唐 Tang · 诗 Poem
井底引银瓶
Drawing the Silver Vessel from the Well
井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝。
石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折。
瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别。
忆昔在家为女时,人言举动有殊姿。
婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼,宛转双蛾远山色。
笑随戏伴后园中,此时与君未相识。
妾弄青梅凭短墙,君骑白马傍垂杨。
墙头马上遥相顾,一见知君即断肠。
知君断肠共君语,君指南山松柏树。
感君松柏化为心,暗合双鬟逐君去。
到君家舍五六年,君家大人频有言。
聘则为妻奔是妾,不堪主祀奉蘋蘩。
终知君家不可住,其奈出门无去处。
岂无父母在高堂,亦有亲情满故乡。
潜来更不通消息,今日悲羞归不得。
为君一日恩,误妾百年身。
寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人。
The hairpin of jade is ground against the stone, and breaks in the middle.
The vessel has sunk, the hairpin is broken, and what help is there?
It is like me this morning, parted from you.
Once I was a girl at my parents' home, and they said I had a bearing unlike others.
Two autumns of hair like the wings of the queen bee,
Brows curved and distant as the hills.
Laughing, playing with companions in the garden, when still we had not met.
I tossed green plums over the low wall, you rode a white horse by the willows.
From the wall-top on horseback we looked at each other, and at first sight my heart was broken for you.
Knowing what had happened to me, I spoke to you, and pointed at the pine and cypress of the southern hill.
Moved by your promise of those pine and cypress trees, I let my two hairpins be joined and followed you.
Five or six years in your house, and your parents never stopped finding fault.
Married lawfully I would be a wife, but to run off with me makes me a concubine, and I cannot preside at the offerings of the household.
I knew by now that there was no living in your house, and yet there was nowhere in the world to go.
Had I no parents still living high up, and no kin in my native town?
Secretly I came, and never sent a word; today the shame of going home is more than I can bear.
For one day's favour to you, I have wasted a hundred years of my life.
To the silly little girls of humble families I say: do not lightly give your person to another.
Meaning
A long narrative poem, this tells of a girl who elopes with a young man she met over a wall, lives six years with him, and finds that she can never be his lawful wife. When she tries to return home she finds she can neither go back nor stay. The poem ends with a warning to other girls not to give themselves away lightly, and its subject is the law and custom that turned a free love into a permanent disgrace.
井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝。 石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折。 瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别。 忆昔在家为女时,人言举动有殊姿。 婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼,宛转双蛾远山色。 笑随戏伴后园中,此时与君未相识。 妾弄青梅凭短墙,君骑白马傍垂杨。 墙头马上遥相顾,一见知君即断肠。 知君断肠共君语,君指南山松柏树。 感君松柏化为心,暗合双鬟逐君去。 到君家舍五六年,君家大人频有言。 聘则为妻奔是妾,不堪主祀奉蘋蘩。 终知君家不可住,其奈出门无去处。 岂无父母在高堂,亦有亲情满故乡。 潜来更不通消息,今日悲羞归不得。 为君一日恩,误妾百年身。 寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] A girl in her parents' home meets a young man over a low wall; they run off together; six years later she is refused the worship of his ancestral offerings, and she cannot go back to her family either. The poem closes with an instruction to other girls not to surrender themselves lightly. [Structure] The narrative runs in two sections. The first is the romance: the green plums, the white horse, the promise of the pines. The second is the judgement: the parents, the concubine's place, the two doors closed. The refrain-like closing couplet turns the story into a precept. [Imagery] Two sets of images, one lovely and one legal. The plums, the horse, the willow and the brows are the language of a courtship poem; the rope, the broken hairpin, the household offerings and the surname are the language that ends it. [Sentiment] The poem's heat is in its plainness. The narrator never complains of being loved badly; she states the facts, and the facts are enough to convict the custom.
