宋 Song · 词 Ci lyric
三姝媚
The Three Beauties
烟光摇缥瓦。
望晴檐多风,柳花如洒。
锦瑟横床,想泪痕尘影,凤弦常下。
倦出犀帷,频梦见、王孙骄马。
讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩。
惆怅南楼遥夜。
记翠箔张灯,枕肩歌罢。
又入铜驼,遍旧家门巷,首询声价。
可惜东风,将恨与、闲花俱谢。
记取崔徽模样,归来暗写。
I look at the sunny eaves, where the wind is much —
The willow flowers scatter like rain.
The brocade zither lies across the bed,
I think of the tears' traces and the dust's shadow,
And the phoenix strings are often unstrung.
Weary of leaving the rhino-horn curtain,
In dreams I often see the young lord's proud horse.
She avoids saying 'lovesickness' —
Secretly mends her silk skirt,
And is startled at her own waist's slenderness.
Melancholy, the southern tower's far night.
I remember the emerald curtain with the lamps lit,
The shoulder against the pillow, the song done.
Again I enter the Copper Camel Street,
Wandering through the old lanes of the houses,
First asking after her fame and worth.
It is a pity that the east wind
Carries the regret and the idle flowers to wither together.
I remember her looks of Cui Hui,
And coming back, secretly paint them.
Meaning
A lyric of the love remembered and painted after the return, written by Shi Dazu, the late Southern Song master of the ornate lyric. The misty light shimmers on the glazed tiles; the willow flowers scatter like rain under the windy eaves. The brocade zither lies across the bed — the tears' traces and the dust's shadow, the phoenix strings often unstrung: the house of the absent woman. Weary of leaving the rhino-horn curtain, in dreams she often sees the young lord's proud horse; she avoids saying 'lovesickness,' secretly mends her silk skirt, and is startled at her own waist's slenderness — the wasting of the waiting. The poet remembers the southern tower's far night, the emerald curtain with the lamps lit, the shoulder against the pillow, the song done. Again he enters the Copper Camel Street — the great avenue of the old capital — wandering through the old lanes of the houses, first asking after her fame and worth. And the close: the east wind carries the regret and the idle flowers to wither together; he remembers her looks of Cui Hui — the famous beauty of the old story — and coming back, secretly paints them. The lyric is the memory of the waiting woman and the painted return of the lost beauty.
烟光在缥碧的瓦上轻轻摇曳。望那晴空下的檐宇多风,柳花如洒。锦瑟横陈在床边,想那泪痕与尘影之中,凤弦常常松下。倦于走出犀帷,却频频梦见王孙的骄马。讳言相思,偷偷整理绡裙,暗自惊觉腰身已瘦。惆怅南楼的长夜。记得翠箔张灯,枕肩而歌的情景。又入铜驼街,走遍旧家门巷,首先打听那人的声名身价。可惜东风,将怨恨与闲花一同凋谢。记得崔徽的模样,归来后暗自描画。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The misty light shimmers on the glazed tiles. I look at the sunny eaves, where the wind is much — the willow flowers scatter like rain. The brocade zither lies across the bed, I think of the tears' traces and the dust's shadow, and the phoenix strings are often unstrung. Weary of leaving the rhino-horn curtain, in dreams I often see the young lord's proud horse. She avoids saying 'lovesickness' — secretly mends her silk skirt, and is startled at her own waist's slenderness. Melancholy, the southern tower's far night. I remember the emerald curtain with the lamps lit, the shoulder against the pillow, the song done. Again I enter the Copper Camel Street, wandering through the old lanes of the houses, first asking after her fame and worth. It is a pity that the east wind carries the regret and the idle flowers to wither together. I remember her looks of Cui Hui, and coming back, secretly paint them. [Structure and Thought] The lyric moves from the woman's house and her waiting — the unstrung zither, the proud horse of the dreams, the startled waist — through the memory of the past night — the emerald curtain, the lamps, the song — to the return and the search — the Copper Camel Street, the old lanes, the asking after her — and the close's painting of the remembered looks. [Key Technique] The poem's art is the double memory: the woman's waiting is imagined from her house and her dreams, and the poet's own return is the search of the old lanes — the two perspectives meeting in the painted looks of the close. [Emotional Tone] Ornate, tender, and melancholy: the love is carried by the glazed tiles and the phoenix strings, the startled waist and the lamps of the past night, and the close's secret painting of the remembered face.
