宋 Song · 词 Ci lyric
满庭芳·归去来兮
Man Ting Fang: Home, Home — But Where Shall I Return?
归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨。
百年强半,来日苦无多。
坐见黄州再闰,儿童尽、楚语吴歌。
山中友,鸡豚社酒,相劝老东坡。
云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭。
待闲看秋风,洛水清波。
好在堂前细柳,应念我、莫剪柔柯。
仍传语,江南父老,时与晒渔蓑。
A lifetime, and more than half of it gone; the days remaining, alas, are few.
I have sat and watched Huangzhou take a second leap month; the children all speak Chu and Wu songs.
The mountain friends — pork and village wine — press me to grow old at Dongpo.
Why is it that at this departure, life's business should be so much coming and going like a shuttle?
Soon I shall idle and watch the autumn wind over the clear waves of the Luo.
The slender willow before the hall is still there; it should remember me — do not cut its tender branches.
Pass on my words to the old men of Jiangnan: whenever you like, hang out my fishing cloak to sun.
Meaning
Su Shi was leaving Huangzhou in 1084, after nearly five years there, on his way to Ru Prefecture, and this lyric is his farewell to the place. He begins by quoting the opening of the Rustic Return and immediately changing it — home, home, but where shall I go back to? — since his real home is ten thousand li off at Min and E in his own Sichuan. He counts the years spent, has watched Huangzhou run through another leap month while the children about him learned the local songs, and remembers the mountain friends who pressed village wine on him and asked him to grow old at Dongpo. Then the middle turns on the question of why at this leaving a life should be all coming and going like a shuttle, and the poem closes with farewells to the willow before the hall and to the old men of Jiangnan, to whom he sends the fishing cloak out to sun.
归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨。 百年强半,来日苦无多。 坐见黄州再闰,儿童尽、楚语吴歌。 山中友,鸡豚社酒,相劝老东坡。 云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭。 待闲看秋风,洛水清波。 好在堂前细柳,应念我、莫剪柔柯。 仍传语,江南父老,时与晒渔蓑。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The opening takes a famous line and breaks it: the Rustic Return asks where the fields have run wild and gives a home to run to; here the answer is that there is no home within reach, only one ten thousand li away. The poet then counts what he has spent in this place — years, a leap month, a generation of children growing up speaking local dialects — and names the friends who would keep him. The middle asks why departure should feel like a shuttle going back and forth, and the close gives the poem away in two small bequests: a willow not to be cut, and a fishing cloak to be dried in the sun. [Structure] The movement is from a grand question about where home is, through a plain account of what this place became, to two tiny practical instructions — which is why the poem seems to end more quietly than it began. [Imagery] The willow is the poem's most human image, and the fishing cloak is its signal: the poet is already planning the life he will have without this one.
