fine robes incur men's pointing; lofty brilliance draws even the envy of spirits. Now I roam far in the boundless dark — what could the fowler covet?
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Meaning

The poet compares himself to a lone swan goose that has flown in from the sea and dare not approach the ponds, and contrasts it with a pair of jeweled kingfishers nesting proudly on the mythical three-pearl tree, heedless of the sling's pellet. From this he draws the moral that conspicuous beauty and brilliance invite envy and attack, so he chooses to vanish into the boundless dark, beyond the fowler's reach. The poem is a veiled reflection on the dangers of court life and the wisdom of withdrawal.

孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] A lone swan goose crosses the sea and will not even glance at the ponds; a pair of kingfishers, gorgeous and exposed, perch on the mythical three-pearl tree. Beautiful robes attract pointing fingers, and blazing height draws even the envy of spirits, so the poet vanishes into the boundless dark where no fowler can follow. [Structure] The twelve lines unfold in five movements: the goose's arrival, the birds' exposure, the warning of the golden pellet, the general maxim, and the poet's vanishing. The contrast between the solitary goose and the paired, flamboyant kingfishers carries the whole argument. [Imagery] Sea, pond, pearl tree, sling pellet, fine robes, and fowler form one symbolic system: safety lies in distance and obscurity, danger in brilliance and height.

【白话串讲】 张九龄写《感遇十二首其四》:“孤鸿海上来,池潢不敢顾”——“侧见双翠鸟,巢在三珠树”——“美服患人指,高明逼神恶”——“今我游冥冥,弋者何所慕”——他写孤鸿——美服患人指。 【意象与手法】 “孤鸿海上来,池潢不敢顾”写孤鸿;“侧见双翠鸟,巢在三珠树”写双翠鸟巢三珠树;“美服患人指,高明逼神恶”写美服高明之患;结以“今我游冥冥,弋者何所慕”写游冥冥。警拔咏怀。 【情感与主旨】 张九龄写感遇咏怀之作,以孤鸿自喻、双翠鸟喻权贵,写“美服患人指,高明逼神恶”的戒惧,是张九龄感遇诗中的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“孤鸿海上来,池潢不敢顾”以孤鸿写戒惧;“美服患人指,高明逼神恶”写高处之患。

Background

Zhang Jiuling (678-740), courtesy name Zishou, was from Qujiang in Shaozhou (modern northern Guangdong). A gifted poet and statesman, he rose to be chancellor under Emperor Xuanzong and was remembered for his upright character; his fall from power deeply affected the poet Li Bai, who admired him. His twelve 'Ganyu' (Reflections on Encounters) poems, written around his political setbacks, draw on the tradition of Chen Zi'ang's 'Ganyu' verse. This fourth piece, with its lines 'Fine robes incur men's pointing; lofty brilliance draws even spirits' envy', became a classic warning against the perils of standing out, and was selected for the Three Hundred Tang Poems.

《感遇十二首 四》为唐代诗人张九龄所作诗。张九龄(678—740),字子寿,韶州曲江人,唐代诗人。此诗写感遇咏怀,为感遇之作。诗中「孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾」写孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾;「侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树」写侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树;「矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧」写矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧;「美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」写美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕。张九龄此诗以感遇咏怀、弋者何所慕写其咏怀之情,警拔咏怀,是张九龄诗中的名篇。此篇《感遇十二首 四》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《感遇十二首 四》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。

Art

The poem's power lies in its layered symbolism. The lone swan goose — wild, wary, from the open sea — becomes the poet's self-portrait, while the twin kingfishers, brilliant and paired like favored courtiers, preen atop the three-pearl tree of legend, unaware of the hunter's golden pellet. At line seven the poem shifts from fable to aphorism ('Fine robes incur men's pointing; lofty brilliance draws even spirits' envy'), generalizing the birds' predicament into a rule of public life, and the closing couplet dissolves the self into the 'boundless dark' (mingming), echoing Yang Xiong's ancient phrase 'the wild goose flies into the deep dark; what can the fowler do?' Ten lines of five-character ancient verse, without regulated parallelism, give the meditation a lean, prophetic directness.

