宋 Song · 词 Ci lyric
清平乐
Pure, Serene Music
候蛩凄断。
人语西风岸。
月落沙平江似练。
望尽芦花无雁。
暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情。
只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声。
Men speak on the bank in the west wind.
The moon has set, the sand is level, the river like silk;
I gaze to the end of the reeds, and there are no wild geese.
In secret it makes the sorrow of the wanderer wither,
Pitiable — night after night his heart is bound to home.
There is only one branch of the wutong leaves,
And one does not know how much autumn sound it holds.
Meaning
A lyric of autumn sorrow, written by the late Song poet Zhang Yan after the fall of the Song dynasty. The season's crickets cry, broken and desolate; men speak on the bank in the west wind. The moon has set, the sand lies level, the river stretches like silk; the poet gazes to the end of the reeds, and there are no wild geese — no messengers, no letters, no hope. In secret the autumn makes his heart wither like the wanderer Yu Xin of old, whose homesickness bound his heart night after night. And the close is the poem's famous miniature: there is only one branch of the wutong leaves, and one does not know how much autumn sound it holds — the single leaf that contains the whole season's grief.
候蛩凄断。人语西风岸。月落沙平江似练。望尽芦花无雁。暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情。只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The season's crickets cry, broken and desolate. Men speak on the bank in the west wind. The moon has set, the sand is level, the river like silk. I gaze to the end of the reeds — there are no wild geese. In secret it makes the wanderer's heart wither; pitiable, night after night he is bound with longing. Only one branch of wutong leaves remains — and one does not know how much autumn sound it holds. [Structure and Thought] The lyric moves from the outer autumn (the crickets, the west wind, the moonless river) through the empty gaze (no wild geese) to the inner withering (the wanderer's sorrow) and the final miniature of the single leaf. [Key Technique] The poem's art is the transfer of the whole autumn into the single wutong leaf: after the wide scene of crickets, wind, river and reeds, the close narrows everything to one branch — and the question, how much autumn sound does it hold, makes the one leaf carry the whole season and the whole grief. [Emotional Tone] Desolate and refined: the sorrow of the conquered wanderer is stated in the lightest terms — the withered heart, the bound longing, the single leaf — and the restraint is itself the depth.
【白话串讲】 张炎写《清平乐》:“候蛩凄断。人语西风岸”——“月落沙平江似练。望尽芦花无雁”——“暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情”——“只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声”——他写秋声——不知多少秋声。 【意象与手法】 “候蛩凄断。人语西风岸”写秋景凄清;“月落沙平江似练。望尽芦花无雁”以江似练写秋江;“暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情”以兰成(庾信)自比写愁;结以“只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声”以梧叶写秋声。含蓄深婉。 【情感与主旨】 张炎写秋景怀人之作,写秋夜凄清与身世之愁,以“一枝梧叶”“多少秋声”写秋愁之深,是张炎词中清空凄婉的代表。 【名句点睛】 常考“只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声”以梧叶写秋声无限;“暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情”以兰成自比写愁。
Background
Zhang Yan (1248–c. 1320), courtesy name Shuxia, was one of the last great masters of the ci lyric and the author of the influential poetic treatise 'Ci Yuan' (The Source of the Ci). He lived through the fall of the Southern Song to the Mongols in 1279 and spent the rest of his life as a wandering remnant of the fallen dynasty; his lyrics are the great expression of the sorrow of the conquest. This lyric, one of his most famous, turns the autumn scene into the emblem of his homelessness — the wanderer's heart withered by the season, bound to a home that no longer exists.
《清平乐》为宋末元初词人张炎所作词。张炎(1248—约1320),字叔夏,号玉田,又号乐笑翁,临安(今浙江杭州)人,宋末词人,词清空疏快,为「清空词派」之宗。此词写秋景怀人。词中「候蛩凄断。人语西风岸」写候蛩凄断;「月落沙平江似练。望尽芦花无雁」写江似练;「暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情」写愁损兰成;「只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声」写不知多少秋声。张炎此词以秋景怀人、不知多少秋声写其怀人之情,含蓄深婉,是张炎词中的名篇。此篇《清平乐》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《清平乐》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The lyric's art is the art of the narrowing focus. The opening is broken and desolate: the crickets' cries, the west wind, the voices on the bank. The scene widens: the moon set, the sand level, the river like silk — a vast, still, empty landscape. The gaze to the end of the reeds discovers the absence that governs the whole: no wild geese — no messengers, no letters, no hope of return. The lyric then turns inward: in secret the autumn withers the wanderer's heart, bound night after night. And the close performs the lyric's masterstroke: everything narrows to one branch of wutong leaves, and the question — how much autumn sound does it hold? — makes the single leaf the container of the whole season's grief and the whole exile's sorrow.
