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清平乐·年年雪里

Pure, Serene Music: Year after Year in the Snow

李清照

Li Qingzhao

咏梅Theme 怀旧memory

年年雪里。
常插梅花醉。
挼尽梅花无好意。
赢得满衣清泪。
今年海角天涯。
萧萧两鬓生华。
看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花。

Year after year in the snow,
I used to pin plum blossoms in my hair, half drunk with joy.
I have rubbed all the blossoms away, and nothing good is in my heart —
I have won only a robe full of clear tears.
This year I am at the corner of the earth and the edge of the sea,
My temples turning gray, bleak and thin.
Watching how the evening wind rises,
I know it will be hard indeed to look on the plum blossoms.
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Meaning

A lyric of old age and loss, written by Li Qingzhao in the years after the fall of the Northern Song, when she had lost her husband Zhao Mingcheng and was wandering as a refugee in the south. The lyric contrasts three times of looking at the plum: the first stanza recalls the happy years when she pinned plum blossoms in her hair, half drunk with joy; then a middle phase when she rubbed the blossoms away, winning only tears; and this year, at the corner of the earth, her temples gray, watching the evening wind rise and knowing that it will be hard indeed to look on the plum blossoms. The plum, once the flower of joy, has become the flower of loss: the wind rising at evening will blow the blossoms away, as it has blown away her world.

年年雪里。常插梅花醉。挼尽梅花无好意。赢得满衣清泪。今年海角天涯。萧萧两鬓生华。看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] Year after year in the snow, I used to put plum blossoms in my hair and be drunk with joy. I have rubbed all the blossoms away, and there is nothing good in my heart — I have won only a robe full of clear tears. This year I am at the corner of the earth; my two temples are turning gray. I watch how the evening wind rises, and I know it will be hard indeed to look on the plum blossoms. [Structure and Thought] The lyric is built on a three-part autobiography in miniature: the happy past (plum blossoms in the hair), the sorrowing middle (the rubbed-away blossoms, the robe of tears), and the desolate present (the corner of the earth, the gray temples, the rising wind). [Key Technique] The poem's art is the movement of the plum through the speaker's life: from ornament to grief to a flower that can no longer be looked on — the constant object measuring the change of a life. The final lines join the two sorrows: the gray temples and the rising evening wind that will scatter the blossoms, as it has scattered her world. [Emotional Tone] Restrained and desolate: the grief of the widowed refugee is never stated, only measured against the plum blossoms and the wind.

【白话串讲】 李清照写《清平乐·年年雪里》:“年年雪里。常插梅花醉”——往年雪中插梅赏玩。“挼尽梅花无好意。赢得满衣清泪”——如今揉碎梅花,却是满衣清泪。“今年海角天涯。萧萧两鬓生华”——“看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花”——她流落天涯,无心赏梅。 【意象与手法】 此词是李清照写赏梅与身世的名篇,以三处赏梅的今昔对照写身世的变迁,是李清照词中「以咏梅写身世」的名篇。上片忆昔:「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」写年年雪里插梅而醉;「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」写挼梅无好意的清泪。下片伤今:「今年海角天涯,萧萧两鬓生华」写今年天涯两鬓生华;「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」写晚来风势、难看梅花,是千古名句。全词以三处赏梅(昔日的醉梅、中年的挼梅、晚年的看梅)写身世的变迁,是李清照「以咏梅写身世」的名篇。 【情感与主旨】 此词约作于南宋建炎三年(1129)之后,时李清照夫赵明诚已卒(建炎三年八月卒于建康),李清照孤身漂泊于江南(海角天涯)。李清照前期生活优裕(与赵明诚金石书画、赏梅吟诗),后期(南渡后)夫死家破、孤身漂泊。此词即写其晚年(或南渡后)赏梅的今昔之感。词中「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」忆昔日的醉梅——年年雪里,常插梅花醉,写尽早年赏梅的欢愉(雪里插梅,插梅而醉);「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」忆中年的挼梅——挼尽梅花无好意(把梅花揉碎,没有好心情),赢得满衣清泪(落得满衣清泪),写尽中年赏梅的愁绪;「今年海角天涯,萧萧两鬓生华」写今年的天涯白发——今年海角天涯(漂泊到天涯海角),萧萧两鬓生华(两鬓萧萧,生了白发),写尽晚年的漂泊与衰老;「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」写晚来风势、难看梅花——看那晚来风势(傍晚的风势),故应难看梅花(所以应该难以看到梅花了),那「难看梅花」写尽晚年赏梅的无奈——不是不想看梅,而是风势太大(时局动荡),难以看梅了。全词以三处赏梅的今昔对照写身世的变迁,那「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」的欢愉与「难看梅花」的无奈,写尽李清照从欢愉到飘零的一生,是「以咏梅写身世」的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“年年雪里,常插梅花醉”写昔日赏梅之乐;“看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花”写晚来难看梅,以三处赏梅写身世变迁。

