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七律·长征
The Long March (Seven-Part Octet)
红军不怕远征难,万水千山只等闲。
五岭逶迤腾细浪,乌蒙磅礴走泥丸。
金沙水拍云崖暖,大渡桥横铁索寒。
更喜岷山千里雪,三军过后尽开颜。
The Five Ranges wind and swell but rise only as tiny waves; the Wumeng mass, huge and heavy, rolls past like mud balls.
The Jinsha River beats against cloud-high cliffs and the water is warm; the Dadu bridge spans the river and its iron chains are cold.
Still gladdened by the snows of Min, a thousand li across, when the three armies passed and not one face was unbright.
Meaning
Written as the Red Army's Long March was coming to an end, the octet sums up the whole retreat in eight lines. Nothing is allowed to be difficult: the rivers and mountains of two hundred and fifty thousand li are “merely” uneasy, and the great ranges that a traveller would call enormous are reduced to waves and to mud balls. Two episodes are given as emblematic — the crossing of the Jinsha, the seizing of the Dadu bridge — one warm and one cold, one crafty and one bloody. The poem closes where it began, with the army itself: it was not afraid, and now it smiles.
红军不怕远征的艰难,万水千山在红军眼里只当作平平常常的小事。绵延起伏的五岭山脉,在红军脚下不过是腾起的细小波浪;气势磅礴的乌蒙山,在红军脚下也不过是滚动的泥丸。金沙江的急流拍打着高耸入云的悬崖,激起的浪花温暖人心;大渡河上的铁索桥横跨江面,铁索透着寒意。更让全军欣喜的是岷山千里白雪,三军翻越之后,人人都笑逐颜开。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The Red Army does not fear the distance; every river and mountain counts for nothing. The five ranges are only small waves lifting, the Wumeng mountains only mud balls rolling. The Jinsha beats on high cliffs and feels warm, the Dadu bridge across the river is cold with iron. The poem ends with the Min mountains snowbound and the whole army's faces bright. [Structure] The octave is framed by two couplets that state the thesis — difficulty against triviality, then the coming of joy — and filled by two couplets of evidence, one on mountains, one on rivers. The middle couplets are history arranged as parallel construction: five ranges against the Wumeng, Jinsha against Dadu, warm against cold, cloud against iron. [Imagery] The images are the geography of the march itself, and the strangeness of the poem is that the geography is there to be dismissed. Mountains become waves and mud; cliffs become the weather of a feeling; a bridge becomes a temperature. Under the famous comparisons the reader recognises the real places — the Five Ranges on the Hunan-Guangdong border, the Wumeng in Yunnan-Guizhou, the Jinsha, the Dadu, the Min — and the effect of the poem is to have an entire army pass over them in twenty-eight words, without ever admitting that they were hard.
【白话串讲】 毛泽东写《七律·长征》:“红军不怕远征难,万水千山只等闲”。“五岭逶迤腾细浪,乌蒙磅礴走泥丸”——“金沙水拍云崖暖,大渡桥横铁索寒”——“更喜岷山千里雪,三军过后尽开颜”——他写长征的壮举。 【意象与手法】 此为七言律诗,章法严整而气势恢弘。全诗以「远征难」立骨,而以「只等闲」破之,一难一闲,开篇即定英雄主义基调;颔联颈联工整对仗,以五岭、乌蒙对金沙、大渡,山与水分列,暖与寒对照;「腾细浪」「走泥丸」以夸张之笔写山,化险峻为寻常,最见举重若轻的胸襟。结构上首尾呼应,由「不怕」起,以「尽开颜」结,乐观精神贯注全篇。 【情感与主旨】 主旨是革命英雄主义与乐观主义精神:以「不怕」写红军的钢铁意志,以「等闲」「细浪」「泥丸」写藐视困难的豪情,以「暖」「寒」「更喜」「尽开颜」写战胜艰险后的欢欣。全诗将一次伟大的战略转移升华为一首壮丽的革命史诗,是长征精神最凝练的诗意表达。 【名句点睛】 「红军不怕远征难,万水千山只等闲」以十四字总括长征,气魄之大千古罕有,为全篇诗眼;「更喜岷山千里雪,三军过后尽开颜」以「更喜」「尽开颜」写胜利在望的欢欣,成为长征胜利的经典画面,与首联遥相呼应,千古传诵。
Background
Mao Zedong wrote the poem in October 1935, as the Red Army neared the end of the Long March. The central Red Army had begun its retreat in October 1934 after the failure of its fifth campaign against the encirclement, and the march that followed — crossing the xiang River, four crossings of the Red Water, the quick passage of the Jinsha, the storming of the Dadu bridge and the taking of the Dingqiao bridge, the snow mountains and the grass marshes — covered some twelve thousand miles in a year. In September 1935 the army crossed the Min mountains, and in October it reached Wujiayan in northern Shaanxi. The places named in the poem are the real landmarks of that road, and the poem's first publication, in the same month, was followed by its inclusion in the collected poems. It was written in a country at war and against a background of national crisis, and its tone is the confidence that the difficulty would be answered.
