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水调歌头

Prelude to Water Melody

张孝祥

Zhang Xiaoxiang

濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。
吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘。
买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪。
蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡。
制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳。
湘妃起舞一笑,抚瑟奏清商。
唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光。
莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央。

I wash my feet in the night rapids' haste,
And dry my hair in the cold north wind.
I have wandered through the mountains and the lakes of Wu and Chu —
Only lacking the visit to the Xiao and the Xiang.
I have bought the little boat to go back —
This matter Heaven has given to me: in the sixth month,
To go down into the blue waves.
I have shed the cicada's shell, outside the dust —
The butterfly's dream, in the water-cloud land.
I make my coat of the lotus leaves,
Knot my girdle of the thoroughwort,
And hold the fragrant jade.
The goddesses of the Xiang dance, and smile —
They stroke the zither and play the clear Shang.
They wake the loyal indignation of the Nine Songs,
Brush clean the writings of the Three Wardens —
That they may vie with the sun in light.
Do not let the young ones know —
This joy is not yet exhausted.
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Meaning

A lyric of the return to the rivers of the south, written by Zhang Xiaoxiang, the patriotic poet of the Southern Song. He washes his feet in the night rapids and dries his hair in the cold north wind — the gestures of the ancient purity; he has wandered through the mountains and the lakes of Wu and Chu, only lacking the visit to the Xiao and the Xiang — the rivers of the south, the land of the ancient Chu. He has bought the little boat to go back; this matter Heaven has given to him — in the sixth month, to go down into the blue waves. He has shed the cicada's shell outside the dust, and dreams the butterfly's dream in the water-cloud land. He makes his coat of the lotus leaves, knots his girdle of the thoroughwort, and holds the fragrant jade — the garments of the ancient Chu poet Qu Yuan. The goddesses of the Xiang dance and smile; they stroke the zither and play the clear Shang; they wake the loyal indignation of the Nine Songs and brush clean the writings of the Three Wardens — Qu Yuan's writings — that they may vie with the sun in light. And the close: do not let the young ones know — this joy is not yet exhausted. The lyric is the return of the patriot to the rivers of Qu Yuan: the garments of the lotus and the thoroughwort, and the writings that vie with the sun.

濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘。买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪。蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡。制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳。湘妃起舞一笑,抚瑟奏清商。唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光。莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] I wash my feet in the night rapids' haste, and dry my hair in the cold north wind. I have wandered through the mountains and the lakes of Wu and Chu — only lacking the visit to the Xiao and the Xiang. I have bought the little boat to go back — this matter Heaven has given to me: in the sixth month, to go down into the blue waves. I have shed the cicada's shell, outside the dust — the butterfly's dream, in the water-cloud land. I make my coat of the lotus leaves, knot my girdle of the thoroughwort, and hold the fragrant jade. The goddesses of the Xiang dance, and smile — they stroke the zither and play the clear Shang. They wake the loyal indignation of the Nine Songs, brush clean the writings of the Three Wardens — that they may vie with the sun in light. Do not let the young ones know — this joy is not yet exhausted. [Structure and Thought] The lyric moves from the preparations of the return — the washing and the drying, the boat bought — through the transformation — the cicada's shell and the butterfly's dream, the garments of the lotus and the thoroughwort — to the meeting with the goddesses of the Xiang and the wake of Qu Yuan's writings, and the close's keeping of the joy from the young ones. [Key Technique] The poem's art is the layering of the Chu: the garments of the lotus and the thoroughwort, the goddesses of the Xiang, the Nine Songs and the Three Wardens — the whole lyric is the return to the world of Qu Yuan, the patriot's inheritance of the ancient loyalty. [Emotional Tone] Free, lofty, and patriotic: the lyric is the return to the rivers of the south, the joy of the transformation and the wake of the ancient writings that vie with the sun.