【白话串讲】 白居易写《井底引银瓶》:“井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝”——“石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折”——“瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别”——“寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人”——他写私奔女子的悲剧——劝少女别轻易许身。 【意象与手法】 此诗写讽喻,以民生写讽喻,是白居易的名篇。前段写瓶沉:「井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝。石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折。瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别。忆昔在家为女时,人言举动有殊姿。婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼,宛转双蛾远山色。笑随戏伴后园中,此时与君未相识。妾弄青梅凭短墙,君骑白马傍垂杨。墙头马上遥相顾,一见知君即断肠。知君断肠共君语,君指南山松柏树。感君松柏化为心,暗合双鬟逐君去」写井底引银瓶、银瓶欲上丝绳绝——写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝;后段写悲羞:「到君家舍五六年,君家大人频有言。聘则为妻奔是妾,不堪主祀奉蘋蘩。终知君家不可住,其奈出门无去处。岂无父母在高堂,亦有亲情满故乡。潜来更不通消息,今日悲羞归不得。为君一日恩,误妾百年身。寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人」写到君家舍五六年、君家大人频有言——写尽君家大人的频有言。全诗以民生写讽喻,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝与君家大人的频有言,是白居易的代表作。 【情感与主旨】 此诗写讽喻,以民生写讽喻,是白居易的名篇。此诗为白居易新乐府诗,写其以女子私奔讽礼教。白居易倡导新乐府运动,此诗写其咏井底引银瓶以刺时俗。此诗写井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝;石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折;瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别;忆昔在家为女时,人言举动有殊姿;婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼,宛转双蛾远山色;笑随戏伴后园中,此时与君未相识;妾弄青梅凭短墙,君骑白马傍垂杨;墙头马上遥相顾,一见知君即断肠;知君断肠共君语,君指南山松柏树;感君松柏化为心,暗合双鬟逐君去;到君家舍五六年,君家大人频有言;聘则为妻奔是妾,不堪主祀奉蘋蘩;终知君家不可住,其奈出门无去处;岂无父母在高堂,亦有亲情满故乡;潜来更不通消息,今日悲羞归不得;为君一日恩,误妾百年身;寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人。此诗写瓶沉:井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝——写井底引银瓶、银瓶欲上丝绳绝,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝;石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折——写石上磨玉簪、玉簪欲成中央折,写尽玉簪欲成的中央折;瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别——写瓶沉簪折知奈何、似妾今朝与君别,写尽似妾今朝的与君别;忆昔在家为女时,人言举动有殊姿——写忆昔在家为女时、人言举动有殊姿,写尽人言举动的殊姿;婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼,宛转双蛾远山色——写婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼、宛转双蛾远山色,写尽宛转双蛾的远山色;笑随戏伴后园中,此时与君未相识——写笑随戏伴后园中、此时与君未相识,写尽此时与君的未相识;妾弄青梅凭短墙,君骑白马傍垂杨——写妾弄青梅凭短墙、君骑白马傍垂杨,写尽君骑白马的垂杨;墙头马上遥相顾,一见知君即断肠——写墙头马上遥相顾、一见知君即断肠,写尽一见知君的断肠;知君断肠共君语,君指南山松柏树——写知君断肠共君语、君指南山松柏树,写尽君指南山的松柏树;感君松柏化为心,暗合双鬟逐君去——写感君松柏化为心、暗合双鬟逐君去,写尽暗合双鬟的逐君去。后段写悲羞:到君家舍五六年,君家大人频有言——写到君家舍五六年、君家大人频有言,写尽君家大人的频有言;聘则为妻奔是妾,不堪主祀奉蘋蘩——写聘则为妻奔是妾、不堪主祀奉蘋蘩,写尽不堪主祀的蘋蘩;终知君家不可住,其奈出门无去处——写终知君家不可住、其奈出门无去处,写尽其奈出门的无去处;岂无父母在高堂,亦有亲情满故乡——写岂无父母在高堂、亦有亲情满故乡,写尽亦有亲情满的故乡;潜来更不通消息,今日悲羞归不得——写潜来更不通消息、今日悲羞归不得,写尽今日悲羞的归不得;为君一日恩,误妾百年身——写为君一日恩、误妾百年身,写尽误妾百年的一日恩;寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人——写寄言痴小人家女、慎勿将身轻许人,写尽慎勿将身的轻许人。全诗以民生写讽喻——那「银瓶欲上丝绳绝」写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝,「慎勿将身轻许人」写尽慎勿将身的轻许人,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝与君家大人的频有言,是理解白居易讽喻诗的重要篇章。 【名句点睛】 常考「井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝」写银瓶欲上的丝绳绝;「为君一日恩,误妾百年身」写误妾百年的一日恩;以及全诗以民生写讽喻、以比兴写讽喻的手法。
Background
Bai Juyi (772-846) produced the New Yuefu in 808-809, while serving in the court library, and the series is the clearest statement of his programme that songs should be made of present events and should reach the ruler. This poem stands slightly apart from its neighbours: it is a story rather than a portrait of suffering, and it carries an explicit didactic close. Its subject, a couple who cannot marry because the man's family will not accept a runaway, reflects the marriage law and the clan ethos of the Tang, in which a concubine could not preside at the ancestral sacrifices.
