宋 Song · 词 Ci lyric
齐天乐
Joy of All Heaven
宫烟晓散春如雾。
参差护晴窗户。
柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五。
临流笑语。
映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒。
短帽轻鞍,倦游曾遍断桥路。
东风为谁媚妩。
岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许。
前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土。
心期暗数。
总寂寞当年,酒筹花谱。
付与春愁,小楼今夜雨。
Jagged and level, it guards the sunny windows.
The willows' color first divides,
The malt candy's fragrance not yet cold —
It is the hundred and fifth day, Clear Brightness.
By the stream, laughter and talk,
Mirrored in the twelve railings,
The green frowns, the red jealousies.
With a short cap and light saddle,
Weary of wandering, I have ranged the Broken Bridge road everywhere.
The east wind, for whom does it make itself so charming?
The years suddenly move one to sighs —
And what of my two temples?
He who came before, Liu Lang,
The three-lives Du Mu —
What they won was only the dust on their traveling clothes.
In my heart I count in secret,
Always the loneliness of those years,
The wine-counters and the flower-registers.
All given over to the spring sorrow —
In the small tower, tonight's rain.
Meaning
A lyric of the Clear Brightness festival and the passing of years, written by the late Southern Song poet Zhou Mi. The palace incense scatters at dawn, the spring is like mist; the willows' color first divides, the malt candy's fragrance is not yet cold — it is the hundred and fifth day, Clear Brightness, the festival of spring and of the dead. By the stream there is laughter and talk, mirrored in the twelve railings, the green frowns and the red jealousies of the spring flowers. The poet, in his short cap and light saddle, has ranged the Broken Bridge road everywhere. Then the reflection: the east wind makes itself charming — for whom? The years suddenly move him to sighs; what of his two temples? He who came before, Liu Lang, and Du Mu of the three lives — what they won was only the dust on their traveling clothes. He counts in secret the loneliness of those years, the wine-counters and the flower-registers, and gives them all to the spring sorrow — in the small tower, tonight's rain. The lyric is the classic reflection of the aging wanderer at the spring festival.
宫烟晓散春如雾。参差护晴窗户。柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五。临流笑语。映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒。短帽轻鞍,倦游曾遍断桥路。东风为谁媚妩。岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许。前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土。心期暗数。总寂寞当年,酒筹花谱。付与春愁,小楼今夜雨。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The palace incense scatters at dawn, the spring like mist; jagged and level, it guards the sunny windows. The willows' color first divides; the malt candy's fragrance not yet cold — it is the hundred and fifth day, Clear Brightness. By the stream, laughter and talk, mirrored in the twelve railings — the green frowns, the red jealousies. With short cap and light saddle, weary of wandering, I have ranged the Broken Bridge road everywhere. The east wind — for whom does it make itself charming? The years suddenly move me to sighs; and what of my two temples? He who came before, Liu Lang; the three-lives Du Mu — what they won was only the dust on their traveling clothes. In my heart I count in secret the loneliness of those years, the wine-counters and the flower-registers — all given over to the spring sorrow; in the small tower, tonight's rain. [Structure and Thought] The lyric moves from the festival scene (the incense, the willows, the candy, the laughter at the stream) through the poet's place in it (the weary wanderer of the Broken Bridge) to the reflection on time (the east wind, the temples, Liu Lang and Du Mu) and the close in the small tower with the rain. [Key Technique] The poem's art is the contrast of the festival's public joy and the poet's private age: the laughter by the stream, the green frowns and red jealousies of the spring, set against the weary wanderer and his secret counting of the lonely years. [Emotional Tone] Refined, weary, and melancholy: the spring festival is seen through the eyes of the aging wanderer, and the close — the small tower, tonight's rain — gathers the whole reflection into one image of solitude.