Background

Li Qingzhao (1084–c. 1155) was the greatest woman poet of the Song dynasty, the wife of the scholar Zhao Mingcheng, with whom she shared a brilliant life of collecting, writing and connoisseurship in the north. The fall of the Northern Song in 1127 and Zhao's death in 1129 destroyed that life; Li Qingzhao spent her remaining years as a refugee in the south, carrying the remnants of her collection and writing lyrics of loss. This lyric, written in those years, is one of her most famous: the plum blossoms of the happy past and the rising wind of the desolate present condense her whole biography into a few lines.

此词约作于南宋建炎三年(1129)之后,是李清照写赏梅与身世的词。李清照(1084-约1155)号易安居士,济南人,是宋代婉约词的代表。她早年生活优裕,与夫赵明诚共同金石书画、诗词唱和;靖康之变后南渡,建炎三年(1129)赵明诚病卒于建康(今南京),李清照孤身漂泊于江南(辗转于建康、越州、台州、金华等地,故称「海角天涯」),晚景凄凉。此词即写其南渡后赏梅的今昔之感,是「以咏梅写身世」的名篇。词中「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」忆昔日的醉梅——「年年雪里」写年年雪中,「常插梅花醉」写常插梅花而醉(早年赏梅,雪里插梅,插梅而醉),写尽早年赏梅的欢愉;「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」忆中年的挼梅——「挼尽梅花无好意」写把梅花揉碎、没有好意(好心情),「赢得满衣清泪」写落得满衣清泪,那「挼尽梅花」写尽愁绪(揉碎梅花以泄愁),「满衣清泪」写尽中年的愁泪——那挼梅无好意、满衣清泪,写尽中年(南渡前后)赏梅的愁绪;「今年海角天涯,萧萧两鬓生华」写今年的天涯白发——「今年海角天涯」写今年漂泊到海角天涯(南渡后的漂泊),「萧萧两鬓生华」写两鬓萧萧(萧疏)生了白发,那「海角天涯」写尽漂泊、「两鬓生华」写尽衰老,写尽晚年的漂泊与衰老;「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」写晚来风势、难看梅花——「看取晚来风势」写看那傍晚的风势,「故应难看梅花」写所以应该难以看到梅花了,那「晚来风势」既写傍晚的风(自然的风),也暗写晚年的时局(动荡的风雨),「难看梅花」写尽晚年赏梅的无奈——不是不想看梅,而是风势太大(时局动荡),难以看梅了。此词是李清照「以咏梅写身世」的名篇,那「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」的欢愉与「难看梅花」的无奈,写尽李清照从欢愉到飘零的一生,是理解其「南渡后心境」的关键作品。

Art

The lyric's art is the art of the object through time. The plum blossom appears three times, each time with a different value: in the first stanza, pinned in the hair in the happy snows, it is the ornament of joy; in the middle, rubbed away with no good in the heart, it is the emblem of grief — 'I have won only a robe full of clear tears'; in the present, it is the flower that can no longer be looked on, because the rising evening wind will scatter it as it has scattered her world. The three plum-blossom moments are the three acts of a life, and the final couplet — the gray temples and the wind — seals the autobiography without a single word of direct complaint.