【白话串讲】 史达祖写《三姝媚》:“烟光摇缥瓦。望晴檐多风,柳花如洒”——“锦瑟横床,想泪痕尘影,凤弦常下”——“讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩”——他写女子相思——讳道相思。 【意象与手法】 上阕以“烟光摇缥瓦”的春景起笔,由锦瑟横床、凤弦常下写物在人亡之悲,以“讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩”写相思之深与消瘦之态;下阕以“又入铜驼,遍旧家门巷,首询声价”写旧地重寻,以“可惜东风,将恨与、闲花俱谢”写情之凋谢;终以“记取崔徽模样,归来暗写”的痴情作结。词风秾丽、情感深挚。 【情感与主旨】 史达祖写怀人相思之作,写春愁中追忆旧日恋人、旧地重寻而情已凋谢的深痛,是史达祖词中写情的佳作。 【名句点睛】 常考“讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩”以讳道相思写消瘦;“可惜东风,将恨与、闲花俱谢”以闲花俱谢写情之凋谢。
Background
Shi Dazu (c. 1150–c. 1220), courtesy name Bangqing, was a late Southern Song lyricist famous for the ornate refinement of his diction, ranked with Wu Wenying as one of the masters of the dense lyric. This 'Three Beauties' lyric, a memory of the love and the waiting woman, shows his art at its most characteristic: the glazed tiles and the phoenix strings, the startled waist, the Copper Camel Street of the old capital, and the painted looks of the close. The 'Copper Camel Street' of the poem is the great avenue of the old capitals, the place of the vanished splendor.
此词为南宋词人史达祖的怀人相思之作。史达祖(约1163—约1220),字邦卿,号梅溪,汴(今河南开封)人,南宋中期词人,与姜夔、高观国等交游,其词以工丽著称,尤善咏物与言情,姜夔称其词「奇秀清逸,有李长吉之韵」。史达祖曾为权相韩侂胄的堂吏,韩败后亦受累,其生平颇有波折,情爱经历亦多所寄托。此词写春愁中的怀人:上阕「烟光摇缥瓦」「柳花如洒」,写春日景色;「锦瑟横床,想泪痕尘影,凤弦常下」,以锦瑟横陈写物在人亡之悲,那琴上泪痕尘影、凤弦常松,正是故人去后无人再弹的凄凉;「倦出犀帷,频梦见、王孙骄马」,写倦于出门、却频频梦见那人的骄马,梦中犹见,醒后更悲;「讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩」,写讳言相思、暗自消瘦的深婉。下阕「又入铜驼,遍旧家门巷,首询声价」,写旧地重游、寻访旧人消息;「可惜东风,将恨与、闲花俱谢」,写东风无情、恨与闲花同谢的凋零;「记取崔徽模样,归来暗写」,用崔徽写真寄情之典,写归来后暗自描画那人的模样。全词以春为背景,以相思为主线,把旧日欢会的追忆与眼前春愁的惆怅交织在一起,是史达祖词中情感最为深挚的篇章之一。
Art
The lyric's art is the art of the double perspective. The first movement imagines the woman's house and her waiting from the outside: the brocade zither lying across the bed with the tears' traces and the dust's shadow, the phoenix strings unstrung; weary of leaving the curtain, she dreams of the young lord's proud horse; she avoids saying 'lovesickness,' secretly mends her silk skirt, and is startled at her own waist's slenderness — the three gestures of the waiting woman's concealment and waste. The second movement is the poet's own memory and return: the southern tower's far night with the lamps and the song, the Copper Camel Street of the old lanes, the first asking after her fame and worth. And the close joins the two: the east wind carries the regret and the flowers to wither; he remembers her looks of Cui Hui and, coming back, secretly paints them — the remembered beauty fixed by the painting.