《七律·长征》作于1935年10月,毛泽东率中央红军长征即将胜利之时。1934年10月,中央红军第五次反「围剿」失败,被迫撤离中央苏区,开始战略转移,史称长征。长征途中,红军血战湘江、四渡赤水、巧渡金沙江、强渡大渡河、飞夺泸定桥、翻雪山、过草地,行程两万五千里,历经千难万险。1935年9月,红军翻越岷山,10月到达陕北吴起镇,长征胜利在望,毛泽东在跨越岷山、即将结束长征之际,回顾一年来的峥嵘岁月,以澎湃的诗情写下此诗。诗中提到的五岭(大庾岭、骑田岭、萌渚岭、都庞岭、越城岭,位于湘赣粤桂边境)、乌蒙山(云贵高原)、金沙江(长江上游,红军巧渡之处)、大渡河(红军强渡安顺场、飞夺泸定桥之处)、岷山(四川北部雪山,红军翻越的最后一座大雪山),皆是长征途中的真实地名,诗人以诗笔将它们一一收入,使一次军事行动升华为民族精神的史诗。此诗最初发表于1935年10月,后收入《毛泽东诗词》,是毛泽东诗词中流传最广、最富盛名的篇章之一。时代背景上,1935年正值民族危机深重、革命处于低潮之际,此诗以「红军不怕远征难」的豪迈声音,宣告了中国共产党及其领导下的红军不可战胜的精神力量,成为鼓舞全民族抗战的号角。
Art
The poem's method is to measure everything against the one word “merely,” and the whole structure is aimed at that word. In the first couplet the claim is made and immediately given its terms: danger and triviality, side by side, so that the triviality reads as an act of will. The second couplet then applies the claim to mountains, the third to rivers, and the two are built as parallel couplets with a strict counterpoint — five ranges against the Wumeng, winding against massive, waves against mud balls, then the river against the bridge, cliff against chains. The two opening and closing words carry the argument: “not fear” proposes, “not one face unbright” performs. The language is unusually plain for a regulated octave, and the five place names run on unbroken like a list of what the army did; the effect is that of a march, in which each name is passed and left behind.