此词的艺术特色可从四个层面解析。其一,以三处赏梅写身世的构思。全词以三处赏梅的今昔对照写身世的变迁——「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」写早年的醉梅(欢愉),「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」写中年的挼梅(愁绪),「今年海角天涯」「难看梅花」写晚年的看梅(无奈),三处赏梅,层层递进,写尽从欢愉到飘零的一生。其二,以动作写心境的递进。「常插梅花醉」以「插梅」「醉」写早年的欢愉(插梅而醉),「挼尽梅花」以「挼」(揉搓)写中年的愁绪(揉碎梅花以泄愁),「难看梅花」以「难看」写晚年的无奈(风势太大、难以看梅),三个动作(插、挼、看)写尽心境的变化。其三,以对照写今昔。「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」的欢愉与「今年海角天涯,萧萧两鬓生华」的飘零对照,那「年年」与「今年」的对照、「醉」与「生华」的对照,写尽身世的变迁。其四,以「难看梅花」写收束。「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」以「晚来风势」写风大难赏,以「难看梅花」写赏梅的无奈,那「难看梅花」暗含晚年的时局(动荡的风雨),以无奈收束、余味悠长。四重手法层层推进,使此词成为李清照词中「以咏梅写身世」的名篇。

Allusions

The plum blossom is the flower of winter and of purity in Chinese poetry, the favorite of the Song aesthetic; for Li Qingzhao it was also the flower of her northern home and her happy marriage. 'The corner of the earth and the edge of the sea' (tianya haijiao) is the conventional hyperbole for the far south of exile, where the refugee finds herself. 'Rubbing the blossoms' (rou) is the gesture of fidgeting with the flower in the hand — the unconscious motion of a troubled heart.

此词的意象与用语深植于咏梅与身世传统。「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」忆昔日的醉梅——「年年雪里」写年年雪中(令人想到「踏雪寻梅」的雅事与「雪里」的咏梅传统),「常插梅花醉」写常插梅花而醉(「插梅花」令人想到「鬓边插梅」的雅事与「梅花插鬓」的传统,「醉」写赏梅的沉醉,也暗写早年生活的优裕),那「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」写尽早年赏梅的欢愉,令人想到「梅须逊雪三分白,雪却输梅一段香」(卢梅坡《雪梅》)的雪梅意象。「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」忆中年的挼梅——「挼尽梅花」写把梅花揉碎(「挼」写揉搓,令人想到「揉碎」的动作与「挼花」的愁绪),「无好意」写没有好意(好心情),「赢得满衣清泪」写落得满衣清泪(「赢得」令人想到「赢得青楼薄幸名」(杜牧《遣怀》)的「赢得」用法,此处反用其意,写「赢得」满衣清泪的凄凉),那「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」写尽中年的愁绪,令人想到「泪眼问花花不语」(欧阳修《蝶恋花》)的愁泪意象。「今年海角天涯,萧萧两鬓生华」写今年的天涯白发——「海角天涯」写天涯海角(令人想到「天涯地角有穷时,只有相思无尽处」(晏殊《玉楼春》)的天涯意象与「海角」的漂泊意象),「萧萧两鬓生华」写两鬓萧萧生华(「萧萧」写鬓发的萧疏,令人想到「萧萧白发」的衰老意象与「白了少年头」的白发传统——岳飞「莫等闲,白了少年头」),那「海角天涯」写尽南渡后的漂泊、「两鬓生华」写尽晚年的衰老。「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」写晚来风势、难看梅花——「看取晚来风势」写看那傍晚的风势(「看取」写察看,令人想到「试看」的观察),「难看梅花」写难以看梅(「难看」写难以观赏,令人想到「绿肥红瘦」(李清照《如梦令》)的惜花传统与「梅子黄时雨」的愁意象),那「晚来风势」既写傍晚的风,也暗写晚年的时局,令人想到「风雨如晦」的动荡意象——那「难看梅花」暗含「风雨催花」的惜花与「时局动荡」的无奈。全词化用杜牧、岳飞、晏殊(及李清照自己的《如梦令》)的意象与传统,以咏梅写身世,正是李清照「以咏物写身世」的本领。

Commentary

This lyric is one of Li Qingzhao's most famous works and one of the supreme lyrics of loss in the language, quoted for the compression of a whole life into three plum-blossom moments. The final couplet — the evening wind rising, the plum blossoms hard to look on — is often ranked among the finest closings of the ci, the natural wind that will scatter the blossoms carrying the whole weight of the destroyed world. Critics praise the lyric's restraint: the widow's grief is never named, only measured against the flower and the wind.