此诗写讽喻,以民生写讽喻,是白居易的名篇。白居易(772—846),字乐天,号香山居士,又号醉吟先生,祖籍太原,生于河南新郑,唐代现实主义诗人,与元稹共同倡导新乐府运动,世称「元白」,与刘禹锡并称「刘白」。此诗为白居易新乐府诗,写其以女子私奔讽礼教。白居易倡导新乐府运动,此诗写其咏井底引银瓶以刺时俗。此诗写井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝;石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折;瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别;忆昔在家为女时,人言举动有殊姿;婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼,宛转双蛾远山色;笑随戏伴后园中,此时与君未相识;妾弄青梅凭短墙,君骑白马傍垂杨;墙头马上遥相顾,一见知君即断肠;知君断肠共君语,君指南山松柏树;感君松柏化为心,暗合双鬟逐君去;到君家舍五六年,君家大人频有言;聘则为妻奔是妾,不堪主祀奉蘋蘩;终知君家不可住,其奈出门无去处;岂无父母在高堂,亦有亲情满故乡;潜来更不通消息,今日悲羞归不得;为君一日恩,误妾百年身;寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人。此诗写瓶沉:「井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝」写井底引银瓶、银瓶欲上丝绳绝——写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝(井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝);「石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折」写石上磨玉簪、玉簪欲成中央折——写尽玉簪欲成的中央折(石上磨玉簪,玉簪欲成中央折);「瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别」写瓶沉簪折知奈何、似妾今朝与君别——写尽似妾今朝的与君别(瓶沉簪折知奈何,似妾今朝与君别);「忆昔在家为女时,人言举动有殊姿」写忆昔在家为女时、人言举动有殊姿——写尽人言举动的殊姿(忆昔在家为女时,人言举动有殊姿);「婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼,宛转双蛾远山色」写婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼、宛转双蛾远山色——写尽宛转双蛾的远山色(婵娟两鬓秋蝉翼,宛转双蛾远山色);「笑随戏伴后园中,此时与君未相识」写笑随戏伴后园中、此时与君未相识——写尽此时与君的未相识(笑随戏伴后园中,此时与君未相识);「妾弄青梅凭短墙,君骑白马傍垂杨」写妾弄青梅凭短墙、君骑白马傍垂杨——写尽君骑白马的垂杨(妾弄青梅凭短墙,君骑白马傍垂杨);「墙头马上遥相顾,一见知君即断肠」写墙头马上遥相顾、一见知君即断肠——写尽一见知君的断肠(墙头马上遥相顾,一见知君即断肠);「知君断肠共君语,君指南山松柏树」写知君断肠共君语、君指南山松柏树——写尽君指南山的松柏树(知君断肠共君语,君指南山松柏树);「感君松柏化为心,暗合双鬟逐君去」写感君松柏化为心、暗合双鬟逐君去——写尽暗合双鬟的逐君去(感君松柏化为心,暗合双鬟逐君去)。后段写悲羞:「到君家舍五六年,君家大人频有言」写到君家舍五六年、君家大人频有言——写尽君家大人的频有言(到君家舍五六年,君家大人频有言);「聘则为妻奔是妾,不堪主祀奉蘋蘩」写聘则为妻奔是妾、不堪主祀奉蘋蘩——写尽不堪主祀的蘋蘩(聘则为妻奔是妾,不堪主祀奉蘋蘩);「终知君家不可住,其奈出门无去处」写终知君家不可住、其奈出门无去处——写尽其奈出门的无去处(终知君家不可住,其奈出门无去处);「岂无父母在高堂,亦有亲情满故乡」写岂无父母在高堂、亦有亲情满故乡——写尽亦有亲情满的故乡(岂无父母在高堂,亦有亲情满故乡);「潜来更不通消息,今日悲羞归不得」写潜来更不通消息、今日悲羞归不得——写尽今日悲羞的归不得(潜来更不通消息,今日悲羞归不得);「为君一日恩,误妾百年身」写为君一日恩、误妾百年身——写尽误妾百年的一日恩(为君一日恩,误妾百年身);「寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人」写寄言痴小人家女、慎勿将身轻许人——写尽慎勿将身的轻许人(寄言痴小人家女,慎勿将身轻许人)。全诗以民生写讽喻,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝与君家大人的频有言,是理解白居易讽喻诗的重要篇章。
Art
The verse is a plain narrative in the old ballad manner, and its effects are all structural. First, the choice of a first-person speaker who is not elegant and not sorry for herself, which gives the story its force. Second, the careful matching of the opening couplets: the well rope snaps and the hairpin breaks, both in the same line rhythm as the later separation, so the ending's image is planted at the start. Third, the accumulation of small concrete facts - green plums, white horse, willows, pine and cypress - which are precisely the details the law would later blot out. Fourth, the turn in the middle, where the eight laws of marriage in a single line reduce years of feeling to a legal category. The close, an address to other girls, converts the whole story into an argument, which is what makes it a New Yuefu poem.