此词艺术上以「秾丽」与「细节传情」为特色,在春景的铺展中写尽相思的深婉。上阕以「烟光摇缥瓦」的春景起笔,「摇」字写烟光在碧瓦上轻漾,画面迷离而工丽;「望晴檐多风,柳花如洒」,以柳花如洒写春风之态,春意盎然。接着由景入情:「锦瑟横床,想泪痕尘影,凤弦常下」,以锦瑟横床写物在人亡——那琴上的泪痕、尘中的影迹,那常松的凤弦,正是故人去后无人再弹的凄凉;「倦出犀帷,频梦见、王孙骄马」,以「倦出」「频梦见」对举,写相思之深——不敢出门,怕触景伤情,却在梦中频频相见;「讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩」,是全词最动人的细节——讳言相思,却在整理绡裙时暗自惊觉腰身已瘦,一「讳」一「偷」一「惊」之间,写尽相思的深藏与消瘦的无奈。下阕以「惆怅南楼遥夜」顿挫,转入追忆:「记翠箔张灯,枕肩歌罢」,写旧日南楼张灯、枕肩而歌的欢会,温馨而遥远;「又入铜驼,遍旧家门巷,首询声价」,以「又入」「遍」「首询」三个动词,写旧地重游的急切与深情——走遍旧家门巷,首先打听那人的消息;「可惜东风,将恨与、闲花俱谢」,以「可惜」写东风无情,恨与闲花一同凋谢,情之凋零,尽在其中;「记取崔徽模样,归来暗写」,用崔徽写真之典,写归来后暗自描画那人的模样,一「暗」字,写尽深藏心底的痴情。全词由春景而入追忆、由追忆而入眼前,层层转折而情思不断,是史达祖词秾丽深婉风格的集中体现。
Allusions
'The Copper Camel Street' (Tongtuo) alludes to the avenue of the bronze camels of the old capitals — the great street of the vanished splendor, where the poet wanders through the old lanes of the houses. 'Cui Hui' alludes to the famous beauty of the Tang story of Pei Jingzhong and the courtesan Cui Hui: when the lover left, she asked him to paint her likeness; the painting of the remembered looks is the classic figure of the fixed memory of the lost love. 'The phoenix strings' (fengxian) are the zither strings; the rhino-horn curtain (xiwei) is the curtain of the lady's chamber.
此词用典于关键处见深情。「锦瑟」,用李商隐《锦瑟》之典,「锦瑟无端五十弦,一弦一柱思华年」,锦瑟本是抒写华年情思的意象,此词以「锦瑟横床」写物在人亡,暗含「此情可待成追忆」的怅惘;「凤弦」,指琴弦的美称,也暗含「凤凰于飞」的情爱之意,凤弦常松,正是故人去后无人再抚的凄凉。「铜驼」,指洛阳铜驼街,晋时索靖见铜驼荆棘,有「铜驼荆棘」之典,后以「铜驼」指故都、繁华之地,此词「又入铜驼,遍旧家门巷」,写旧地重游,暗含繁华依旧而人事已非之感;「崔徽」为唐代歌妓,与裴敬中相恋,后病,写真寄裴敬中,自誓「为郎憔悴却羞郎」,是写真寄情的千古佳话,此词「记取崔徽模样,归来暗写」,正是以崔徽自况,写归来后暗自描画那人模样、以慰相思的痴情。「王孙骄马」,暗用《楚辞》「王孙游兮不归,春草生兮萋萋」之意,以王孙指所念之人,写其游而不归。这些典故,或写华年之思、或写旧地之叹、或写真寄之情、或写游子不归,皆围绕怀人相思这一核心,织成一张秾丽的情网,正是史达祖词「用事下语精严」的特点。
Commentary
This lyric is one of Shi Dazu's most admired works, quoted for the ornate refinement of its diction and the double memory of its structure. The waiting woman's three gestures — avoiding the word, mending the skirt, startled at the waist — and the secret painting of the close are among the most praised images of the late Song lyric. Critics praise the poem's art: the love remembered from both sides and fixed by the painting.
读此词,最值得注意的是「讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩」写出的深婉。明明相思入骨,却偏要「讳道相思」——不愿让人知道,甚至不愿让自己承认;可身体是诚实的,整理绡裙时,忽然发现腰身瘦了,于是「自惊」——不是惊于消瘦,而是惊于相思之深,深到连自己都未曾察觉,已在不知不觉中瘦了。这一「讳」一「偷」一「惊」之间,写尽了深藏不露的相思:越是讳言,越是深藏;越是深藏,越是消瘦。这是典型的「欲盖弥彰」——嘴上说着不说,身体却出卖了心事。而「记取崔徽模样,归来暗写」的结句,更以崔徽写真之典写尽痴情:那人已经离去,相见无期,便把那人的模样记在心里,归来后暗自描画,画着画着,仿佛那人还在眼前。一个「暗」字,写尽深藏心底的思念与不敢示人的痴情。史达祖的词,向以工丽著称,而此词的动人,正在于秾丽辞采之下那份深挚而不肯明言的真情——越是写得含蓄,越见相思之深,正是此词超越一般怀人词的地方。
Prosody
Line by line
讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩。
She avoids saying 'lovesickness' — secretly mends her silk skirt, and is startled at her own waist's slenderness.
讳言相思,却偷偷整理绡裙,暗自惊觉腰身已经消瘦。
I dare not speak the longing; secretly I smooth the silk skirt, and start at the slimmer waistband.