【白话串讲】 张孝祥写《水调歌头》:“濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉”——“吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘”——“买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪”——“蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡”——他写湘水之行——蝉脱尘埃外。 【意象与手法】 “濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉”以濯足晞发写高洁;“吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘”写行遍江湖;“买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪”写归隐之志;“蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡”以蝉蜕蝶梦写超脱;结以“莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央”写此乐未央。豪放洒脱。 【情感与主旨】 张孝祥写咏怀归隐之作,写湘水之行与归隐之志,以“蝉脱尘埃外”写超脱尘世,体现于湖词豪放洒脱的风格。 【名句点睛】 常考“濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉”以濯足晞发写高洁;“蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡”以蝉蜕蝶梦写超脱。

Background

Zhang Xiaoxiang (1132–1170) was one of the great patriotic poets of the early Southern Song, a man of the northern resistance who was repeatedly frustrated and turned to the rivers and the lakes of the south. This lyric, written on his return to the Xiao and the Xiang rivers — the land of the ancient Chu and the poems of Qu Yuan — is one of his most famous works. The garments of the lotus and the thoroughwort, the goddesses of the Xiang, and the writings of the 'Three Wardens' — Qu Yuan — show the patriot's inheritance of the ancient loyalty; the close's 'do not let the young ones know' is the keeping of the private joy from the world.

《水调歌头》为南宋词人张孝祥所作词。张孝祥(1132—1169),字安国,别号于湖居士,历阳乌江(今安徽和县)人,南宋词人,词风豪放。此词写咏怀归隐。词中「濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘」写濯足晞发;「买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪」写扁舟归去;「蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡」写蝉脱蝶梦;「制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳」写制荷衣;「湘妃起舞一笑,抚瑟奏清商」写湘妃起舞;「唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光」写三闾文字;「莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央」写此乐未央。张孝祥此词以咏怀归隐、三闾文字写其归隐之情,豪放洒脱,是张孝祥词中的名篇。此篇《水调歌头》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《水调歌头》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。

Art

The lyric's art is the art of the return to the Chu. The preparations of the return are given in the ancient gestures: the washing of the feet in the rapids and the drying of the hair in the wind — the gestures of the ancient purity. The journey is the matter given by Heaven: in the sixth month, to go down into the blue waves. The transformation follows: the cicada's shell shed outside the dust, the butterfly's dream in the water-cloud land — the shedding of the old self. Then the garments of the Chu: the coat of the lotus leaves, the girdle of the thoroughwort, the fragrant jade — the dress of Qu Yuan. And the meeting with the goddesses of the Xiang, who wake the loyal indignation of the Nine Songs and brush clean the writings of the Three Wardens, that they may vie with the sun in light. The close keeps the joy from the young ones — the private, exhausted joy of the return.

此词艺术上以「豪放洒脱、以典写怀」见长。全词上片写濯足晞发与扁舟归去,下片写制荷衣与三闾文字。上片「濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘」写濯足晞发:濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉,吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘;「买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪」写扁舟归去:买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪;「蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡」写蝉脱蝶梦:蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡。下片「制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳」写制荷衣:制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳;「湘妃起舞一笑,抚瑟奏清商」写湘妃起舞:湘妃起舞一笑,抚瑟奏清商;「唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光」写三闾文字:唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光;「莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央」写此乐未央:莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央。全词豪放洒脱,以典写怀,是张孝祥词中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。

Allusions

The lyric is dense with the allusions of the Chu: 'the coat of the lotus leaves, the girdle of the thoroughwort' (zhihe yi, ren lan pei) are the garments of Qu Yuan in the 'Songs of Chu' — the fragrant, noble dress of the loyal exile. 'The goddesses of the Xiang' (Xiangfei) are the goddesses of the Xiang River of the ancient Chu; 'the Nine Songs' (Jiu Ge) and 'the Three Wardens' (San Lu) are the works and the title of Qu Yuan — the writings brushed clean, to vie with the sun in light. 'The cicada's shell' (chan tuo) is the shedding of the cicada's shell — the Daoist figure of the transcendence; 'the butterfly's dream' (die meng) is the dream of Zhuangzi's butterfly. The washing of the feet and the drying of the hair are the gestures of the ancient purity.