此诗的艺术特色可从四个方面解析。其一,以比兴写瓶沉。「井底引银瓶」以比兴写瓶沉——那「银瓶欲上丝绳绝」写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝,以比兴写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝。其二,以铺陈写忆昔。「忆昔在家为女时」以铺陈写忆昔——那「人言举动有殊姿」写尽人言举动的殊姿,以铺陈写尽人言举动的殊姿。其三,以叙事写私奔。「墙头马上遥相顾」以叙事写私奔——那「一见知君即断肠」写尽一见知君的断肠,以叙事写尽暗合双鬟的逐君去。其四,以直抒写劝诫。「寄言痴小人家女」以直抒写劝诫——那「慎勿将身轻许人」写尽慎勿将身的轻许人,以直抒写尽慎勿将身的轻许人。此外,此诗前段写银瓶欲上的丝绳绝,后段写君家大人的频有言,由今及昔,正是讽喻诗「以悲写诫」的写法。四重手法,使此诗以民生写讽喻,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝与君家大人的频有言,是白居易的代表作。
Allusions
The green plum and the white horse recall the older folk tale of the boy and girl who meet over a wall, and the phrase for looking down from a wall-top and horse is an idiom of the chance encounter. The pine and cypress of the southern hill are the most conventional of promises, made here as a marriage vow. The beautiful hairpin of jade ground against stone, and the vessel lowered into the well, are traditional emblems of a broken union. The real allusion, however, is legal: the line about not presiding at the offerings of the household states the actual penalty of a concubine under Tang custom, without which the story would be merely sentimental.
此诗的用语深植于讽喻与民生传统。「银瓶」令人想到「银瓶」写银瓶的意象——也令人想到「银瓶乍破水浆迸」(白居易)的意象;「丝绳」令人想到「丝绳」写丝绳的意象——也令人想到「丝绳玉瓶」的意象;「玉簪」令人想到「玉簪」写玉簪的意象——也令人想到「玉簪螺髻」(辛弃疾)的意象;「秋蝉翼」令人想到「秋蝉翼」写鬓发的意象——也令人想到「鬓云欲度香腮雪」(温庭筠)的意象;「远山色」令人想到「远山色」写眉的意象——也令人想到「眉黛远山」的意象;「青梅」令人想到「青梅」写青梅的意象——也令人想到「郎骑竹马来,绕床弄青梅」(李白)的意象;「白马」令人想到「白马」写白马的意象——也令人想到「白马饰金羁」的意象;「松柏」令人想到「松柏」写松柏的意象——也令人想到「岁寒知松柏」的意象;「双鬟」令人想到「双鬟」写双鬟的意象——也令人想到「丫鬟双鬟」的意象;「聘则为妻」令人想到「聘则为妻」写礼教的意象——《礼记》聘则为妻,也令人想到「奔则为妾」的意象;「蘋蘩」令人想到「蘋蘩」写祭品的意象——《诗经》采蘋采蘩,也令人想到「奉蘋蘩」的意象;「高堂」令人想到「高堂」写父母的意象——也令人想到「高堂明镜悲白发」(李白)的意象。全诗化用银瓶、丝绳、玉簪、秋蝉翼、远山色、青梅、白马、松柏、双鬟、聘则为妻、蘋蘩、高堂的意象典故,以民生写讽喻,正是白居易「讽喻」而善比兴、承乐府传统写民生之本领。
Commentary
The poem has usually been read as a warning to young women, and its last line is quoted more often than its narrative; modern readers have noted that the warning is aimed at the whole system rather than at the girl, since she is blamed for a fault the law defines. Critics of the New Yuefu prized it as an example of the sequence's plainness, using ordinary speech for a story about ordinary people. It is often paired with the longer ballad on the chief consort, which tells the same poet's view of a love that finally worked, and the contrast between the two is instructive.