此诗艺术上以「警拔咏怀、以鸿写情」见长。全诗共十句五联,由孤鸿海上来而侧见双翠鸟而矫矫珍木巅。起「孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾」写孤鸿海上来:孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾;「侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树」写侧见双翠鸟:侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树;「矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧」写矫矫珍木巅:矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧;结「美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」写弋者何所慕:美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕。全诗以鸿写情,由孤鸿海上来而弋者何所慕,警拔咏怀,是张九龄诗中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。

Allusions

The three-pearl tree (sanzhushu) is a mythical tree of the Classic of Mountains and Seas, said to grow by the Red River with fruits like pearls; here it evokes the jeweled brilliance of the court. The 'golden pellet' (jinwan) recalls the gilded pellets used in aristocratic hunting — the instant doom of a conspicuous bird. Kingfishers (cuiniao) were prized for their turquoise feathers, which adorned the caps and carriages of the powerful, so the paired birds flaunting on high stand for flattered officials. Most important, the closing 'fowler' (yizhe) echoes Yang Xiong's Fa Yan: 'The wild goose flies deep into the dark; what can the fowler do to it?' — an ancient formula for escaping a dangerous world by vanishing beyond reach.

诗中「孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾」「侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树」「矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧」「美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」等语,皆含典故故实。「孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾」用孤鸿之典(孤鸿写失群之雁),写孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾;「侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树」用三珠树之典(三珠树写神话树),写侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树;「矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧」用金丸之典(金丸写弹丸),写矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧;「美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」用弋者之典(弋者写射鸟之人),写美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕。诗人用孤鸿、三珠树、金丸、弋者之典入诗,不着痕迹,而把感遇咏怀之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。

Commentary

Of Zhang Jiuling's twelve 'Ganyu' poems, this is the most famous; its couplet 'Fine robes incur men's pointing; lofty brilliance draws even spirits' envy' passed into common speech as a caution against conspicuous success. Critics have prized the poem for what they call 'wind and bone' (fenggu): the lean, sinewy quality of Chen Zi'ang's verse combined with a tact that keeps resentment entirely inside metaphor. Anthologies from the Song dynasty onward have placed it among the finest five-character ancient poems of the Tang, and modern readers often read the goose's flight from the pond as Zhang's own withdrawal from the factional struggles that ended his chancellorship.

这首《感遇十二首 四》,是张九龄写感遇咏怀之作,写孤鸿海上来、侧见双翠鸟、矫矫珍木巅、弋者何所慕之情,警拔咏怀。起「孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾」——孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾。写孤鸿海上来:孤鸿海上来、池潢不敢顾——海上来、不敢顾;「侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树」——侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树。写侧见双翠鸟:侧见双翠鸟、巢在三珠树——双翠鸟、三珠树;「矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧」——矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧。写矫矫珍木巅:矫矫珍木巅、得无金丸惧——珍木巅、金丸惧;结「美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」——美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕。写弋者何所慕:美服患人指、高明逼神恶、今我游冥冥、弋者何所慕——患人指、逼神恶、游冥冥、何所慕。这「美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」,是全诗之结:以弋者何所慕写其咏怀。全诗警拔咏怀,以鸿写情,正是张九龄诗中的名篇。