【白话串讲】 周密写《齐天乐》:“宫烟晓散春如雾。参差护晴窗户”——“柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五”——“临流笑语。映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒”——“短帽轻鞍,倦游曾遍断桥路”——他写清明——正是清明百五。 【意象与手法】 “宫烟晓散春如雾。参差护晴窗户”写宫烟晓散;“柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五”写清明;“临流笑语。映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒”写临流笑语;结以“付与春愁,小楼今夜雨”以小楼夜雨写春愁。含蓄深婉。 【情感与主旨】 周密写清明春愁之作,写清明时节春景与春愁,以“小楼今夜雨”写春愁之深,是周密词中清丽婉约的代表。 【名句点睛】 常考“柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五”以清明写时令;“付与春愁,小楼今夜雨”以小楼夜雨写春愁。
Background
Zhou Mi (1232–1298), courtesy name Gongjin, styled himself the Grass Window (Caochuang), was a late Southern Song poet, scholar and connoisseur, a member of the elegant literary circle of the last years of the dynasty; after its fall he lived in retirement, compiling and remembering. This lyric was written at the Clear Brightness festival, the spring festival of the hundred and fifth day, and its reflections — the aging wanderer, the lonely years, the spring sorrow — belong to the characteristic mood of the late Song: the enjoyment of the spring shadowed by the sense of passing and, after 1279, of a lost world.
《齐天乐》为南宋词人周密所作词。周密(1232—1298),字公谨,号草窗,先世济南人,后居吴兴(今浙江湖州),南宋词人,与吴文英并称「二窗」。此词写清明春愁。词中「宫烟晓散春如雾。参差护晴窗户」写宫烟晓散;「柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五」写清明百五;「临流笑语。映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒」写临流笑语;「短帽轻鞍,倦游曾遍断桥路」写倦游断桥;「东风为谁媚妩。岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许」写岁华感慨;「前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土」写前度刘郎;「心期暗数。总寂寞当年,酒筹花谱」写酒筹花谱;「付与春愁,小楼今夜雨」写小楼今夜雨。周密此词以清明春愁、小楼今夜雨写其春愁,含蓄深婉,是周密词中的名篇。此篇《齐天乐》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The lyric's art is the art of the festival seen through the veil of age. The opening is bright and particular: the palace incense, the spring like mist, the willows' first color, the malt candy's fragrance, the hundred and fifth day — the festival fixed in its concrete details. The middle shows the public joy: the laughter by the stream, the twelve railings, the green frowns and red jealousies of the flowers. Then the turn: the east wind makes itself charming — for whom? The years move the poet to sighs; what of his temples? The allusion to Liu Lang and Du Mu — the famous wanderers of the past — sets his own wandering in a long line, and their winnings, only the dust on the traveling clothes, is the whole irony of the roving life. The close gathers everything into the small tower and tonight's rain.
此词艺术上以「含蓄深婉、以景写情」见长。全词上片写宫烟晓散与临流笑语,下片写岁华感慨与小楼今夜雨。上片「宫烟晓散春如雾。参差护晴窗户」写宫烟晓散:宫烟晓散春如雾,参差护晴窗户;「柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五」写清明百五:柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五;「临流笑语。映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒」写临流笑语:临流笑语,映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒;「短帽轻鞍,倦游曾遍断桥路」写倦游断桥:短帽轻鞍,倦游曾遍断桥路。下片「东风为谁媚妩。岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许」写岁华感慨:东风为谁媚妩,岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许;「前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土」写前度刘郎:前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土;「心期暗数。总寂寞当年,酒筹花谱」写酒筹花谱:心期暗数,总寂寞当年,酒筹花谱;「付与春愁,小楼今夜雨」写小楼今夜雨:付与春愁,小楼今夜雨。全词含蓄深婉,以景写情,是周密词中的名篇。
Allusions
'Clear Brightness' (Qingming) is the spring festival of the hundred and fifth day after the winter solstice, the day of tomb-visiting and spring outings. 'The Broken Bridge' (Duanqiao) is the famous bridge of the West Lake, the emblem of the wanderer's road. 'Liu Lang' is the poet Liu Yuxi, who returned to the capital after long exile and found the peach trees of the mysterious site grown — the figure of the returning wanderer; 'Du Mu of the three lives' is the Tang poet Du Mu, whose 'three lives' — past, present and future — were a byword for the romantic wanderer. 'The wine-counters and the flower-registers' are the pleasures of the youthful years, counted and found lonely in the memory.