词中「濯足」「晞发」「吴山楚泽」「潇湘」「扁舟」「天公付我」「沧浪」「蝉脱」「尘埃」「蝶梦」「水云乡」「荷衣」「兰佩」「琼芳」「湘妃」「抚瑟」「清商」「九歌」「忠愤」「三闾」「与日争光」「儿辈」「此乐未渠央」等语,皆含典故故实。「濯足」用《孟子·离娄上》「沧浪之水清兮,可以濯我缨;沧浪之水浊兮,可以濯我足」之意(亦用屈原「濯足沧浪」);「晞发」用屈原《九歌·少司命》「晞汝发兮阳之阿」之意,写晒干头发;「吴山楚泽」写吴楚之地;「潇湘」写湘江一带;「扁舟」用范蠡泛五湖之典,写归隐之舟;「天公付我」写天公付我;「沧浪」写沧浪之水;「蝉脱」写如蝉蜕壳而脱尘;「蝶梦」用《庄子·齐物论》庄周梦蝶之典,写蝶梦;「水云乡」写水云之乡;「制荷衣」「纫兰佩」用《离骚》「制芰荷以为衣兮,集芙蓉以为裳」「纫秋兰以为佩」之意,写高洁之服佩;「琼芳」用屈原「被石兰兮带杜衡,折芳馨兮遗所思」之意,写琼芳;「湘妃」用湘水之神湘夫人(娥皇女英)之典;「抚瑟」写抚琴;「清商」写清商之曲;「九歌」用屈原《九歌》;「忠愤」写忠愤;「三闾」写屈原(屈原为三闾大夫);「与日争光」用《史记·屈原贾生列传》「虽与日月争光可也」之意;「儿辈」写小辈;「此乐未渠央」写此乐未央。词人以濯足晞发、扁舟、蝉脱蝶梦、荷衣兰佩、湘妃、三闾、九歌等典入词,不着痕迹,而把咏怀归隐之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。

Commentary

This lyric is one of Zhang Xiaoxiang's most famous works, quoted for its layering of the allusions of the Chu and its patriotic freedom. The garments of the lotus and the thoroughwort, the goddesses of the Xiang, and the writings that vie with the sun are among the most admired images of the Southern Song. Critics praise the lyric's loftiness: the return to the rivers of Qu Yuan, and the joy kept from the young ones.

这首《水调歌头》,是张孝祥写咏怀归隐之作,写濯足晞发、蝉脱尘埃、三闾文字之情,豪放洒脱。上片写濯足晞发与扁舟归去:「濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘」——濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉,吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘。写濯足晞发:濯足夜滩急、晞发北风凉(用沧浪濯足、晞发之典),吴山楚泽行遍、只欠到潇湘——濯足晞发、吴山楚泽行遍;「买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪」——买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪。写扁舟归去:买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我、六月下沧浪——买扁舟归去、六月下沧浪(用范蠡泛舟之典);「蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡」——蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡。写蝉脱蝶梦:蝉脱尘埃外、蝶梦水云乡——如蝉脱壳而脱尘埃、如蝶梦于水云乡。下片写制荷衣与三闾文字:「制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳」——制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳。写制荷衣:制荷衣、纫兰佩、把琼芳(用离骚荷衣兰佩之典)——以高洁之服佩自处;「湘妃起舞一笑,抚瑟奏清商」——湘妃起舞一笑,抚瑟奏清商。写湘妃起舞:湘妃起舞一笑、抚瑟奏清商——湘妃起舞、清商之曲;「唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光」——唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光。写三闾文字:唤起九歌忠愤、拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光——九歌忠愤、三闾文字与日争光;「莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央」——莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央。写此乐未央:莫遣儿辈觉、此乐未渠央——莫使小辈觉、此乐未央。这「莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央」,是全词之结:以此乐未央写其自得。全词豪放洒脱,以典写怀,正是张孝祥词中的名篇。