此诗为七言律诗,而艺术上最大的特色是「以豪放写艰险、以寻常化壮丽」。其一,章法之整:八句四联,首联总领全篇,「红军不怕远征难,万水千山只等闲」以一难一闲立骨;颔联写山——「五岭逶迤腾细浪,乌蒙磅礴走泥丸」;颈联写水——「金沙水拍云崖暖,大渡桥横铁索寒」;尾联写喜——「更喜岷山千里雪,三军过后尽开颜」,由总到分、由山水到人,层次分明,首尾呼应。其二,意象之奇:五岭「逶迤」绵延千里,在诗人笔下却只是「腾细浪」;乌蒙「磅礴」横亘天际,在诗人脚下却只是「走泥丸」,以小喻大、以动写静,将山写活、将险写平,正是「举重若轻」的浪漫主义笔法;「云崖暖」写金沙江畔红军将士心中的暖意,「铁索寒」写泸定桥铁索的森寒与战斗的险恶,一暖一寒、一虚一实,冷暖对照中见出革命者的从容。其三,手法之富:夸张(细浪、泥丸)、对比(暖、寒)、拟人(腾、走)、色彩(雪、云)并用,而皆归于一「等闲」的乐观基调。其四,语言之精:全诗无一字言苦言难言死,而艰苦卓绝尽在言外,五岭、乌蒙、金沙、大渡、岷山五个地名一气贯下,如连珠炮发,节奏铿锵,气脉雄健。此诗以传统七律的严整形式,写现代革命战争的壮阔内容,形式与内容浑然一体,是毛泽东诗词「旧瓶装新酒」而推陈出新的典范,也是现代旧体诗中最成功的篇章之一。
Allusions
The poem is thick with borrowed language. “Ten thousand rivers and mountains” continues a line of classical usage, from the Tang verse of parted friends to the journey poems of Du Fu, but the word “complacently” here is a wholly new note: it turns the old phrase of distance into a phrase of contempt for distance. “Mud balls rolling” descends from the Han account of balls rolling down a slope, used to describe the speed of events, and is reborn here as the Wumeng mountains underfoot; “waves lifting” imagines the ranges as sea. The places themselves carry associations that the poem reverses: the ranges were the exile lands of the Tang poets, the Jinsha and the Dadu were the “path of Shu” that Li Bai called harder than heaven, and the Min snow evokes the chill of “of a hundred mountains not a bird.” What was a route for grief becomes, in the same words, a road for an army.
此诗虽为现代旧体诗,而文化意蕴极其深厚。其一「万水千山」之化用:唐诗中「千山万水」屡见(如贾岛「万水千山中路」、柳宗元「万水千山」之对),毛泽东以「万水千山」总括长征路程,既承古典,又赋予新的时代内涵——不再是离愁别绪的「万水千山」,而是革命者踏平艰险的「万水千山」。其二「走泥丸」之出典:《汉书·蒯通传》有「犹阪上走丸」之语,形容形势发展之快如丸从斜坡滚下,毛泽东「乌蒙磅礴走泥丸」化用此典,写磅礴的乌蒙山在红军脚下如泥丸滚动,既写行军之速,更写对困难之藐视,古典成语被赋予革命英雄主义的全新气魄。其三「腾细浪」之妙喻:以「浪」写山,化静态绵延的山脉为动态起伏的波浪,暗含「山如海、人如龙」的壮阔联想,与「苍山如海,残阳如血」(《忆秦娥·娄山关》)同一机杼。其四地理意象之文化意涵:五岭、乌蒙本为古代贬谪流放之地(韩愈「好收吾骨瘴江边」写岭表),金沙江、大渡河本为蜀道天险(李白「蜀道之难,难于上青天」),岷山千里雪更令人联想到「千山鸟飞绝」的苦寒——而毛泽东反其道而行之,将古人视为畏途的瘴疠之地、天堑之险、苦寒之域,一一化作「细浪」「泥丸」「暖」「喜」,正是「换一个角度看世界」的革命浪漫主义,其中暗含对中华山河之美的重新发现,也寄托着「敢教日月换新天」的壮志。其五「三军过后尽开颜」之「三军」:古指上中下三军,此处指红军一、二、四方面军,现代词汇入诗而浑化无痕。凡此种种,皆见毛泽东融古典成语、历史典故、地理意象于革命抒情的大手笔。
Commentary
The Long March octet is among the most widely memorised of Mao Zedong's poems, and its first two lines are the ones that have lasted: in thirteen syllables the poem proposes that a difficult thing can be made small. Since it was first printed it has been the standard account of the march in schools, and the whole range of feeling in the poem — the defiance, the dry comedy of the mountains, the warmth and the cold, and the final brightness — has made it the accepted portrait of the Long March. Critics have generally praised two things: the audacity of the comparisons, and the restraint about suffering, since not one word of the poem describes hunger, cold or loss.Guo Moruo called the poetry of Mao Zedong “grand in spirit,” and in this poem the judgment is hard to dispute, though the poem's difficulty is also its topic: to make the enormous small without lying about it.
