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虞美人·枕上
Tune: 'Yumeiren' (The Beautiful Lady Yu) — On the Pillow
堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪。
夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星。
晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影。
一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由。
The long night's sky is ever slow to brighten; in loneliness I throw on my robe, sit up, and count the cold stars.
At dawn all my hundred thoughts turn to ashes, leaving only the figure of my departed love.
A single hook of the waning moon flows westward; before this, there is no reason not to let my tears fall.
Meaning
Written for his wife Yang Kaihui, this lyric gives voice to a night of lovesick longing. Sorrow piles on the pillow like churning seas; the lover counts cold stars through the endless night, and at dawn only the absent one's shadow remains. The poem closes on tears before the waning moon—a tender, restrained confession of devotion from a revolutionary pen.
堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪。夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星。晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影。一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] This lyric, written for Mao's wife Yang Kaihui, records a sleepless night of marital longing. Sorrow piles upon the pillow like surging rivers and seas; the long night will not brighten, and in loneliness the poet rises to count the cold stars. At dawn his myriad thoughts turn to ash, leaving only the figure of the one far away; before the westward-drifting waning moon he cannot but weep. [Structure] The poem opens with sorrow (chou) and closes with tears (lei), framing a single night from pillow to dawn. Each couplet moves from inner feeling to outer scene. [Imagery] The 'rivers and seas' metaphor for grief, the 'cold stars' counted in solitude, and the 'hook of waning moon' all externalize inner ache. The technique of 'writing feeling through scene' gives restrained emotion a concrete, lingering form. The result is deeply gentle and moving (shen wan dong ren)—a rare tender work from a revolutionary pen.
【白话串讲】 毛泽东写《虞美人·枕上》:“堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪”——“夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星”——“晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影”——“一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由”——他写枕上的离愁。 【意象与手法】 “堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪”以江海喻愁;“夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星”以数寒星写孤寂;“晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影”写离思;“一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由”以残月写泪。以愁起笔、以泪收束,深婉动人。 【情感与主旨】 毛泽东写给夫人杨开慧的离愁词,写枕上堆愁、彻夜难眠的思念,是革命者笔下的柔情之作,体现其情感深挚的一面。 【名句点睛】 常考“堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪”以江海喻愁;“一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由”以残月写离泪。
Background
Mao Zedong (1893–1976), styled Runzhi, was a Hunan-born revolutionary, strategist, and statesman who was also a gifted classical poet. 'Tune: Yumeiren — On the Pillow' is an early lyric expressing romantic longing for his wife Yang Kaihui. Unlike his later grand public verse, this piece belongs to the private, intimate register of the ci form. It has long been anthologized as a representative love lyric among modern writers who employed traditional metrical forms, showing the personal, feeling side of a figure usually remembered for epic political poetry.
《虞美人·枕上》为毛泽东所作词。毛泽东(1893—1976),字润之,湖南湘潭人,中国无产阶级革命家、军事家,也是杰出的诗人。此词写感怀爱情,为枕上之作。词中「堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪」写堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪;「夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星」写夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星;「晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影」写晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影;「一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由」写一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由。毛泽东此词以感怀爱情、对此不抛眼泪也无由写其爱情之情,深婉动人,是毛泽东词中的名篇。此篇《虞美人·枕上》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《虞美人·枕上》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The poem's craft lies in its restraint and its use of scene to carry feeling. From 'sorrow piled on the pillow' to 'tears before the waning moon,' the emotional arc is sustained yet understated. The opening couplet deploys an extended metaphor—grief as rivers and seas in turmoil—to make an interior state visible and turbulent. The middle lines turn to the counted cold stars and the ash of a hundred thoughts, compressing a long, sleepless night into a few precise images. The closing waning moon, drawn as a single westward 'hook,' frames the weeping figure and seals the mood of quiet desolation. Through 'writing feeling by means of scene' the poet achieves a spare, haunting music that belies the turbulent heart beneath.
此词艺术上以「深婉动人、以景写情」见长。全词共两句,由堆来枕上愁何状而夜长天色总难明而晓来百念都灰烬。起「堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪」写堆来枕上愁何状:堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪;「夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星」写夜长天色总难明:夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星;「晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影」写晓来百念都灰烬:晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影;结「一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由」写一钩残月向西流:一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由。全词以景写情,由堆来枕上愁何状而对此不抛眼泪也无由,深婉动人,是毛泽东词中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
The poem is lightly allusive, drawing on conventional ci imagery rather than specific classical典故. The 'rivers and seas' (jiang hai) topos for overwhelming emotion echoes a long tradition of using water to figure grief and longing. The 'cold stars' (han xing) evoke the lonely night-watch of the separated lover, a motif traceable through Tang and Song love poetry. The 'waning moon' (can yue) is a standard emblem of parting and impermanence. Mao fuses these inherited tokens of separation with a modern, autobiographical occasion, so that the classical vocabulary serves a deeply personal, contemporary feeling.