此词历来被推为李清照「以咏梅写身世」的名篇,也是「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」等名句的出处。历代论者对此词评价极高:论者多指出此词以三处赏梅的今昔对照写身世的变迁,以「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」写中年的愁绪,以「难看梅花」写晚年的无奈,是李清照晚年词中的代表作。在文学史上,此词的特殊价值在于:它以三处赏梅写出了李清照的一生——那「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」写早年的欢愉(与赵明诚赏梅吟诗、生活优裕),那「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」写中年的愁绪(南渡前后的丧乱),那「今年海角天涯,萧萧两鬓生华」写晚年的飘零(夫死家破、孤身漂泊),那「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」写晚年赏梅的无奈——三处赏梅(醉梅、挼梅、看梅),写尽从欢愉到飘零的一生,正是「以咏梅写身世」的典范。词中「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」写早年的欢愉,是名句;「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」写晚年的无奈,更是千古名句——那「晚来风势」暗含时局的动荡,「难看梅花」暗含身世的飘零,那梅花,正是李清照一生的见证。此词与李清照的《声声慢》(「寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清」)一样,都是南渡后的名篇,一以咏梅写身世,一以叠字写愁绪。对于今日读者,此词是理解李清照「南渡后心境」与「以咏物写身世」手法的窗口,也是感受中国词「咏梅」传统的典范——那雪里插梅的醉、挼梅的清泪、天涯的两鬓、晚来风势中的梅花,穿越千年,仍在诉说着一个女词人从欢愉到飘零的一生。

Prosody

Form Qingpingle (Pure, Serene Music), a short lyric of forty-six characters词(清平乐,双调四十六字)
Rhyme The level-tone rhymes zui, lei, hua and hua echo in the qi rhyme group; the third line of each stanza shifts to oblique — yi and shi — in the tune's characteristic pattern.上片押仄声寘未韵(里、醉、意、泪),下片押平声麻佳韵(涯、华、花),上片仄韵短促,下片平韵悠长,仄平转换,正合其先忆昔后伤今的风格。
Tone pattern The first stanza is soft with memory and grief; the second opens into the wide desolation of the corner of the earth; the final couplet darkens with the rising wind and closes on the long, quiet 'hua' (flower) — the cadence of a grief that can no longer look.此词为「清平乐」词牌,双调四十六字,上片四仄韵、下片三平韵,仄平转换,以长短句的错落为抒情服务。全词按内容可分为两片:上片忆昔(年年雪里、常插梅花醉、挼尽梅花无好意、赢得满衣清泪);下片伤今(今年海角天涯、萧萧两鬓生华、看取晚来风势、故应难看梅花)。声调上,全词上片仄韵短促(里、醉、意、泪),写忆昔的愁绪;下片平韵悠长(涯、华、花),写伤今的悠长,仄平转换,正合其先忆昔后伤今的风格。
Reading note This is a Pure, Serene Music ci by Li Qingzhao. The three seasons of the plum trace the three seasons of her life: in the snow, half drunk with joy, she pinned the blossoms in her hair; then she rubbed them all away with nothing good in her heart, winning only a robe full of clear tears; and this year, at the corner of the earth and the edge of the sea, with the evening wind rising, the plum will be hard indeed to look on. The three stanzas are the biography of her ruin.此词是「清平乐」双调小令,以上片仄韵写忆昔、下片平韵写伤今,正是李清照「以词写身世」的本领。全词两片:上片忆昔(年年雪里、常插梅花醉、挼尽梅花无好意、赢得满衣清泪),下片伤今(今年海角天涯、萧萧两鬓生华、看取晚来风势、故应难看梅花)。声调上,全词上片仄韵急促、下片平韵悠长,配合「常插梅花醉」的欢愉与「难看梅花」的无奈,全篇音节急促转悠长,正合其忆昔伤今的身世之感。诵读此词,宜以欢愉的语调读上片的忆昔(常插梅花醉),以低回的语调读下片的伤今(难看梅花),尤其「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」两句,要读得无奈而深沉,方能传达出李清照「以咏梅写身世」的深意。李清照词以「婉约」著称,此词正是其「以咏梅写身世」的经典。

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挼尽梅花无好意。

I have rubbed all the blossoms away, and nothing good is in my heart —

把梅花揉碎殆尽,却没有好心情。

I crush all the plum blossoms, yet my mood is not fair.