这一连串细节是全词最动人的所在,也是深藏相思的写照。「讳道相思」,写不愿言说——相思入骨,却偏要讳言,不愿让人知道,甚至不愿让自己承认;「偷理绡裙」,写暗自整理衣裙——那「偷」字,写出一种隐秘的动作,仿佛连整理裙子都要避开人眼;「自惊腰衩」,写惊觉消瘦——整理时忽然发现腰身已瘦,于是「自惊」,惊的不是消瘦,而是相思之深,深到连自己都未曾察觉,已在不知不觉中瘦了。这一「讳」一「偷」一「惊」之间,写尽了欲盖弥彰的相思:越是讳言,越是深藏;越是深藏,越是消瘦。此句以最细腻的动作写最深沉的情感,是史达祖词以细节传情的巅峰之笔。
This chain of details is the ci's most moving place, and the hidden longing's portrait. I dare not speak the longing writes the unwillingness to speak — the longing bone-deep, and yet the insisting-on-concealing, the unwillingness to let others know, even the unwillingness to let oneself admit; secretly I smooth the silk skirt writes the private smoothing of the dress — the one word furtive, writing a hidden action, as if even the skirt's smoothing must avoid the eye; and start at the slimmer waistband writes the surprise at the thinning — at the smoothing, suddenly discovering the waist already slim, hence the self-start, the start not at the thinning, but at the longing's depth, deep to the point of the self's unknowing, already thinned imperceptibly. Between the conceal, the furtive, and the start, exhausting the would-cover-and-yet-reveal longing: the more the concealing, the deeper the hiding; the deeper the hiding, the greater the thinning. This line, writing the deepest feeling through the finest action, Shi Dazu's ci's detail-carries-feeling peak stroke.
又入铜驼,遍旧家门巷,首询声价。
Again I enter the Copper Camel Street, wandering through the old lanes of the houses, first asking after her fame and worth.
又来到铜驼街,走遍旧日的家门巷陌,首先打听那人的声名与消息。
Again I come to the Bronze Camel street, wander all the old doorways and lanes, and first ask of her name and news.
这一句写旧地重游、寻访旧人,是此词追忆与相思的具体展开。「又入铜驼」,写再次来到铜驼街——那是旧日的繁华之地,也是当年欢会的地方,「又」字写重游之意,暗含人事已非的感慨;「遍旧家门巷」,以「遍」字写走遍——不是只看一两处,而是把旧日的家门巷陌都走遍了,寻访之急切、之深情,尽在一个「遍」字;「首询声价」,以「首」字写询问之先——走遍旧地,首先打听那人的声名消息,足见相思之深。这一句,以三个动词「入」「遍」「询」层层推进,把旧地重游的急切与深情写得如在目前,是此词追忆部分最见力度的句子,也为此后的「可惜东风」作了铺垫。
This line writes the old-place revisit and the old-person seeking, this ci's memory and longing's concrete unfolding. Again I come to the Bronze Camel street writes the Bronze Camel street's coming again — that old prosperous place, and that year's tryst place, the one word again writing the revisit meaning, secretly carrying the affairs'-non-as-before sigh; wander all the old doorways and lanes, using the one word all for the wandering-through — not only the one or two places, but the old doorways and lanes all wandered, the seeking's urgency and depth, all within the one word all; first ask of her name and news, using the one word first for the asking's precedence — the old place's wandering, the first thing the asking of her name and news, seeing the longing's depth. This line, through the three verbs enter, wander, and ask advancing layer on layer, writing the old-place revisit's urgency and depth as if before the eyes, this ci's memory part's most forceful line, and storing the ground for the below's pity-the-east-wind.
记取崔徽模样,归来暗写。
I remember her looks of Cui Hui, and coming back, secretly paint them.
记得那人的模样如崔徽一般,归来后暗自描画。
I keep Cui Hui's face in mind, and on my return draw it in secret.