Prosody

Form Shuidiaogetou (Prelude to Water Melody), a long lyric词(水调歌头,长调)
Rhyme The lyric rhymes on the level-tone liang, xiang, lang, xiang, fang, shang, guang and yang — the flowing, level rhyme that carries the lofty freedom of the return.此词为《水调歌头》调,长调九十五字,上片下片各九句。押平声韵:「凉」「湘」「浪」「乡」「芳」「商」「光」「央」押阳部韵。词体依词谱而定,长调铺叙,句式长短错落,音节随情起伏,正与写咏怀归隐的豪放洒脱相称,也见其以长调写归隐的自然。
Tone pattern The cadence is that of the return: the level opening with the washing and the drying, the turning with the transformation and the garments, the rising with the goddesses and the wake of the writings, and the close's kept cadence with the joy not exhausted.句式上,上片「濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘」写濯足晞发,音节舒放;「买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪」写扁舟归去,音节明快;「蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡」写蝉脱蝶梦,音节空灵;下片「制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳」写制荷衣,音节高洁;「唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光」写三闾文字,音节激昂;「莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央」写此乐未央,音节旷达。全词音节随情起伏,由舒放而明快、由空灵而激昂,正合长调「铺叙」之妙,读来如咏怀归隐、与日争光之音,豪放而动人。
Reading note The lyric's sound matches its lofty freedom: the flowing level rhymes of the liang group carry the cadence of the return to the Chu, and the close — 'mo qian erbei jue, ci le wei qu yang' — falls with the kept joy, the sound of the private, not-yet-exhausted pleasure.此词为《水调歌头》调,是张孝祥写咏怀归隐之作,也是其词中的名篇。全词的艺术特色在于「豪放洒脱、以典写怀」:上片「濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。吴山楚泽行遍,只欠到潇湘」写濯足晞发、「买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪」写扁舟归去、「蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡」写蝉脱蝶梦;下片「制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳」写制荷衣、「湘妃起舞一笑,抚瑟奏清商」写湘妃起舞、「唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光」写三闾文字、「莫遣儿辈觉,此乐未渠央」写此乐未央。全词豪放洒脱,以典写怀。尤为精妙者,是「濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉」用沧浪濯足、屈原晞发之典写脱尘;而「唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光」以三闾文字与日争光写其仰慕屈原,正是张孝祥词「豪放洒脱」的典范,为历代词选所常收。

Line by line

濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。

I wash my feet in the night rapids' haste, and dry my hair in the cold north wind.

濯足夜滩急,晞发北风凉。

I bathe my feet in the rushing night shallows, and dry my hair in the cool north wind.

首二句写濯足晞发,起笔即见其情。「濯足夜滩急」写濯足夜滩急,「濯足」用沧浪濯足之典、「夜滩急」写夜滩之水流急;「晞发北风凉」写晞发北风凉,「晞发」用屈原晞发之典、「北风凉」写北风之凉。两句一写濯足夜滩急、一写晞发北风凉,以濯足晞发写其脱尘之高致、以夜滩北风写其清冷之境界,写尽濯足于急滩、晞发于北风之萧散。以典起兴,豪放而萧散,是「以典起兴」的妙笔。

The opening two lines writing the foot-bathing-and-hair-drying, the feeling present at the first stroke. I-bathe-my-feet-in-the-rushing-night-shallows uses the Canglang foot-bathing allusion and the night-shallows' rushing current; and-dry-my-hair-in-the-cool-north-wind uses Qu Yuan's hair-drying allusion and the north wind's coolness. Two lines, the dust-free loftiness through the foot-bathing and hair-drying, the cold-clear realm through the night shallows and north wind, exhausting the bathing in the rapid shallows and drying in the north wind's free ease. Rising on allusion, the bold and yet free, a wondrous brush of rising-on-allusion.

买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪。

I have bought the little boat to go back — this matter Heaven has given to me: in the sixth month, to go down into the blue waves.

买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪。

I have bought a small boat to go home; heaven itself has granted me this, and in the sixth month I sail the blue waves.