《七律·长征》是毛泽东诗词中传播最广、影响最大的篇章之一,其历史地位与文学价值皆堪称典范。就其历史价值而言,此诗是长征这一人类历史上的伟大壮举最凝练的诗意记录:诗中以五岭、乌蒙、金沙、大渡、岷山五个地标勾出长征的完整路线图,以「不怕」「等闲」「更喜」「尽开颜」写出红军的革命英雄主义与乐观主义精神,成为长征精神最具代表性的文本,1935年10月红一方面军到达陕北后,此诗即被广为传诵,激励了无数革命者与抗战军民。就其文学价值而言,此诗是现代旧体诗以传统形式写现代内容的成功范例:七律的严整格律(对仗、平仄、押韵)与革命内容的壮阔气象完美结合,开创了以旧体诗写革命史诗的新传统,其后《沁园春·雪》《七律·人民解放军占领南京》等相继涌现,遂成一代诗风。历代评家论此诗,多赏其「以小见大」的笔法与「举重若轻」的气魄:清人遗风(如梁启超论新意境入旧风格)在毛泽东手中得到最彻底的实现——「五岭逶迤腾细浪」一句,将两千余里的崇山峻岭缩为「细浪」,其胸襟之大,直可吞云梦。此诗在现代被选入中学语文教材,历数十年不废,「红军不怕远征难」成为家喻户晓的诗句,其影响早已超越文学而成为民族精神的象征:当人们提起长征,首先浮上心头的,往往就是这八句诗。郭沫若评毛泽东诗词「气象万千」,以此诗观之,诚为的评。
Prosody
Line by line
红军不怕远征难,万水千山只等闲。
The Red Army fears not the hardship of the long march; ten thousand rivers and mountains are treated as nothing.
红军不怕远征的艰难困苦,万水千山在红军眼里只当作平平常常的小事。
The Red Army fears not the trials of the Long March; ten thousand streams and a thousand mountains are as nothing.
首联是全诗的总纲,十四字定下全篇的英雄主义基调。「红军不怕远征难」以叙述之笔直接点题:一个「不怕」掷地有声,写出了红军对困难的根本态度——不是不怕,而是明知难而无所畏惧;「远征难」三字则概括了长征的全部艰险:数十万敌军的围追堵截、雪山草地的恶劣环境、物资匮乏的艰难处境,尽在一「难」字之中。下句「万水千山只等闲」以夸张之笔写红军的胸襟:「万水千山」极言征途之长、关山之多,而「只等闲」三字轻轻一拨,将千难万险化为寻常——「等闲」本指平常、轻易,此处用「只」字限定,写万水千山在红军眼中不过是平常之事。两句一正一反、一实一虚:「不怕」是态度,「等闲」是境界;「远征难」是客观之难,「只等闲」是主观之勇。开篇即把困难写得愈足,愈见红军的豪迈;把精神写得愈足,愈显全诗的气魄。这两句以最朴素的语言道出最伟大的精神,是毛泽东诗词中「以俗为雅、举重若轻」的典范,也是全诗一切壮阔意象(细浪、泥丸、铁索寒、千里雪)的总根源——正因为「只等闲」,五岭才成细浪,乌蒙才成泥丸。
The fearlessness. The Red Army fears not the trials of the Long March; ten thousand streams and a thousand mountains are as nothing. The fears-not and the ten-thousand-waters-a-thousand-mountains-as-nothing are the opening. To have feared nothing would be a fearlessness; the red-army-fears-not-the-trials-of-the-long-march-ten-thousand-streams-and-a-thousand-mountains-are-as-nothing is the fearlessness.
五岭逶迤腾细浪,乌蒙磅礴走泥丸。
The Five Ranges wind and swell but rise only as tiny waves; the Wumeng mass, huge and heavy, rolls past like mud balls.
绵延起伏的五岭山脉,在红军脚下不过是腾起的细小波浪;气势磅礴的乌蒙山,在红军脚下也不过是滚动的泥丸。
The Five Ranges wind on, billowing like tiny ripples; the Wumeng rolls on, rumbling like pellets of mud.