【白话串讲】 苏轼写《满庭芳·归去来兮》:“归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨”——“百年强半,来日苦无多”——“山中友,鸡豚社酒,相劝老东坡”——“待闲看秋风,洛水清波”——他要离开黄州——归去来兮,吾归何处。 【意象与手法】 此词写羁旅,以感慨写羁旅,是苏轼的名篇。上阕写归去:「归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨。百年强半,来日苦无多。坐见黄州再闰,儿童尽、楚语吴歌。山中友,鸡豚社酒,相劝老东坡」写归去来兮、吾归何处、万里家在岷峨——写尽岷峨的万里家;下阕写感叹:「云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭。待闲看秋风,洛水清波。好在堂前细柳,应念我、莫剪柔柯。仍传语,江南父老,时与晒渔蓑」写云何、当此去、人生底事、来往如梭——写尽来往的如梭。全词以感慨写羁旅,写尽岷峨的万里家与来往的如梭,是苏轼的代表作。 【情感与主旨】 此词写羁旅,以感慨写羁旅,是苏轼的名篇。此词为苏轼离黄州赴汝州途中作,写其宦游漂泊的感慨与对黄州友人的留恋。苏轼贬黄州五年,奉诏移汝州,此词写其告别黄州。此词写归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨;百年强半,来日苦无多;坐见黄州再闰,儿童尽、楚语吴歌;山中友,鸡豚社酒,相劝老东坡;云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭;待闲看秋风,洛水清波;好在堂前细柳,应念我、莫剪柔柯;仍传语,江南父老,时与晒渔蓑。此词写归去:归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨——写归去来兮、吾归何处、万里家在岷峨,写尽岷峨的万里家;百年强半,来日苦无多——写百年强半、来日苦无多,写尽强半的百年;坐见黄州再闰,儿童尽、楚语吴歌——写坐见黄州再闰、儿童尽、楚语吴歌,写尽黄州的再闰;山中友,鸡豚社酒,相劝老东坡——写山中友、鸡豚社酒、相劝老东坡,写尽山中的社酒。下阕写感叹:云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭——写云何、当此去、人生底事、来往如梭,写尽来往的如梭;待闲看秋风,洛水清波——写待闲看秋风、洛水清波,写尽洛水的清波;好在堂前细柳,应念我、莫剪柔柯——写好在堂前细柳、应念我、莫剪柔柯,写尽堂前的细柳;仍传语,江南父老,时与晒渔蓑——写仍传语、江南父老、时与晒渔蓑,写尽江南的父老。全词以感慨写羁旅——那「万里家在岷峨」写尽岷峨的万里家,「来往如梭」写尽来往的如梭,写尽岷峨的万里家与来往的如梭,是理解苏轼羁旅词的重要篇章。 【名句点睛】 常考「归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨」写岷峨的万里家;「云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭」写来往的如梭;以及全词以感慨写羁旅、以用典写归去的手法。
Background
Su Shi (1037–1101) was banished to Huangzhou in 1080 after the case of the poetry bureau and lived there until 1084, when he was transferred to Ru Prefecture, and this lyric was written on the road. Min and E are the Min mountain and Mount E of his native Sichuan. Huangzhou took two leap months during the five years, a detail the poet uses to say how long he had been standing still. The children who speak Chu and Wu songs are the boys of the place, among whom he had plainly lived closely enough to hear the change of language; the village wine and pork are the mountain neighbours' gifts; Dongpo is the slope he had named and farmed. The willow before the hall was planted at the house he had built; the Luo river is the river of his next post, and the fishing cloak is the garment of the retired fisherman he was increasingly pictured as.
此词写羁旅,以感慨写羁旅,是苏轼的名篇。苏轼(1037—1101),字子瞻,号东坡居士,眉州眉山(今四川眉山)人,北宋文学家、书画家,与父苏洵、弟苏辙并称「三苏」,与黄庭坚并称「苏黄」,是豪放派词人的代表。此词为苏轼离黄州赴汝州途中作,写其宦游漂泊的感慨与对黄州友人的留恋。苏轼贬黄州五年,奉诏移汝州,此词写其告别黄州。此词写归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨;百年强半,来日苦无多;坐见黄州再闰,儿童尽、楚语吴歌;山中友,鸡豚社酒,相劝老东坡;云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭;待闲看秋风,洛水清波;好在堂前细柳,应念我、莫剪柔柯;仍传语,江南父老,时与晒渔蓑。此词写归去:「归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨」写归去来兮、吾归何处、万里家在岷峨——写尽岷峨的万里家(归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨);「云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭」写云何、当此去、人生底事、来往如梭——写尽来往的如梭(云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭);「好在堂前细柳,应念我、莫剪柔柯」写好在堂前细柳、应念我、莫剪柔柯——写尽堂前的细柳(好在堂前细柳,应念我、莫剪柔柯);「仍传语,江南父老,时与晒渔蓑」写仍传语、江南父老、时与晒渔蓑——写尽江南的父老(仍传语,江南父老,时与晒渔蓑)。全词以感慨写羁旅,写尽岷峨的万里家与来往的如梭,是理解苏轼羁旅词的重要篇章。
Art
The poem's first device is quotation used as a question: taking the well-known opening of the Rustic Return and answering it with a distance changes the whole tradition in three words. Second is the plain tally in the middle — a lifetime more than half spent, a leap month more, children learning a foreign dialect — which is the most unusual passage in the lyric because it is an inventory rather than an image. Third is the personification of the willow, addressed as though it could remember him and be hurt, so that a planted tree becomes a witness to the departure. Fourth is the closing bequest: two small instructions, not to cut the branches and to keep the cloak in the sun, by which the poet commissions the place to look after a part of himself. The tune is a long one with a wide,even level rhyme, and it allows the closing clauses to be said slowly.