此三句写扁舟归去,是全词写归隐的关键。「买得扁舟归去」写买得扁舟归去,「买得扁舟」用范蠡泛舟之典写买舟、「归去」写归去;「此事天公付我」写此事天公付我,「此事」写此事、「天公付我」写天公付与我;「六月下沧浪」写六月下沧浪,「六月」写六月、「下沧浪」写泛舟于沧浪。三句一写买得扁舟归去、一写此事天公付我、一写六月下沧浪,以买舟归去写归隐、以天公付我写其得之、以六月下沧浪写泛舟,写尽买舟归去、六月泛沧浪之情。以舟写隐,豪放而洒脱,是「以舟写隐」的点睛之笔。

These three lines writing the small-boat's return, the ci's hermitage key. I-have-bought-a-small-boat-to-go-home uses Fan Li's boat-roaming allusion for the bought boat and the return; heaven-itself-has-granted-me-this writes this affair and heaven's granting to me; and-in-the-sixth-month-I-sail-the-blue-waves writes the sixth month and the boat-roaming on the Canglang. Three lines, the hermitage through the bought boat's return, the receiving through heaven's granting, the drifting boat through the Canglang sailing, exhausting the boat-bought return and the June Canglang drifting. Writing the hermitage through the boat, the bold and yet free, a telling stroke of hermitage-through-boat.

制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳。

I make my coat of the lotus leaves, knot my girdle of the thoroughwort, and hold the fragrant jade.

制荷衣,纫兰佩,把琼芳。

I make a lotus coat, string orchid pendants, and hold the jade-like fragrant flowers.

此三句写制荷衣,是全词写其高洁的关键。「制荷衣」写制荷衣,用《离骚》制芰荷为衣之意;「纫兰佩」写纫兰佩,用《离骚》纫秋兰为佩之意;「把琼芳」写把琼芳,用《九歌》折芳馨之意。三句一写制荷衣、一写纫兰佩、一写把琼芳,以制荷衣写其衣、以纫兰佩写其佩、以把琼芳写其持芳,写尽以荷衣兰佩琼芳自处之高洁。以典写洁,豪放而高洁,是「以典写洁」的点睛之笔。

These three lines writing the lotus-coat-making, the ci's loftiness key. I-make-a-lotus-coat uses the Li Sao's cutting-the-lotus-and-water-lily-for-a-coat meaning; string-orchid-pendants uses the Li Sao's stringing-the-autumn-orchid-for-a-pendant meaning; and-hold-the-jade-like-fragrant-flowers uses the Nine Songs' breaking-the-fragrant-blossom meaning. Three lines, the garment through the lotus coat, the pendant through the orchid strings, the held fragrance through the held jade blossoms, exhausting the lotus-coat-orchid-pendant-jade-fragrance's self-placed loftiness. Writing purity through allusion, the bold and yet lofty, a telling stroke of purity-through-allusion.

唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光。

They wake the loyal indignation of the Nine Songs, brush clean the writings of the Three Wardens — that they may vie with the sun in light.

唤起九歌忠愤,拂拭三闾文字,还与日争光。

I call forth the Nine Songs' loyal wrath, brush clean the Three-Lü officer's writings, and make them contend with the sun for light.

此三句写三闾文字,是全词立意的落点。「唤起九歌忠愤」写唤起九歌忠愤,「唤起」写唤起、「九歌忠愤」写九歌中之忠愤;「拂拭三闾文字」写拂拭三闾文字,「拂拭」写拂拭、用屈原为三闾大夫之典写屈原文字;「还与日争光」写还与日争光,用《史记》「虽与日月争光可也」之意。三句一写唤起九歌忠愤、一写拂拭三闾文字、一写还与日争光,以九歌忠愤写屈原之忠、以三闾文字写屈原之文、以与日争光写其光耀,写尽屈原九歌忠愤、三闾文字与日争光之情。以典写志,豪放而激昂,是全词最动人处,也是「以典写志」的点睛之笔。

These three lines writing the Three-Lü-officer's writings, the landing of the ci's theme. I-call-forth-the-Nine-Songs'-loyal-wrath writes the evoking and the Nine Songs' loyal wrath; brush-clean-the-Three-Lü-officer's-writings writes the brushing, using Qu Yuan's Three-Lü-officer allusion for Qu Yuan's writings; and-make-them-contend-with-the-sun-for-light uses the Records of the Grand Historian's though-contending-with-the-sun-and-moon-for-glory meaning. Three lines, Qu Yuan's loyalty through the Nine Songs' loyal wrath, Qu Yuan's writing through the Three-Lü writings, the radiance through the sun-contending light, exhausting the Nine Songs' loyal wrath and the Three-Lü writings' sun-contending glory. Writing the will through allusion, the bold and yet impassioned, the ci's most moving place.