颔联写山,是全诗最见功力的一联。「五岭逶迤」写山之绵长——五岭横亘湘赣粤桂数省,逶迤两千余里;「乌蒙磅礴」写山之雄伟——乌蒙山绵延云贵高原,气势磅礴接天。而诗人以两个奇喻将这崇山峻岭轻轻化解:「腾细浪」写绵延的五岭如江上腾起的细小波浪,「走泥丸」写磅礴的乌蒙如泥丸般滚动。细浪、泥丸皆渺小之物,以此状山,是以大观小、以小喻大的极致:山愈大,则观山者之胸襟愈大;山愈险,则越山者之豪情愈壮。两处用典与炼字尤见功力:「腾」字写浪之起伏,移用于山,则静山化为动浪,五岭如波,滚滚而来;「走」字化用《汉书》「阪上走丸」之典,写泥丸滚落之势,乌蒙如丸,一滚而过。对仗上,「逶迤」对「磅礴」皆双声叠韵连绵词,「腾」对「走」、「细浪」对「泥丸」皆工整精严,而气势如虹。此联既是写景,更是写人——山之高峻反衬红军之伟岸,岭之绵长反衬征途之壮阔,读来但觉群山俯首、英雄昂然,是革命浪漫主义「化险为夷」笔法的巅峰。
The ripples. The Five Ranges wind on, billowing like tiny ripples; the Wumeng rolls on, rumbling like pellets of mud. The Five Ranges as ripples and the Wumeng as mud pellets are the couplet. To have rippled the Five Ranges would be a simile; the five-ranges-wind-on-billowing-like-tiny-ripples-the-wumeng-rolls-on-rumbling-like-pellets-of-mud is the simile.
金沙水拍云崖暖,大渡桥横铁索寒。
The Jinsha River beats against cloud-high cliffs and the water is warm; the Dadu bridge spans the river and its iron chains are cold.
金沙江的急流拍打着高耸入云的悬崖,浪花带来的暖意激荡人心;大渡河上铁索桥横跨江面,铁索透着逼人的寒意。
Cloud-capped cliffs of the Golden Sand are warmed by the leap of waves; iron chains of the Dadu Bridge are cold as they span the torrent.
颈联写水,是全诗由山到水的转关,也是冷暖对照的绝妙一笔。「金沙水拍云崖暖」写巧渡金沙江:金沙江水流湍急,浪涛拍击着高耸入云的悬崖,「云崖」极言崖之高险,「拍」字写水势之猛,而着一「暖」字——五月渡江,天气渐暖,更因红军巧渡成功、摆脱追兵,心中温暖,暖的是浪花,更是人心;「大渡桥横铁索寒」写强渡大渡河:泸定桥十三根铁索横悬于奔腾的河水之上,「桥横」写铁索凌空横跨之险,「铁索寒」写铁索的森森寒意——五月渡河,铁索生寒,更因桥下激流咆哮、对岸枪弹如雨,寒的是铁索,更是战场的肃杀。一「暖」一「寒」,一写巧渡之从容,一写强攻之险恶,冷暖对照,虚实相生,将两次惊心动魄的战斗浓缩于十四个字中。此联对仗之工堪称典范:「金沙」对「大渡」皆地名,「水拍」对「桥横」皆主谓,「云崖暖」对「铁索寒」皆景语兼情语,五言节奏铿锵,声情并茂。尤其「暖」「寒」二字,既是体感,又是心境,更是全诗情感起伏的节点:渡过金沙江的喜悦(暖)与强渡大渡河的严峻(寒),共同汇入「三军过后尽开颜」的最终欢欣。
The cold chains. Cloud-capped cliffs of the Golden Sand are warmed by the leap of waves; iron chains of the Dadu Bridge are cold as they span the torrent. The warm Golden Sand and the cold Dadu chains are the warm-cold couplet. To have spanned the iron chains would be a spanning; the cloud-capped-cliffs-of-the-golden-sand-are-warmed-by-the-leap-of-waves-iron-chains-of-the-dadu-bridge-are-cold-as-they-span-the-torrent is the spanning.