词中「宫烟晓散春如雾」「参差护晴窗户」「柳色初分」「饧香未冷」「正是清明百五」「临流笑语」「映十二阑干翠嚬红妒」「短帽轻鞍倦游曾遍断桥路」「东风为谁媚妩」「岁华顿感慨双鬓何许」「前度刘郎」「三生杜牧」「赢得征衫尘土」「心期暗数」「总寂寞当年酒筹花谱」「付与春愁小楼今夜雨」等语,皆含典故故实。「宫烟晓散春如雾」写宫烟晓散春如雾;「参差护晴窗户」写参差护晴窗户;「柳色初分」写柳色初分;「饧香未冷」写饧香未冷(饧为糖,清明卖饧之俗);「正是清明百五」写正是清明百五(清明在冬至后一百零五日);「临流笑语」写临流笑语;「映十二阑干翠嚬红妒」写映十二阑干翠嚬红妒;「短帽轻鞍倦游曾遍断桥路」写短帽轻鞍倦游曾遍断桥路;「东风为谁媚妩」写东风为谁媚妩;「岁华顿感慨双鬓何许」写岁华顿感慨双鬓何许;「前度刘郎」用刘禹锡「前度刘郎今又来」之典(亦用刘晨入天台遇仙之典),写前度刘郎;「三生杜牧」用杜牧之典(杜牧三生),写三生杜牧;「赢得征衫尘土」写赢得征衫尘土;「心期暗数」写心期暗数;「总寂寞当年酒筹花谱」写总寂寞当年酒筹花谱;「付与春愁小楼今夜雨」写付与春愁小楼今夜雨。词人以清明百五、前度刘郎、三生杜牧等典入词,不着痕迹,而把清明春愁之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。
Commentary
This lyric is one of Zhou Mi's most admired works, quoted for the contrast of the spring festival and the aging heart. The allusions to Liu Lang and Du Mu — the great wanderers whose winnings were only the dust on their clothes — are often cited as the perfect expression of the roving life's irony, and the close in the small tower with tonight's rain is ranked among the finest endings of the late Song. Critics praise the lyric's refinement: the festival's brightness and the reflection's melancholy held in perfect balance.
这首《齐天乐》,是周密写清明春愁之作,写宫烟晓散、临流笑语、小楼今夜雨之情,含蓄深婉。上片写宫烟晓散与临流笑语:「宫烟晓散春如雾。参差护晴窗户」——宫烟晓散春如雾,参差护晴窗户。写宫烟晓散:宫烟晓散春如雾、参差护晴窗户——宫烟晓散、春如雾、参差护晴窗;「柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五」——柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五。写清明百五:柳色初分、饧香未冷,正是清明百五——柳色初分、饧香未冷、清明百五;「临流笑语。映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒」——临流笑语,映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒。写临流笑语:临流笑语、映十二阑干,翠嚬红妒——临流笑语、十二阑干、翠嚬红妒;「短帽轻鞍,倦游曾遍断桥路」——短帽轻鞍,倦游曾遍断桥路。写倦游断桥:短帽轻鞍、倦游曾遍断桥路——短帽轻鞍、倦游遍断桥路。下片写岁华感慨与小楼今夜雨:「东风为谁媚妩。岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许」——东风为谁媚妩,岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许。写岁华感慨:东风为谁媚妩、岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许——东风媚妩、岁华感慨、双鬓何许;「前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土」——前度刘郎(用刘郎之典),三生杜牧(用杜牧之典),赢得征衫尘土。写前度刘郎:前度刘郎、三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土——前度刘郎、三生杜牧、征衫尘土;「心期暗数。总寂寞当年,酒筹花谱」——心期暗数,总寂寞当年,酒筹花谱。写酒筹花谱:心期暗数、总寂寞当年,酒筹花谱——心期暗数、寂寞当年酒筹花谱;「付与春愁,小楼今夜雨」——付与春愁,小楼今夜雨。写小楼今夜雨:付与春愁、小楼今夜雨——付与春愁、小楼今夜雨。这「付与春愁,小楼今夜雨」,是全词之结:以小楼今夜雨写其春愁。全词含蓄深婉,以景写情,正是周密词中的名篇。
Prosody
Line by line
宫烟晓散春如雾。
The palace incense scatters at dawn, the spring like mist,
宫烟晓散春如雾。
The palace smoke scatters at dawn; the spring is like mist.