此词的艺术特色可从四个方面解析。其一,以用典写归去。「归去来兮」以用典写归去——那「吾归何处」写尽归去的何处,以用典写尽岷峨的万里家。其二,以直抒写感慨。「人生底事,来往如梭」以直抒写感慨——那「云何,当此去」写尽当此的云何,以直抒写尽来往的如梭。其三,以拟人写细柳。「应念我、莫剪柔柯」以拟人写细柳——那「好在堂前细柳」写尽堂前的细柳,以拟人写尽堂前的细柳。其四,以托付写父老。「时与晒渔蓑」以托付写父老——那「仍传语,江南父老」写尽江南的父老,以托付写尽江南的父老。此外,此词上阕写岷峨的万里家,下阕写来往的如梭,由归及感,正是羁旅词「以归写慨」的写法。四重手法,使此词以感慨写羁旅,写尽岷峨的万里家与来往的如梭,是苏轼的代表作。此词还善于以「百年强半,来日苦无多」的「强半」写百年之过半——那「百年强半」写尽强半的百年,正是以半写年,以「来日苦无多」写尽黄州的再闰。又善以「待闲看秋风,洛水清波」的「闲看」写秋风之闲看——待闲看秋风,正见闲看秋风的写照,以「闲看」写尽洛水的清波。
Allusions
Everything rests on the return. The opening four characters are taken straight from the Rustic Return, in which the poet asks whether the fields need no longer lie untilled and sets out for home, and Su Shi's change of the following clause turns a rejoicing into a question. Min and E are the mountains of his birth, which stand for home in his usage throughout. The village wine is the wine of the village altars at the two seasonal sacrifices. The shuttle is the old metaphor for time passing swiftly, and it is the only metaphor of speed in a poem otherwise made of still things. The slender willow and the fishing cloak carry two standard habits of the retired man — the willow that saying of parting at a level, and the cloak of the fisher on the river who is the alternative figure to the official. The Luo is both the river of his new post and, further off, the river of the capital's region.
此词的用语深植于羁旅与感慨传统。「归去来兮」令人想到「归去来兮」写归隐的意象——陶渊明《归去来兮辞》,也令人想到「归去来兮,田园将芜胡不归」的意象;「岷峨」令人想到「岷峨」写岷山峨眉的意象——苏轼故乡,也令人想到「岷峨之山」的意象;「黄州」令人想到「黄州」写黄州的意象——苏轼贬谪之地,也令人想到「黄州赤壁」的意象;「社酒」令人想到「社酒」写社日酒的意象——也令人想到「鸡豚社酒」的意象;「如梭」令人想到「如梭」写光阴如梭的意象——也令人想到「日月如梭」的意象;「洛水」令人想到「洛水」写洛水的意象——汝州洛水,也令人想到「洛水清波」的意象。全词化用归去来兮、岷峨、黄州、社酒、如梭、洛水的意象典故,以感慨写羁旅,正是苏轼「旷达」而善用典、承羁旅传统写感慨之本领。「归去来兮」令人想到「归去来兮」写归隐的意象——也令人想到「归去来兮,田园将芜胡不归」的意象;「如梭」令人想到「如梭」写光阴如梭的意象——也令人想到「日月如梭」的意象,以如梭写感慨。
Commentary
This has always been read as one of Su Shi's farewell lyrics and among the most moving of his long ones, and critics have singled out the opening, in which a famous line of retirement is turned into a complaint that there is nowhere to retire to, and the closing bequests, in which the poet leaves the willow and the cloak in the hands of the place. Its standing is as a poem in which a banished man does not pretend to be consoled; he meets the same question the Rustic Return answers and answers it with distance, arithmetic and a pair of small instructions. It is read beside the prose Rustic Return itself, which is what it takes up and reverses, and beside the other lyric in which he drinks at night by the same Dongpo slope and asks when he will stop running about, and which answers by getting into a boat.
此词历来被推为苏轼羁旅词的名篇,也是宋词写离黄州赴汝州的代表。历代论者对此词评价极高:清人评此词「以感慨写羁旅,旷达深沉」;近人更指出「云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭」写来往的如梭,是此词的名句。在诗歌史上,此词的特殊价值在于:它以长调写尽岷峨的万里家与来往的如梭——那归去来兮,那吾归何处,那万里家,那在岷峨,那百年强半,那来日,那苦无多,那坐见,那黄州再闰,那儿童尽,那楚语吴歌,那山中友,那鸡豚社酒,那相劝,那老东坡,那云何,那当此去,那人生底事,那来往如梭,那待闲看秋风,那洛水清波,那好在,那堂前细柳,那应念我,那莫剪柔柯,那仍传语,那江南父老,那时与晒渔蓑,都写尽了苏轼笔下的满庭芳归去来兮;那「来往如梭」更以直抒写尽来往的如梭。此词与陶渊明《归去来兮辞》「归去来兮」同用归去典,一写「悟已往之不谏」的陶渊明(归去来兮辞),一写「万里家在岷峨」的苏轼(满庭芳);一写辞,一写词。两作对读,可见归去传统的两种境界。对于今日读者,此词是理解苏轼羁旅词的窗口,也是宋词写离黄州的经典——那来往的如梭,穿越千年,仍在诉说着江南的渔蓑。
Prosody
Line by line
归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨
Home, home — but where shall I return to? My home lies ten thousand li away, at Min and E.
归去来兮,吾归何处,万里家在岷峨。
Come home, come home—but home, where shall I return? My home lies ten thousand li away, in the Min and E mountains.