更喜岷山千里雪,三军过后尽开颜。
Still gladdened by the snows of Min, a thousand li across, when the three armies passed and not one face was unbright.
更让全军欣喜的是岷山千里白雪,三军翻越之后,人人都笑逐颜开。
Best of all, the thousand-li Min Mountains of snow; once the three armies have crossed, all smiles break forth.
尾联写翻越岷山,是全诗的收束,也是情感的最高潮。「更喜」二字承上启下,一个「更」字写出喜之递进——过五岭、越乌蒙、渡金沙、抢大渡,一喜未已,一喜又至,而翻越岷山之喜,更是长征胜利在望之喜;「岷山千里雪」写翻越的最后一座大雪山,千里皑皑,苦寒至极,而着一「更喜」,将苦寒化为壮美,正是「无限风光在险峰」的乐观精神。「三军过后尽开颜」以「尽开颜」三字收束全篇:所有红军将士翻过雪山、长征即将胜利,人人笑逐颜开——「尽」字写无一例外,全军同欢;「开颜」写由衷喜悦,如见其笑。此句与首联「红军不怕远征难」遥相呼应,由「不怕」到「尽开颜」,完成了一个圆满的情感回环:不怕是起点,开颜是终点;难是起点,喜是终点。全诗至此,将两万五千里的艰难征程化作一声响彻云霄的胜利欢笑,是长征精神最光明的定格,也是全中国、全民族在苦难中看到希望的诗意预言。两句以「更喜」「尽开颜」的明快语调收束,声情高亢,余韵不尽,为这首革命史诗画上了最圆满的句号。
The smiles. Best of all, the thousand-li Min Mountains of snow; once the three armies have crossed, all smiles break forth. The thousand-li Min snow and the all-smiles are the close. To have smiled all would be a smiling; the best-of-all-the-thousand-li-min-mountains-of-snow-once-the-three-armies-have-crossed-all-smiles-break-forth is the smiling.
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蜀道难 Difficulty of the Road into Shu 李白 · 同写西南天险的古今对照,畏途与坦途的两种心态 Both write of the mountains and rivers of the southwest: one the way of fear, the other of contemptLi Bai's poem makes the road into Shu the longest difficulty in Chinese poetry — “harder than climbing to heaven,” with birds that cannot pass and monkeys that cannot climb, until the traveller is told to go home. Mao's octet crosses the same regions and finds that the difficulty is trivial, that the ranges are waves, that the chains are only cold. The two meet at the same places — steep ranges, swift rivers, iron bridges, snow — and disagree completely about what they mean. Thirteen centuries apart, the two poems are the two possible attitudes of the Chinese poem to an obstacle: the obstacle as the measure of a self that is small, and as the measure of a self that is large.
李白《蜀道难》与《七律·长征》同写西南蜀道的崇山峻岭、湍流险滩:「蜀道之难,难于上青天」「黄鹤之飞尚不得过,猿猱欲度愁攀援」写五岭乌蒙式的山险,「连峰去天不盈尺,枯松倒挂倚绝壁」写金沙大渡式的水恶。而二诗心态迥异:李白以「难于上青天」极写蜀道之险,落脚于「锦城虽云乐,不如早还家」的劝归与畏途之叹,山是压人的山、险是吓人的险;毛泽东以「只等闲」轻描蜀道之险,五岭化「细浪」、乌蒙化「泥丸」、铁索虽「寒」而三军「尽开颜」,山是脚下的山、险是身后的险。同是面对天险:一个以「难」为叹,一个以「等闲」为歌;一个写个体之渺小与畏惧,一个写集体之伟大与豪迈。两诗相隔一千二百余年,恰成中国诗歌中「畏难」与「克难」两种精神传统的对照:李白之叹见出盛唐文人面对自然的敬畏,毛泽东之歌见出革命者改造世界的自信,合观可知「蜀道」意象在中国人心中由畏途到坦途的变迁,亦可见旧体诗写新精神的巨大张力。
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