首句写宫烟晓散,起笔即见其春。「宫烟晓散春如雾」写宫烟晓散春如雾,「宫烟晓散」写宫烟晓散、「春如雾」写春色如雾。一句以「宫烟晓散」写晓烟之散、「春如雾」写春色如雾,写尽宫烟晓散、春色如雾之情。以晓起兴,含蓄而清丽,是「以晓起兴」的妙笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
The opening writes the palace smoke's dawn scattering, the spring present at the first stroke. The palace smoke scatters at dawn; the spring is like mist: the palace-smoke-dawn-scattered writing the dawn smoke's dispersal, the spring-like-mist writing the spring's mist. One line, the dawn's dispersal through the palace smoke, the spring mist through the like-mist, exhausting the palace smoke and the misty spring. Rising on dawn, restrained and fair, a wondrous brush of rising-on-dawn. This line in the few words exhausts the deep meaning, feeling and charm both supreme; its hidden waves between the words, the turns within the plainness, require the repeated savouring to grasp its heart.
柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五。
The willows' color first divides, the malt candy's fragrance not yet cold — it is the hundred and fifth day, Clear Brightness.
柳色初分,饧香未冷,正是清明百五。
The willow color just shows, the malt candy's warmth not yet cold; it is the fifteenth day of the Pure Brightness, a hundred five days after the winter solstice.
此三句写清明百五,是全词点明时令的关键。「柳色初分」写柳色初分,「柳色」写柳色、「初分」写初分;「饧香未冷」写饧香未冷,「饧香」写糖之香、「未冷」写未冷;「正是清明百五」写正是清明百五,「正是」写正是、「清明百五」写清明在冬至后百五日。三句一写柳色初分、一写饧香未冷、一写正是清明百五,以柳色初分写柳新、以饧香未冷写饧香、以清明百五点明时令,写尽柳色初分、饧香未冷、正是清明百五之情。以时写节,含蓄而深婉,是「以时写节」的点睛之笔。
These three lines write the Pure Brightness day, the ci's season-naming key. The willow color just shows writes the willow color and the first showing; the malt candy's warmth not yet cold writes the candy fragrance and the not-yet-cold; it is the fifteenth day of the Pure Brightness, a hundred five days after the winter solstice writes the exactly and the Pure Brightness hundred-five. Three lines, the willow's newness through the first showing, the candy fragrance through the not-yet-cold, the season's naming through the Pure Brightness, exhausting the willow, the candy, and the festival. Writing the festival through the season, restrained and graceful, a telling stroke of festival-through-season.
临流笑语。
By the stream, laughter and talk,
临流笑语。
By the flowing water, laughter and talk.
此句写临流笑语,是全词写游春之乐的关键。「临流笑语」写临流笑语,「临流」写临着流水、「笑语」写笑语之声。一句以「临流」写临水、「笑语」写笑语,写尽临流笑语之情——临水而笑语。以乐写游,含蓄而明快,是「以乐写游」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
This line writes the riverside laughter, the ci's spring-roaming joy key. By the flowing water, laughter and talk: the by-the-stream writing the water's edge, the laughter-and-talk writing the merry voices. One line exhausting the riverside laughter. Writing the roam through joy, restrained and bright, a telling stroke of roam-through-joy. This line in the few words exhausts the deep meaning, feeling and charm both supreme; its hidden waves between the words, the turns within the plainness, require the repeated savouring to grasp its heart.
前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土。
He who came before, Liu Lang, the three-lives Du Mu — what they won was only the dust on their traveling clothes.
前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土。
The Liu Lang of old, the Du Mu of three lives — what I have won is the dust on my traveling robe.