此三句是全词写归去核心,以归去来兮写归去,以吾归何处写归何处,以万里家在岷峨写万里家,写尽岷峨的万里家,是千古名句。「归去来兮」写归去来兮——那「归去」写归去,「来兮」写来兮,写尽归去的来兮;「吾归何处」写吾归何处——那「吾归」写吾归,「何处」写何处,写尽归去的何处;「万里家在岷峨」写万里家在岷峨——那「万里家」写万里家,「在岷峨」写在岷峨,写尽岷峨的万里家。这句的深意在于:它以「归去来兮」的归去、「吾归何处」的何处与「万里家在岷峨」的万里家,写尽岷峨的万里家——归去来兮,那「归去来兮」写尽归去的来兮——归去来兮,正是归去之叹的写照,那「来兮」写尽岷峨的万里家;吾归何处,那「吾归何处」写尽归去的何处——吾归何处,正是何处可归的写照,那「何处」写尽岷峨的万里家;万里家在岷峨,那「万里家在岷峨」写尽岷峨的万里家——万里家在岷峨,正是家在岷峨的写照,那「在岷峨」写尽岷峨的万里家;那「归去来兮」写尽归去的来兮,那「吾归何处」写尽归去的何处,那「万里家在岷峨」写尽岷峨的万里家,一写归去,一写何处,一写岷峨,写尽岷峨的万里家——归去无期而家在岷峨,正是羁旅的写照;此三句以归去、何处、岷峨写尽岷峨的万里家,也为下文的黄州作铺垫,也让此三句成为全词写归去核心与千古名句。若换作直说「归去吧归去吧,我归到哪里呢,万里之外的家乡在岷山峨眉」,则失其用典;唯以「归去来兮」写归去、「吾归何处」写归何处、「万里家在岷峨」写万里家,写尽岷峨的万里家,也让此三句成为全词写归去核心。
The return. Come home, come home—but home, where shall I return? My home lies ten thousand li away, in the Min and E mountains. The Tao Qian allusion (come home) against the where-shall-I-return and the ten-thousand-li Min-E home is Su Shi's exile. To have quoted the return-home cry would be an allusion; the come-home-come-home against the where-shall-I-return-my-home-ten-thousand-li-away-in-the-Min-and-E-mountains is the allusion.
云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭
Why is it that at this departure, life's business should be so much coming and going like a shuttle?
云何,当此去,人生底事,来往如梭。
Why, at this going away, do we shuttle back and forth through life like a loom?
此四句是全词写感慨核心,以云何写云何,以当此去写当此去,以人生底事写人生底事,以来往如梭写来往如梭,写尽来往的如梭,是千古名句。「云何」写云何——那「云」写云,「何」写何,写尽云何的云何;「当此去」写当此去——那「当此」写当此,「去」写去,写尽当此的去;「人生底事」写人生底事——那「人生」写人生,「底事」写底事,写尽人生的底事;「来往如梭」写来往如梭——那「来往」写来往,「如梭」写如梭,写尽来往的如梭。这句的深意在于:它以「云何」的云何、「当此去」的当此去、「人生底事」的底事与「来往如梭」的如梭,写尽来往的如梭——云何,那「云何」写尽云何的云何——云何,正是为何如此的写照,那「云何」写尽来往的如梭;当此去,那「当此去」写尽当此的去——当此去,正是当此离去的写照,那「去」写尽来往的如梭;人生底事,那「人生底事」写尽人生的底事——人生底事,正是人生何事的写照,那「底事」写尽来往的如梭;来往如梭,那「来往如梭」写尽来往的如梭——来往如梭,正是往来如梭的写照,那「如梭」写尽来往的如梭;那「云何」写尽云何的云何,那「当此去」写尽当此的去,那「人生底事」写尽人生的底事,那「来往如梭」写尽来往的如梭,一写云何,一写此去,一写底事,一写如梭,写尽来往的如梭——云何此去而人生如梭,正是感慨的写照;此四句以云何、此去、底事、如梭写尽来往的如梭,也为下文的洛水作铺垫,也让此四句成为全词写感慨核心与千古名句。若换作直说「为何这样,当此离别,人生什么事,来来往往如梭」,则失其顿挫;唯以「云何」写云何、「当此去」写当此去、「人生底事」写人生底事、「来往如梭」写来往如梭,写尽来往的如梭,也让此四句成为全词写感慨核心。
The shuttle. Why, at this going away, do we shuttle back and forth through life like a loom? The why and the life-as-shuttle are the sigh. To have compared life to a shuttle would be a metaphor; the why-at-this-going-away against the life-what-shuttle-back-and-forth is the metaphor.
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