Prosody

Form Five-character ancient-style verse (wuyan guti), twelve lines诗(五言古体)
Rhyme The rhyme words gu ('look'), shu ('tree'), ju ('fear'), and mu ('covet') all belong to the falling-tone Yu rhyme group, giving each couplet's end a low, restrained close, like warning tolls sounded across the poem.此诗为五言古体。押韵:「顾」「树」「惧」「慕」等部。句句自然流转,声情警拔,正与写感遇咏怀的警拔咏怀相称,也见其以古体写咏怀的流转。
Tone pattern The lines move in plain five-syllable beats without regulated tonal pairing; the rhythm tightens at the sharp warning 'Fine robes incur men's pointing' and slows into the vast final line 'what could the fowler covet', letting the closing couplet fade into the 'boundless dark' it names.句式上,「孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾」写孤鸿海上来,音节警拔;「侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树」写侧见双翠鸟,音节悠长;「矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧」写矫矫珍木巅,音节低回;结「美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」写弋者何所慕,音节沉郁。全诗音节随情起伏,由警拔而悠长、由低回而沉郁,正合古体「流转」之妙,读来如感遇咏怀、弋者何所慕之音,警拔而动人。
Reading note As an ancient-style (guti) poem the verse deliberately avoids the tonal patterns of regulated verse; its power is rhetorical rather than metrical — statement, image, maxim, vanish. The alternation of narrative couplets with the aphoristic couplet produces the 'alert, forceful' quality readers have always prized in Zhang's Ganyu series.此诗为五言古体,是张九龄写感遇咏怀之作,也是其诗中的名篇。全诗的艺术特色在于「警拔咏怀、以鸿写情」:「孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾」写孤鸿海上来、「侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树」写侧见双翠鸟、「矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧」写矫矫珍木巅、「美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」写弋者何所慕。全诗警拔咏怀,以鸿写情。尤为精妙者,是「孤鸿海上来」用孤鸿之典;而「弋者何所慕」用弋者之典,正是张九龄诗「警拔咏怀」的典范,为历代选本所常收。《感遇十二首 四》一诗之所以读来声情并茂,正在于诗人以声韵配合情思、以节奏烘托意境,音节之长短、平仄之起伏,皆与诗意相为表里,此亦可见中国古典诗歌声律之美与匠心之工。

Line by line

孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾

A lone swan goose comes flying in from over the sea, and dare not look toward pond or moat.

孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾

A lone wild swan comes from the sea; it will not glance at the shallow pools.

起句写孤鸿海上来,起笔即见其孤鸿。「孤鸿海上来」用孤鸿之典写孤鸿海上来,「孤鸿」写孤鸿、「海上来」写海上来;「池潢不敢顾」写池潢不敢顾,「池潢」写池潢、「不敢顾」写不敢顾。一句写孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾,以孤鸿海上来写海上来、以池潢不敢顾写不敢顾,写尽孤鸿海上来、池潢不敢顾之情。以鸿起兴,警拔而咏怀,是「以鸿起兴」的妙笔。

The opening line brings a lone swan from the sea that disdains shallow ponds; rising through the swan, it is a proud image of the lofty mind.

侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树

Glancing sideways, it sees a pair of kingfishers nesting on the three-pearl tree.

侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树

At its side I see two kingfishers nesting in the triple-pearl tree.

此句写侧见双翠鸟,是全诗写翠鸟之态的关键。「侧见双翠鸟」写侧见双翠鸟,「侧见」写侧见、「双翠鸟」写双翠鸟;「巢在三珠树」用三珠树之典写巢在三珠树,「巢在」写巢在、「三珠树」写三珠树。一句写侧见双翠鸟巢在三珠树,以侧见双翠鸟写双翠鸟、以巢在三珠树写三珠树,写尽侧见双翠鸟、巢在三珠树之情。以鸟写景,警拔而咏怀,是「以鸟写景」的点睛之笔。

At its side two kingfishers nest in the fabled triple-pearl tree; using the mythic tree, it sets the gaudy, favored birds against the swan.

矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧

Stately they stand on the crown of the precious tree — can they be free of fear of the golden pellet?

矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧

Proudly perched on the treetop of rare wood — are they not afraid of the golden pellet?