这句是写中年愁绪的名句,以「挼尽梅花」写揉碎梅花以泄愁,传神而深沉。「挼尽梅花」写把梅花揉碎殆尽,「挼」写揉搓的动作——那「挼」不是「赏」(赏梅)、不是「插」(插梅),而是「揉」(揉碎梅花),那「挼尽」写尽揉碎梅花的动作——把梅花揉碎、揉尽,写尽愁极而揉梅的动作;「无好意」写没有好心情——那揉梅之时,心绪不佳,「无好意」写尽揉梅时的愁绪——不是赏梅,而是揉梅;不是欢愉,而是愁绪。这句的深意在于:它以「挼尽梅花无好意」写出了中年赏梅的愁绪——那「挼尽梅花」不是赏梅,而是以揉碎梅花泄愁(把心中之愁揉进梅花),那「无好意」写尽愁极而揉梅的心绪;而从早年的「常插梅花醉」(插梅而醉)到中年的「挼尽梅花无好意」(揉梅而泣),一「插」一「挼」,正是身世的变迁——那「挼」字写尽愁之深,不是一般的愁,而是愁到要把梅花揉碎,正是李清照中年(南渡前后,历经丧乱)心境的写照。以「挼尽梅花」写泄愁、以「无好意」写心绪,正是李清照「以动作写心境」的本领,也让这句成为写中年愁绪的名句。

This line is a famous verse of the middle years' grief, writing the crushing-plum-to-vent grief through the crush-all-the-plum, vivid and deep. I crush all the plum blossoms, yet my mood is not fair writes the plum's crushing — the word crush writing the rubbing action — the crush not the admiring (admiring the plum), not the wearing (wearing the plum), but the rubbing (crushing the plum), the crush-all exhausting the plum's rubbing action — crushing the plum, rubbing it all out, exhausting the grief-extreme's plum-rubbing action; no fair mood writes the bad mood — the plum-rubbing time, the mood low, the no-fair-mood exhausting the plum-rubbing grief — not the admiring, but the rubbing; not the joy, but the grief. This line's deep meaning lies in: the crush-all-the-plum-and-no-fair-mood writing the middle years' plum-admiring grief — the crush-all-the-plum not the admiring, but the venting of grief through the plum's crushing (rubbing the heart's grief into the plum), the no-fair-mood exhausting the grief-extreme's plum-rubbing mood; and from the early years' often-wearing-the-plum-and-drunk (the wearing and the drunkenness) to the middle years' crush-all-the-plum-and-no-fair-mood (the rubbing and the weeping), one wearing one crush, precisely the fate's change — the word crush exhausting the grief's depth, not the ordinary grief, but the grief to the point of crushing the plum, precisely Li Qingzhao's middle years (the south flight's before and after, through the chaos) mood's portrait. Writing the grief-venting through the crush-all-the-plum, the mood through the no-fair-mood, precisely Li Qingzhao's craft of writing mood through action, making this line a famous verse of the middle years' grief.

赢得满衣清泪。

I have won only a robe full of clear tears.

落得满衣清泪。

And win only a robe of clear tears.

这句是写中年愁泪的名句,以「赢得满衣清泪」写揉梅之后的清泪满衣,凄婉而深沉。「赢得」写落得(那「赢得」反用其意——别人「赢得」功名、薄幸名,李清照却「赢得」满衣清泪,写尽落得的凄凉),「满衣清泪」写清泪满衣(泪落满衣),那「赢得满衣清泪」写尽揉梅之后的清泪满衣——揉梅泄愁,愁未解而泪满衣,正是愁极而泣。这句的深意在于:它以「赢得满衣清泪」写出了中年赏梅的愁泪——那「挼尽梅花无好意」是揉梅泄愁,那「赢得满衣清泪」是揉梅之后的愁泪——揉尽梅花,愁绪未解,反而清泪满衣,写尽愁之深;而那「赢得」二字,更写尽落得的凄凉——别人赢得功名、赢得美名,李清照却「赢得」满衣清泪,那「赢得」反用其意,写尽中年(南渡前后,历经丧乱)的凄凉;而这两句(挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪)与早年的「常插梅花醉」对照,正是身世的变迁——从插梅而醉的欢愉,到揉梅而泣的愁泪,那「满衣清泪」写尽李清照中年的愁绪与身世的变迁。以「赢得」写落得、以「满衣清泪」写愁泪,正是李清照「以动作写心境」的本领,也让这句成为写中年愁绪的名句。