词中「堆来枕上愁何状江海翻波浪」「夜长天色总难明寂寞披衣起坐数寒星」「晓来百念都灰烬剩有离人影」「一钩残月向西流对此不抛眼泪也无由」等语,皆含典故故实。「堆来枕上愁何状江海翻波浪」用江海之喻(江海写愁如江海),写堆来枕上愁何状江海翻波浪;「夜长天色总难明寂寞披衣起坐数寒星」写夜长天色总难明寂寞披衣起坐数寒星;「晓来百念都灰烬剩有离人影」写晓来百念都灰烬剩有离人影;「一钩残月向西流对此不抛眼泪也无由」写一钩残月向西流对此不抛眼泪也无由。词人以江海、残月等语入词,不着痕迹,而把感怀爱情之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。
Commentary
Among Mao's poetic output this little lyric is prized precisely because it is unguarded. Where his public verse projects collective heroism, 'On the Pillow' admits private vulnerability—the churned seas of longing, the cold-starred vigil, the tears that will not be held back. Later readers and anthologists have valued it as evidence of the poet's emotional depth and of the continuity between the traditional ci form and modern sentiment. Its fame rests on the sincerity with which a revolutionary speaks as a lover, and on the quiet craft that lets a single night's ache resonate far beyond its occasion.
这首《虞美人·枕上》,是毛泽东写感怀爱情之作,写堆来枕上愁何状、夜长天色总难明、晓来百念都灰烬、一钩残月向西流之情,深婉动人。起「堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪」——堆来枕上愁何状(用江海之喻),江海翻波浪。写堆来枕上愁何状:堆来枕上愁何状、江海翻波浪——枕上愁、翻波浪;「夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星」——夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星。写夜长天色总难明:夜长天色总难明、寂寞披衣起坐数寒星——总难明、数寒星;「晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影」——晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影。写晓来百念都灰烬:晓来百念都灰烬、剩有离人影——都灰烬、离人影;结「一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由」——一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由。写一钩残月向西流:一钩残月向西流、对此不抛眼泪也无由——残月西流、不抛眼泪。这「一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由」,是全词之结:以对此不抛眼泪也无由写其爱情。全词深婉动人,以景写情,正是毛泽东词中的名篇。
Prosody
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堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪。
What form does the sorrow piled upon my pillow take? Like rivers and seas tossing up waves.
堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪。
Piled upon the pillow, what shape is this grief? It is like a great river and sea heaving in billows.
起句写堆来枕上愁何状,起笔即见其愁。「堆来枕上愁何状」写堆来枕上愁何状,「堆来枕上」写堆来枕上、「愁何状」写愁何状;「江海翻波浪」用江海之喻写江海翻波浪,「江海」写江海、「翻波浪」写翻波浪。两句一写堆来枕上愁何状、一写江海翻波浪,以堆来枕上愁何状写枕上愁、以江海翻波浪写翻波浪,写尽堆来枕上愁何状、江海翻波浪之情。以愁起兴,深婉而动人,是「以愁起兴」的妙笔。
The opening. Piled upon the pillow, what shape is this grief? It is like a great river and sea heaving in billows. The piled grief and the heaving sea are the love poem's first image. To have described grief on the pillow would be a mood; the piled-on-the-pillow-grief against the river-and-sea-heaving-billows is the mood.
夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星。
The long night's sky is ever slow to brighten; in loneliness I throw on my robe, sit up, and count the cold stars.
夜长天色总难明,寂寞披衣起坐数寒星。
The night is long, the dawn always slow to come; lonely, I put on my robe and rise to count the cold stars.
此二句写夜长天色总难明,是全词写夜长之态的关键。「夜长天色总难明」写夜长天色总难明,「夜长天色」写夜长天色、「总难明」写总难明;「寂寞披衣起坐数寒星」写寂寞披衣起坐数寒星,「寂寞披衣」写寂寞披衣、「起坐数寒星」写起坐数寒星。两句一写夜长天色总难明、一写寂寞披衣起坐数寒星,以夜长天色总难明写总难明、以寂寞披衣起坐数寒星写数寒星,写尽夜长天色总难明、寂寞披衣起坐数寒星之情。以夜写情,深婉而动人,是「以夜写情」的点睛之笔。
The stars. The night is long, the dawn always slow to come; lonely, I put on my robe and rise to count the cold stars. The long night and the rising to count the cold stars are the sleepless night. To have described sleeplessness would be a detail; the long-slow-dawning-night against the lonely-robe-rising-to-count-the-cold-stars is the detail.
晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影。
At dawn all my hundred thoughts turn to ashes, leaving only the figure of my departed love.
晓来百念都灰烬,剩有离人影。
At dawn, all my thoughts are ashes; only the shadow of the parted one remains.
此二句写晓来百念都灰烬,是全词写百念之态的关键。「晓来百念都灰烬」写晓来百念都灰烬,「晓来百念」写晓来百念、「都灰烬」写都灰烬;「剩有离人影」写剩有离人影,「剩有」写剩有、「离人影」写离人影。两句一写晓来百念都灰烬、一写剩有离人影,以晓来百念都灰烬写都灰烬、以剩有离人影写离人影,写尽晓来百念都灰烬、剩有离人影之情。以烬写情,深婉而动人,是「以烬写情」的点睛之笔。
The dawn. At dawn, all my thoughts are ashes; only the shadow of the parted one remains. The thoughts-turned-ashes and the one remaining shadow of the beloved are the dawn's result. To have said the night's thoughts died at dawn would be a statement; the all-thoughts-ashes-at-dawn against the only-parted-one's-shadow-remaining is the statement.
一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由。
A single hook of the waning moon flows westward; before this, there is no reason not to let my tears fall.
一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由。
A hook of setting moon drifts west; before such a sight, how could one keep from weeping?
结句写一钩残月向西流,是全词立意的落点。「一钩残月向西流」写一钩残月向西流,「一钩残月」写一钩残月、「向西流」写向西流;「对此不抛眼泪也无由」写对此不抛眼泪也无由,「对此不抛」写对此不抛、「眼泪也无由」写眼泪也无由。两句一写一钩残月向西流、一写对此不抛眼泪也无由,以一钩残月向西流写残月西流、以对此不抛眼泪也无由写不抛眼泪,写尽一钩残月向西流、对此不抛眼泪也无由之情。以月写情,深婉而动人,是全词最动人处,也是「以月写情」的点睛之笔。
The close. A hook of setting moon drifts west; before such a sight, how could one keep from weeping? The setting hook of moon and the how-could-one-keep-from-weeping close the poem. To have said the moon made him weep would be a moment; the hook-of-setting-moon-drifting-west against the before-such-a-sight-how-could-one-keep-from-weeping is the moment.
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Liu Yong's 'Basheng Ganzhou' ('Before the misty dusk rain on the river sky, once more it washes the clear autumn') is a Song ci masterpiece of travel melancholy. Mao's 'On the Pillow' similarly dwells on separation, yet where Liu writes the traveler's vast, limpid autumn, Mao writes the lover's churned seas and counted cold stars. Reading them together shows two registers of the same ci impulse—Liu's clear lyricism against Mao's deep tenderness—both discovering feeling in the condition of absence.
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水调歌头·明月几时有 Tune: 'Shui Diao Ge Tou' (Prelude to Water Melody) — When Did the Moon Appear? 苏轼 · 同写离别感怀、深婉旷达,一写但愿人长久、一写堆来枕上愁何状江海翻波浪,皆于离别之中见感怀 Both treat parting with deep feeling and a lofty register—one wishing the loved one long life, one weeping before the waning moon.Su Shi's 'Shui Diao Ge Tou' ('May we live long so our hearts can share the moon's beauty, though a thousand miles apart') answers separation with philosophical expansiveness. Mao's 'On the Pillow' answers it with intimate tears. The two share the moon as emblem of parting, yet Su's is full and consoling while Mao's is a 'hook' of waning—together they show the range of the ci form from transcendent acceptance to tender surrender.
苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「但愿人长久,千里共婵娟」,写离别感怀、深婉旷达,是宋词长调的名篇;毛泽东《虞美人·枕上》则以「堆来枕上愁何状,江海翻波浪」「一钩残月向西流,对此不抛眼泪也无由」写枕上愁翻波浪、残月向西流。两词同写离别感怀、深婉旷达:一写但愿人长久、以千里共婵娟写思亲,一写堆来枕上愁何状江海翻波浪、以枕上愁写离情;一为苏轼之旷达、一为毛泽东之深婉,并读正可见词写「离别感怀」的两种笔法,皆于离别之中见感怀。