此句写矫矫珍木巅,是全诗写珍木之态的关键。「矫矫珍木巅」写矫矫珍木巅,「矫矫」写矫矫、「珍木巅」写珍木巅;「得无金丸惧」用金丸之典写得无金丸惧,「得无」写得无、「金丸惧」写金丸惧。一句写矫矫珍木巅得无金丸惧,以矫矫珍木巅写珍木巅、以得无金丸惧写金丸惧,写尽矫矫珍木巅、得无金丸惧之情。以木写情,警拔而咏怀,是「以木写情」的点睛之笔。

Perched proudly on the rare treetop, the line asks whether they fear the golden pellet — the shot of the hunter — a warning that high favor invites danger.

美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕

Fine robes incur men's pointing; lofty brilliance draws even the envy of spirits. Now I roam far in the boundless dark — what could the fowler covet?

美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕

Fine dress fears men's pointing fingers; high station provokes the gods' dislike. Now I roam in the deep, far sky — what can the fowler covet?

结句写弋者何所慕,是全诗立意的落点。「美服患人指高明逼神恶」写美服患人指高明逼神恶,「美服患人指」写美服患人指、「高明逼神恶」写高明逼神恶;「今我游冥冥弋者何所慕」用弋者之典写今我游冥冥弋者何所慕,「今我游冥冥」写今我游冥冥、「弋者何所慕」写弋者何所慕。一句写美服患人指高明逼神恶今我游冥冥弋者何所慕,以美服患人指写患人指、以今我游冥冥写游冥冥、以弋者何所慕写何所慕,写尽美服患人指、弋者何所慕之情。以慕写情,警拔而咏怀,是全诗最动人处,也是「以慕写情」的点睛之笔。

The closing line reflects that fine dress invites pointing fingers and high station provokes dislike, then resolves to roam the deep sky beyond the fowler's reach; ending on what the hunter cannot covet, it praises withdrawal as safety.

Study

Word focus

孤鸿 The lone swan goose — the poem's central self-image: wild, wary, and far from the ponds of power, it embodies the poet's choice of safe solitude. 「孤鸿」写孤鸿海上来,是写孤鸿之态的关键。「孤鸿海上来」着一「孤鸿」,写孤鸿——着一「孤鸿」,写孤鸿海上来,见其鸿之孤。两字写尽孤鸿之态,是「以词写鸿」的妙笔。「孤鸿」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
翠鸟 The kingfisher, prized for turquoise feathers that adorned the powerful; here the paired birds stand for flattered courtiers flaunting their brilliance on high. 「翠鸟」写侧见双翠鸟,是写翠鸟之态的关键。「侧见双翠鸟」着一「翠鸟」,写翠鸟——着一「翠鸟」,写侧见双翠鸟,见其鸟之翠。两字写尽翠鸟之态,是「以词写鸟」的点睛之词。「翠鸟」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
珍木 The precious tree, echoing the mythical three-pearl tree; a perch of jeweled splendor that is also a place of deadly exposure. 「珍木」写矫矫珍木巅,是写珍木之态的关键。「矫矫珍木巅」着一「珍木」,写珍木——着一「珍木」,写矫矫珍木巅,见其木之珍。两字写尽珍木之态,是「以词写木」的点睛之词。「珍木」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
弋者 The fowler with his bow and stringed arrow — the hunter whose very existence gives the poem its closing turn: vanish into the dark, and even the hunter has nothing to aim at. 「弋者」写弋者何所慕,是写弋者之态的关键。「弋者何所慕」着一「弋者」,写弋者——着一「弋者」,写弋者何所慕,见其者之弋。两字写尽弋者之态,是「以词写者」的点睛之词。「弋者」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。

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柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天,一番洗清秋」,写海上凝望、警拔清丽,是宋词写羁旅的名篇;张九龄《感遇十二首 四》则以「孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾」「侧见双翠鸟」写不敢顾、双翠鸟。两诗同写海上凝望、警拔清丽:一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋,一写孤鸿海上来池潢不敢顾、以孤鸿写咏怀;一为柳永之清丽、一为张九龄之警拔,并读正可见诗写「海上凝望」的两种笔法,皆于海上之中见凝望。