This line is a famous verse of the middle years' grief tears, writing the plum-rubbing's after robe of tears through the win-only-a-robe-of-clear-tears, plaintive and deep. The word win writes the ending up (the word win's reversed meaning — others win rank and the faithless name, and Li Qingzhao wins the robe of clear tears, exhausting the ending-up bleakness); the robe of clear tears writes the clear tears on the robe (the tears wetting the robe), the win-only-a-robe-of-clear-tears exhausting the plum-rubbing's after tears — the plum-rubbing grief-venting, the grief unrelieved and the tears on the robe, precisely the grief-extreme's weeping. This line's deep meaning lies in: the win-only-a-robe-of-clear-tears writing the middle years' plum-admiring grief tears — the crush-all-the-plum-and-no-fair-mood the plum-rubbing grief-venting, the win-only-a-robe-of-clear-tears the plum-rubbing's after grief tears — the plum crushed, the grief unrelieved, and yet the clear tears on the robe, exhausting the grief's depth; and the word win further exhausting the ending-up bleakness — others win rank, win fame, and Li Qingzhao wins the robe of clear tears, the word win's reversed meaning exhausting the middle years' (the south flight's before and after, through the chaos) bleakness; and these two lines (the crush-all-the-plum-and-no-fair-mood, the win-only-a-robe-of-clear-tears) set against the early years' often-wearing-the-plum-and-drunk, precisely the fate's change — from the wearing-and-drunk joy to the rubbing-and-weeping grief, the robe of clear tears exhausting Li Qingzhao's middle years' grief and fate's change. Writing the ending-up through the win, the grief tears through the robe of clear tears, precisely Li Qingzhao's craft of writing mood through action, making this line a famous verse of the middle years' grief.

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挼 'To rub, to crush' — rubbing the plum blossoms in the hand, the gesture of the ruined joy. 「挼」字是写中年愁绪的关键字,一个「挼」字写尽揉碎梅花的动作与愁绪,传神而深沉。挼者,揉搓也。李清照以「挼尽梅花无好意」写梅花,一个「挼」字,至少有双重意味:其一,写揉梅之动作——「挼尽梅花」写把梅花揉碎殆尽,「挼」写揉搓的动作——那「挼」不是「赏」(赏梅)、不是「插」(插梅),而是「揉」(揉碎梅花),那「挼尽」写尽揉碎梅花的动作——把梅花揉碎、揉尽,写尽愁极而揉梅的动作;其二,写愁绪之深沉——「挼」字暗写愁绪——那「挼尽梅花」不是赏梅,而是以揉碎梅花泄愁(把心中之愁揉进梅花),那「挼」字写尽愁之深——不是一般的愁,而是愁到要把梅花揉碎,那「挼」字写尽中年(南渡前后,历经丧乱)的愁绪。以「挼」写梅花,正是李清照炼字的本领:一个「挼」字,既是写揉梅的动作(揉碎梅花),也是写愁绪的深沉(愁极而揉梅),更是写身世的变迁(从早年的「插梅」到晚年的「挼梅」——插梅是欢愉,挼梅是愁绪,一「插」一「挼」,写尽身世的变迁)——那「挼」字,把揉碎梅花的动作与愁极而泣的心境融为一体。若换作「折」「摘」等字,则或失其「揉碎」的泄愁,或失其与「插梅」的对照;唯「挼」字,以一字写尽揉碎梅花的动作与中年的愁绪,也让「挼尽梅花无好意」成为写中年愁绪的名句。
难看 'Hard indeed to look on' — the evening wind rising and the plum blossoms hard to look on, the close of the ruined spring. 「难看」二字是写晚年无奈的关键字,以「难看」写风大难赏梅,也暗写身世的飘零,含蓄而深沉。难看,难以看到、难以观赏也。李清照以「故应难看梅花」写梅花,一个「难看」,至少有双重意味:其一,写风大之难赏——「难看梅花」写难以看到梅花,「难看」写难以观赏——那晚来的风势太大,梅花怕已吹落,难以看到了,「难看」写尽风大难赏的无奈;其二,写身世之飘零——「难看」不仅写风大难赏,也暗写身世的飘零——那梅花在风势中难以自保,正如李清照自己在时局中飘零,「难看梅花」的「难看」,既是风大看不到梅,也是身世飘零难再赏梅——从早年的「常插梅花醉」到晚年的「难看梅花」,那「难看」写尽晚年的无奈与飘零。以「难看」写梅花,正是李清照炼字的本领:一个「难看」,既是写风大难赏的自然(晚来风势大,梅花难看到),也是写身世飘零的无奈(时局动荡,身世飘零,难再赏梅),更是写赏梅心境的变迁(早年插梅而醉,晚年难看梅花)——那「难看」二字,把自然的难赏与身世的飘零融为一体,写尽晚年的无奈。若换作「难见」「难赏」等词,则或失其「看」的无奈,或失其与「插梅」「挼梅」的对照(插、挼、看,三个动作写尽身世);唯「难看」二字,以两字写尽风大难赏与身世飘零的无奈,也让「故应难看梅花」成为千古名句——那「难看梅花」,正是李清照晚年「身世飘零」的写照。