此三句写前度刘郎,是全词写身世之慨的关键。「前度刘郎」写前度刘郎,用刘郎之典写前度刘郎;「三生杜牧」写三生杜牧,用杜牧之典写三生杜牧;「赢得征衫尘土」写赢得征衫尘土,「赢得」写只赢得、「征衫尘土」写征衫之尘土。三句一写前度刘郎、一写三生杜牧、一写赢得征衫尘土,以前度刘郎写重来、以三生杜牧写杜牧、以赢得征衫尘土写只赢得尘土,写尽前度刘郎、三生杜牧、赢得征衫尘土之情。以典写慨,含蓄而深挚,是「以典写慨」的点睛之笔。
These three lines write the Liu Lang of old, the ci's fate-sigh key. The Liu Lang of old uses the Liu Lang allusion for the returned man; the Du Mu of three lives uses the Du Mu allusion; what I have won is the dust on my traveling robe writes the only-won and the traveling robe's dust. Three lines, the return through the Liu Lang of old, the Du Mu through the three lives, the dust-won through the only-won, exhausting the return, the Du Mu, and the dust. Writing sigh through allusion, restrained and deep, a telling stroke of sigh-through-allusion.
付与春愁,小楼今夜雨。
All given over to the spring sorrow — in the small tower, tonight's rain.
付与春愁,小楼今夜雨。
Entrusted to the spring grief: the small tower, tonight's rain.
尾二句写小楼今夜雨,是全词立意的落点。「付与春愁」写付与春愁,「付与」写交付给、「春愁」写春愁;「小楼今夜雨」写小楼今夜雨,「小楼」写小楼、「今夜雨」写今夜之雨。两句一写付与春愁、一写小楼今夜雨,以付与春愁写愁之所付、以小楼今夜雨写夜雨小楼,写尽付与春愁、小楼今夜雨之情。以雨写愁,含蓄而深挚,是全词最动人处,也是「以雨写愁」的点睛之笔。
The closing two lines write the small tower's tonight rain, the landing of the ci's theme. Entrusted to the spring grief: the small tower, tonight's rain: the entrusted-to writing the delivery and the spring grief; the small tower, tonight's rain writing the small tower and the tonight rain. Two lines, the grief's entrusted place through the entrusted-to, the night-tower rain through the small tower, exhausting the entrusted grief and the small tower rain. Writing grief through rain, restrained and deep, the ci's most moving place.
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Yan Shu's 'Silk-Washing Stream' — 'a new song and a cup of wine' — is the Northern Song lyric of the festival and the passing; Zhou Mi's 'Joy of All Heaven' is the late version — the Clear Brightness by the stream, the Liu Lang and Du Mu of the past, and all given over to the spring sorrow in the small tower's rain.
晏殊《浣溪沙·一曲新词酒一杯》「无可奈何花落去,似曾相识燕归来」,写春逝之无可奈何,是宋词写惜时的名篇;周密《齐天乐》则以「宫烟晓散春如雾」「付与春愁,小楼今夜雨」写宫烟晓散、小楼今夜雨。两词同写春景游赏、无可奈何:一写无可奈何花落去、以花落燕归写惜时,一写付与春愁小楼今夜雨、以夜雨写愁;一为晏殊之温润、一为周密之清婉,并读正可见宋词写「春景无可奈何」的两种笔法,皆于春景之中见无可奈何。
虞美人·春花秋月何时了 The Fair Yu: When Will the Spring Flowers and Autumn Moon End? 李煜 · 同写岁华感慨、故人难留,一写春花秋月何时了往事知多少、一写岁华顿感慨双鬓何许,皆于岁华之中见感慨 Both are the lyrics of the passing and the sorrow — Li Yu's eastward river, Zhou Mi's small tower rain.Li Yu's 'Fair Yu' — 'the sorrow, like the spring water, flows eastward' — is the measure of the ruined life; Zhou Mi's lyric is the quieter version — the spring like mist, the festival passing, and the sorrow given over to the small tower's rain.
李煜《虞美人·春花秋月何时了》「春花秋月何时了,往事知多少」,写岁华感慨、往事难追,是写愁的千古名篇;周密《齐天乐》则以「东风为谁媚妩。岁华顿感慨,双鬓何许」「前度刘郎,三生杜牧,赢得征衫尘土」写岁华感慨、赢得征衫尘土。两词同写岁华感慨、故人难留:一写春花秋月何时了往事知多少、以春水写愁,一写岁华顿感慨双鬓何许、以双鬓写老;一为帝王之血泪、一为周密之清婉,并读正可见词写「岁华感慨」的两种情致,皆于岁华之中见感慨。