这一句是全词的结穴,以崔徽写真之典写尽痴情。「记取崔徽模样」,用唐代歌妓崔徽写真寄情之典——崔徽与裴敬中相恋,别后病重,乃写真寄与敬中,自誓「为郎憔悴却羞郎」,此词以崔徽指所念之人,写那人如崔徽般美丽深情;「归来暗写」,写归来后暗自描画那人的模样——「归来」写已经离开旧地,「暗写」写暗自描画,一个「暗」字,写尽深藏心底的思念与不敢示人的痴情。那人已经离去,相见无期,便把那人的模样记在心里,归来后暗自描画,画着画着,仿佛那人还在眼前。以「记取」「暗写」收束全词,把相思写成了笔墨间无声的倾诉,痴情而深情,余韵悠长,是史达祖词中情语与痴语交融的绝唱。
This line is the ci's knot, using the Cui Hui portrait allusion to exhaust the crazed feeling. I keep Cui Hui's face in mind uses the Tang singer Cui Hui's portrait-sentiment allusion — Cui Hui and Pei Jingzhong's love, after the parting the serious illness, hence the portrait sent to Jingzhong, vowing for-the-lord-wasted-yet-ashamed-of-the-lord, this ci using Cui Hui for the longed-for person, writing that person's beauty and depth like Cui Hui; on my return draw it in secret, writing the return's after the private drawing of that person's face — the return writing the old place's leaving, the private drawing writing the private sketch, the one word dark, exhausting the heart's-hidden longing and the unshowable craziness. That person already gone, the meeting's no date, hence that person's face kept in the heart, on the return's private drawing, drawing and drawing, as if that person still before the eyes. Closing the whole ci through the keep-in-mind and the private drawing, turning the longing into the ink-and-brush's voiceless confession, crazed and deep, the aftertone long, Shi Dazu's ci's feeling-and-crazed-words fused swan song.
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Yan Jidao's 'Partridge in the Sky' — 'with rainbow sleeves, attentive and diligent' — remembers the dancer of the past years, 'the reunion in the dream'; Shi Dazu's lyric remembers the waiting woman and paints her looks — the two lyrics of the memory that refuses to fade.
晏几道《鹧鸪天》「彩袖殷勤捧玉钟,当年拚却醉颜红」,写「几回魂梦与君同」的相思与「今宵剩把银釭照,犹恐相逢是梦中」的重逢惊喜,是宋词写离别重逢的名篇;史达祖此词「频梦见、王孙骄马」「记取崔徽模样,归来暗写」,同样写别后相思、梦中相见的深情。一写重逢时的恍惚,一写别后的追忆;晏词以「犹恐相逢是梦中」的惊喜写情,史词以「归来暗写」的痴情写思。并读两词,可见宋代词人写「梦」与「相思」的两种笔法,也可见晏几道的清丽与史达祖的秾丽在抒情上的异曲同工。
望江南·梳洗罢 Gazing at the South: Having Washed and Combed My Hair 温庭筠 · 同为倚楼盼归、相思断肠之作,一唐一宋,怀人词一脉相承 Both are the poems of the waiting woman's waste — Wen Tingyun's thousand sails and slanting light, Shi Dazu's startled waist and dreams of the proud horse.Wen Tingyun's 'Gazing at the South' — 'a thousand sails pass, but none is his' — is the Tang model of the woman's watching; Shi Dazu's lyric is the late Song version — the woman avoiding the word, mending her skirt, startled at her waist, and dreaming of the young lord's proud horse.
温庭筠《望江南》「过尽千帆皆不是,斜晖脉脉水悠悠,肠断白洲」,写女子倚楼盼归、千帆过尽而人不归的断肠,是唐词写闺思的名篇;史达祖此词「又入铜驼,遍旧家门巷,首询声价」,同样写寻人不遇的相思断肠。一为唐词之疏朗,一为宋词之秾丽;温词以「千帆皆不是」的直写见愁,史词以「首询声价」的深情写痴。并读两词,可见中国词史从唐五代到南宋,在写「盼归怀人」这一母题上的传承与演变,也可见史达祖词与温词「深美闳约」传统的深厚渊源。
凤凰台上忆吹箫·香冷金猊 Remembering the Flute on the Phoenix Terrace: The Incense Is Cold in the Gold Lion 李清照 · 同为闺中相思、欲说还休之作,一写愁肠百结一写讳道相思,深婉异曲同工 Both are the lyrics of the waiting and the wasting — Li Qingzhao's thinness and the un-writable love, Shi Dazu's startled waist and the painted looks.Li Qingzhao's 'Remembering the Flute on the Phoenix Terrace' — 'this new sorrow, nothing can write it away' — is the woman's lyric of the wasting; Shi Dazu's lyric imagines the same wasting from the man's side — the startled waist, the dreams, and the secret painting of the remembered face.
李清照《凤凰台上忆吹箫》「生怕离怀别苦,多少事、欲说还休」,写别后相思、欲说还休的深婉;史达祖此词「讳道相思,偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩」,同样写讳言相思、暗自消瘦的深婉。一为女性词人直写闺情,一为男性词人代拟相思;李词以「欲说还休」的直白写愁,史词以「偷理绡裙,自惊腰衩」的细节写情,深婉则一。并读两词,可见宋代词人写「欲说还休」之相思的两种笔法,也可见李清照的洗练与史达祖的秾丽在抒情上的异曲同工。