Study

Word focus

濯 'To wash' — washing the feet in the night rapids, the gesture of the ancient purity. 「濯」字写濯足,是写其脱尘的关键。「濯足夜滩急」着一「濯」,写洗——着一「濯」字,用沧浪濯足之典,写洗足于沧浪,见其高洁脱尘。一字写尽濯足之洁,是「以一字写志」的妙笔。「濯」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
晞 'To dry' — drying the hair in the cold north wind, the gesture of the ancient purity. 「晞」字写晞发,是写其萧散的关键。「晞发北风凉」着一「晞」,写晒干——着一「晞」字,用屈原晞发之典,写晒发于北风,见其萧散。一字写尽晞发之散,是「以一字写志」的点睛之词。「晞」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
付 'To give, to entrust' — this matter given to him by Heaven, the gift of the journey. 「付」字写天公付我,是写其得归之庆幸的关键。「此事天公付我」着一「付」,写交付——着一「付」字,写此事天公付我,见其归隐之得。一字写尽天公之付,是「以一字写情」的点睛之词。「付」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
争光 'To vie with the sun in light' — the writings of Qu Yuan that vie with the sun, the loyalty inherited. 「争光」写还与日争光,是写三闾文字之光耀的关键。「还与日争光」着一「争光」,写争光——着一「争光」,用史记与日月争光之意,写屈原文字与日争光,见其光耀千古。两字写尽文字之光,是「以词写志」的点睛之词。「争光」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。

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Su Shi's 'Prelude to Water Melody' asks the moon of the philosophical ease; Zhang Xiaoxiang's lyric of the same tune is the patriotic version — the return to the Xiao and the Xiang, the garments of the lotus and the thoroughwort, and the writings that vie with the sun.

苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「明月几时有?把酒问青天」「起舞弄清影,何似在人间」,写把酒问天、超然物外,是水调歌头调最著名的词;张孝祥《水调歌头》则以「买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪」「蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡」写买舟归去、蝉脱蝶梦。两词同用水调歌头词牌写超然物外、旷达自适:一写明月几时有把酒问青天、以问天写旷,一写买得扁舟归去六月下沧浪、以归隐写旷;一为苏轼之超旷、一为张孝祥之豪放,并读正可见水调歌头词牌写旷达的两种情致,皆于归去问天之中见旷达。

临江仙·夜归临皋 Immortals at the River: Returning at Night to Lingao 苏轼 · 同写江海归隐、超脱尘俗,一写小舟从此逝江海寄余生、一写买得扁舟归去蝉脱尘埃外,皆于扁舟江海之中见归隐之志 Both are the lyrics of the return to the rivers — Su Shi's midnight boat at the River, Zhang Xiaoxiang's little boat on the Xiao and the Xiang.

Su Shi's 'Immortals at the River' — 'the night is deep, the wind still, the waves level' — is the ease of the return to the river in the exile; Zhang Xiaoxiang's lyric is the same return, heightened by the Chu: the boat bought, the garments of the lotus and the thoroughwort, and the wake of Qu Yuan's writings.

苏轼《临江仙·夜归临皋》「小舟从此逝,江海寄余生」,写江海寄余生、超脱尘俗,是苏轼写旷达的名篇;张孝祥《水调歌头》则以「买得扁舟归去,此事天公付我,六月下沧浪」「蝉脱尘埃外,蝶梦水云乡」写买舟归去、蝉脱蝶梦。两词同写江海归隐、超脱尘俗:一写小舟从此逝江海寄余生、以江海寄余生写旷,一写买得扁舟归去蝉脱尘埃外、以扁舟蝉脱写洁;一为苏轼之超旷、一为张孝祥之豪放,并读正可见宋词写「归隐超脱」的两种情致,皆于扁舟江海之中见归隐之志。