此词艺术上以「含蓄深婉、清空以情」见长。全词上片写候蛩凄断与江似练,下片写愁损兰成与不知多少秋声。上片「候蛩凄断。人语西风岸」写候蛩凄断:候蛩凄断,人语西风岸;「月落沙平江似练。望尽芦花无雁」写江似练:月落沙平江似练,望尽芦花无雁。下片「暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情」写愁损兰成:暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情;「只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声」写不知多少秋声:只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声。全词含蓄深婉,清空以情,是张炎词中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
'The wild geese' are the letter-bringing birds of Chinese poetry; that there are no geese at the end of the reeds means no letters, no messengers, no hope — the gaze into the empty sky of the exile. 'Lancheng' (the wanderer, literally 'the man of Lan') is Yu Xin, the great poet of the Northern and Southern Dynasties who was detained in the north and spent the rest of his life longing for his home in the south; his name is the standard figure of the involuntary exile, and 'the sorrow of Lancheng' is homesickness made flesh. 'The wutong' is the tree of autumn par excellence, whose single leaf falling is the signal of the season; the question of how much autumn sound one branch holds is the lyric's compressed version of the ancient theme — 'the falling of one leaf knows the autumn of the whole world.'
词中「候蛩凄断」「人语西风岸」「月落沙平江似练」「望尽芦花无雁」「暗教愁损兰成」「可怜夜夜关情」「只有一枝梧叶」「不知多少秋声」等语,皆含典故故实。「候蛩凄断」写候蛩凄断(候蛩为秋虫);「人语西风岸」写人语西风岸;「月落沙平江似练」用江似练之语(谢朓余霞散成绮澄江静如练),写月落沙平江似练;「望尽芦花无雁」写望尽芦花无雁(芦花雁为秋景,雁传书);「暗教愁损兰成」用庾信之典(庾信字兰成,羁旅北国),写暗教愁损兰成;「可怜夜夜关情」写可怜夜夜关情;「只有一枝梧叶」写只有一枝梧叶;「不知多少秋声」写不知多少秋声。词人以谢朓澄江练、庾信兰成等语入词,不着痕迹,而把秋景怀人之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。
Commentary
This lyric is one of the most admired works of the late Song, quoted for the perfect compression of its closing image. 'There is only one branch of the wutong leaves, and one does not know how much autumn sound it holds' is often ranked among the finest closing couplets in the history of the ci, the single leaf standing for the whole weight of the conquered dynasty's autumn. Critics praise the lyric's restraint: the sorrow of the fall of Song is never named, yet the withered heart, the bound longing and the one leaf say all that needs to be said.
这首《清平乐》,是张炎写秋景怀人之作,写候蛩凄断、愁损兰成、不知多少秋声之情,含蓄深婉。上片写候蛩凄断与江似练:「候蛩凄断。人语西风岸」——候蛩凄断,人语西风岸。写候蛩凄断:候蛩凄断、人语西风岸——候蛩凄断、人语西风岸;「月落沙平江似练。望尽芦花无雁」——月落沙平江似练(用江似练之语),望尽芦花无雁。写江似练:月落沙平江似练、望尽芦花无雁——沙平江似练、望尽芦花无雁。下片写愁损兰成与不知多少秋声:「暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情」——暗教愁损兰成(用庾信兰成之典),可怜夜夜关情。写愁损兰成:暗教愁损兰成、可怜夜夜关情——愁损兰成、夜夜关情;「只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声」——只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声。写不知多少秋声:只有一枝梧叶、不知多少秋声——一枝梧叶、多少秋声。这「只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声」,是全词之结:以不知多少秋声写其怀人。全词含蓄深婉,清空以情,正是张炎词中的名篇。
Prosody
Line by line
候蛩凄断。
The season's crickets cry, broken and desolate.
候蛩凄断。
The season cricket's chirp, plaintive and broken.
首句写候蛩凄断,起笔即见其秋。「候蛩凄断」写候蛩凄断,「候蛩」写秋虫、「凄断」写凄切断续。一句以「候蛩」写秋虫、「凄断」写其声凄切,写尽候蛩凄断之情——秋虫之声凄断。以声起兴,含蓄而清冷,是「以声起兴」的妙笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
The opening writes the season cricket's plaintive brokenness, the autumn present at the first stroke. The season cricket's chirp, plaintive and broken writes the autumn insect and the plaintive brokenness. One line, the autumn insect and the plaintive sound, exhausting the season cricket's plaintive brokenness — the autumn insect's plaintive broken chirp. Rising on sound, restrained and cold, precisely the wondrous brush of rising on sound. This line in the few words exhausts the deep meaning, feeling and charm both supreme, precisely the poem's telling stroke. Its hidden waves between the words, the turns within the plainness, require the repeated savouring to grasp its heart.
月落沙平江似练。
The moon has set, the sand is level, the river like silk;
月落沙平江似练。
The moon sets, the sand level, the river like white silk.
此句写月落沙平江似练,是全词写景的关键。「月落沙平江似练」写月落沙平江似练,「月落沙平」写月落沙平、「江似练」写江如白练(用谢朓澄江静如练之意)。一句以「月落沙平」写月落沙平、「江似练」写江如练,写尽月落沙平江似练之情——月落沙平、江平如练。以景写景,含蓄而清丽,是「以景写景」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
This line writes the moon sets, the sand level, the river like white silk, the ci's scenic key. The moon sets, the sand level, the river like white silk writes the moon-set and sand-level, and the river like white silk (using Xie Tiao's the clear river still as silk meaning). One line, the moon-and-sand and the river-like-silk, exhausting the moon-set and sand-level and the river-level-as-silk. Writing scene through scene, restrained and fair, precisely the telling stroke of scene-through-scene. This line in the few words exhausts the deep meaning, feeling and charm both supreme, precisely the poem's telling stroke. Its hidden waves between the words, the turns within the plainness, require the repeated savouring to grasp its heart.
暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情。
In secret it makes the sorrow of the wanderer wither; pitiable — night after night his heart is bound to home.
暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情。
Secretly grief wears Lanhua thin; pitiably, night after night, it touches his heart.
此二句写愁损兰成,是全词以典写愁的关键。「暗教愁损兰成」写暗教愁损兰成,用庾信兰成之典写暗教愁损兰成;「可怜夜夜关情」写可怜夜夜关情,「可怜」写可怜、「夜夜关情」写夜夜系情。两句一写暗教愁损兰成、一写可怜夜夜关情,以愁损兰成写愁如庾信、以夜夜关情写夜夜系情,写尽暗教愁损兰成、可怜夜夜关情之情。以典写愁,含蓄而深婉,是「以典写愁」的点睛之笔。
These two lines write the grief-wearing Lanhua, the ci's allusion-grief key. Secretly grief wears Lanhua thin uses Yu Xin's Lanhua allusion; pitiably, night after night, it touches his heart writes the pitiable and the nightly touching. Two lines, one the grief-wearing Lanhua, one the nightly touching, writing the Yu Xin-like grief through the grief-wearing Lanhua, and the nightly attachment through the nightly touching, exhausting the secretly-grief-worn and pitiably-touching. Writing grief through allusion, restrained and deep, precisely the telling stroke of grief-through-allusion.
只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声。
There is only one branch of the wutong leaves, and one does not know how much autumn sound it holds.
只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声。
Only one branch of the paulownia leaf — who knows how many autumn sounds?
尾二句写不知多少秋声,是全词立意的落点。「只有一枝梧叶」写只有一枝梧叶,「只有」写只有、「一枝梧叶」写一枝梧叶;「不知多少秋声」写不知多少秋声,「不知」写不知、「多少秋声」写多少秋声。两句一写只有一枝梧叶、一写不知多少秋声,以一枝梧叶写梧叶一枝、以不知多少秋声写秋声多少,写尽只有一枝梧叶、不知多少秋声之情。以叶写声,含蓄而深挚,是全词最动人处,也是「以叶写声」的点睛之笔。
The last two lines write the who-knows-how-many-autumn-sounds, the landing of the ci's theme. Only one branch of the paulownia leaf writes the only and the one branch; who knows how many autumn sounds? writes the not-knowing and the autumn sounds. Two lines, one the one branch, one the autumn sounds, writing the one leaf through the one branch, and the autumn sounds' number through the how-many, exhausting the one branch and the unknown autumn sounds. Writing sound through the leaf, restrained and deep, the ci's most moving place, and the telling stroke of sound-through-leaf.
Study
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Related Reading
Yan Shu's 'Silk-Washing Stream' watches the flowers fall and the swallows return; Zhang Yan's 'Pure, Serene Music' asks how much autumn sound one wutong branch holds — the Song lyric's art of the single image that carries the whole grief.
晏殊《浣溪沙·一曲新词酒一杯》「无可奈何花落去,似曾相识燕归来」,写秋景怀人、无可奈何,是宋词写惜时的名篇;张炎《清平乐》则以「候蛩凄断。人语西风岸」「只有一枝梧叶,不知多少秋声」写候蛩凄断、不知多少秋声。两词同写秋景怀人、无可奈何:一写无可奈何花落去、以花落燕归写惜时,一写只有一枝梧叶不知多少秋声、以梧叶写秋声;一为晏殊之温润、一为张炎之清空,并读正可见宋词写「秋景无可奈何」的两种笔法,皆于秋景之中见无可奈何。
八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天 Eight Beats of Ganzhou: Facing the Evening Rain That Spatters the Long River 柳永 · 同写秋景怀远、倚楼凝望,一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、一写月落沙平江似练望尽芦花无雁,皆于秋景凝望之中见怀远 Both are the lyrics of the wanderer's autumn — Liu Yong's rain and wilting flowers, Zhang Yan's crickets and wutong branch.Liu Yong's 'Eight Beats of Ganzhou' is the great Song lyric of the wanderer's autumn gaze; Zhang Yan's 'Pure, Serene Music' is the compressed late version — the crickets, the moon, and the single wutong branch that holds the unknown autumn sound.
柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天,一番洗清秋」,写秋景怀远、羁旅凝望,是宋词写羁旅的名篇;张炎《清平乐》则以「月落沙平江似练。望尽芦花无雁」「暗教愁损兰成,可怜夜夜关情」写江似练、愁损兰成。两词同写秋景怀远、倚楼凝望:一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋,一写月落沙平江似练望尽芦花无雁、以江练芦花写凝望;一为柳永之清丽、一为张炎之清空,并读正可见宋词写「秋景怀远」的两种笔法,皆于秋景凝望之中见怀远。