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声声慢·寻寻觅觅 Slow Slow Song: Seeking, Seeking 李清照 · 同词人写南渡愁绪,一写叠字一写咏梅 Both are Li Qingzhao's late lyrics of the ruined life — the seeking of the slow song, the rubbing of the plum blossoms in the snow.

Li Qingzhao's 'Slow Slow Song' — 'seeking, seeking, searching, searching' — is the supreme late lyric of her desolation; 'Year after Year in the Snow' is the shorter version, the same life told through the plum blossoms of the three seasons.

《声声慢·寻寻觅觅》「寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚」「这次第,怎一个愁字了得」以叠字写南渡后的愁绪,是李清照写愁的名篇。此词《清平乐·年年雪里》则「挼尽梅花无好意,赢得满衣清泪」,以咏梅写南渡后的身世,是李清照写愁的名篇。同为写南渡愁绪,一以「叠字」写愁(寻寻觅觅),一以「咏梅」写身世(年年雪里);一写「怎一个愁字了得」的愁,一写「难看梅花」的无奈。两词对读,可见李清照写愁的两种笔法——叠字的直写与咏梅的婉转。

如梦令·昨夜雨疏风骤 Dreamlike Song: Last Night the Wind Was Fierce, the Rain Sparse 李清照 · 同词人写惜梅问花,一写惜春一写身世 Both are the plum poems of the same poet — the young woman's question of the storm, the old woman's rubbing of the blossoms.

Li Qingzhao's early 'Dreamlike Song' — 'last night the wind was fierce, the rain sparse' — asks who has ruined the green and fattened the red; 'Year after Year in the Snow' is the late answer — the blossoms rubbed away, the robe full of tears, and the spring irrecoverable.

《如梦令·昨夜雨疏风骤》「试问卷帘人,却道海棠依旧。知否,知否,应是绿肥红瘦」写惜春问花的「绿肥红瘦」,是李清照早年写惜花的名篇。此词《清平乐·年年雪里》则「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」,写赏梅的身世之感,是李清照晚年写咏梅的名篇。同为写惜花问梅,一写早年的「绿肥红瘦」(惜春),一写晚年的「难看梅花」(身世);一写惜春的少女情怀,一写飘零的晚年无奈。两词对读,可见李清照惜花问梅的两种心境——早年的清新与晚年的深沉。

卜算子·咏梅 Song of Divination: Ode to the Plum 陆游 · 同为咏梅写身世,一写孤芳一写飘零 Both are the plum poems of the lonely assertion — Lu You's broken bridge and scattered mud, Li Qingzhao's snow and tears.

Lu You's 'Song of Divination: Ode to the Plum' — 'apart from the post, outside the broken bridge' — asserts the plum's lonely fragrance; Li Qingzhao's poem uses the plum of the three seasons to tell the ruin of a life — the blossom that was pinned, rubbed, and at last hard to look on.

陆游《卜算子·咏梅》「驿外断桥边,寂寞开无主」「零落成泥碾作尘,只有香如故」以梅花写孤芳自守的品格,是宋人咏梅的名篇。李清照《清平乐·年年雪里》则「年年雪里,常插梅花醉」「看取晚来风势,故应难看梅花」,以梅花写身世的飘零,是宋人咏梅的名篇。同为咏梅写身世,陆游写「零落成泥碾作尘」的孤芳(咏梅),李清照写「难看梅花」的飘零(年年雪里);一写「只有香如故」的坚守,一写「满衣清泪」的愁绪。两词对读,可见宋人咏梅的两种心境——陆游的孤芳自守与李清照的身世飘零。