此诗历来被推为白居易讽喻诗的名篇,也是新乐府写女子私奔的代表。历代论者对此诗评价极高:清人评此诗「以民生写讽喻,直切痛切」;近人更指出「为君一日恩,误妾百年身」写误妾百年的一日恩,是此诗的名句。在诗歌史上,此诗的特殊价值在于:它以长篇写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝与君家大人的频有言——那井底,那引银瓶,那银瓶欲上,那丝绳绝,那石上,那磨玉簪,那玉簪欲成,那中央折,那瓶沉,那簪折,那知奈何,那似妾,那今朝,那与君别,那忆昔,那在家为女时,那人言,那举动,那有殊姿,那婵娟,那两鬓,那秋蝉翼,那宛转,那双蛾,那远山色,那笑随,那戏伴,那后园中,那此时,那与君未相识,那妾弄青梅,那凭短墙,那君骑白马,那傍垂杨,那墙头,那马上,那遥相顾,那一见,那知君,那即断肠,那知君断肠,那共君语,那君指,那南山,那松柏树,那感君,那松柏化为心,那暗合双鬟,那逐君去,那到君家舍,那五六年,那君家大人,那频有言,那聘则为妻,那奔是妾,那不堪主祀,那奉蘋蘩,那终知,那君家不可住,那其奈,那出门,那无去处,那岂无,那父母,那在高堂,那亦有,那亲情,那满故乡,那潜来,那更不通消息,那今日,那悲羞,那归不得,那为君,那一日恩,那误妾,那百年身,那寄言,那痴小人家女,那慎勿,那将身,那轻许人,都写尽了白居易笔下的井底引银瓶;那「慎勿将身轻许人」更以直抒写尽慎勿将身的轻许人。此诗与白居易《长恨歌》「汉皇重色思倾国」同为叙事名篇,一写「天长地久有时尽」的长恨歌,一写「慎勿将身轻许人」的井底引银瓶;一写贵妃,一写民间女子。两诗对读,可见白居易叙事诗的两面。对于今日读者,此诗是理解白居易讽喻诗的窗口,也是新乐府写女子私奔的经典——那慎勿将身的轻许人,穿越千年,仍在诉说着银瓶欲上的丝绳绝。
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井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝
The silver vessel is drawn from the well and the rope is about to part.
井底引银瓶,银瓶欲上丝绳绝。
Drawing the silver vase from the well bottom, the silk rope snaps just as the vase is about to surface.
此二句是全诗写瓶沉的核心,以井底引银瓶写银瓶,以银瓶欲上丝绳绝写丝绳绝,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝,是千古名句。「井底引银瓶」写井底引银瓶——那「井底」写井底,「引银瓶」写引银瓶,写尽井底引的银瓶;「银瓶欲上丝绳绝」写银瓶欲上丝绳绝——那「银瓶欲上」写银瓶欲上,「丝绳绝」写丝绳绝,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝。这句的深意在于:它以「井底引银瓶」的银瓶与「银瓶欲上丝绳绝」的丝绳绝,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝——井底引银瓶,那「井底引银瓶」写尽井底引的银瓶——井底引银瓶,正是井中取瓶的写照,那「银瓶」写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝;银瓶欲上丝绳绝,那「银瓶欲上丝绳绝」写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝——银瓶欲上丝绳绝,正是绳绝瓶沉的写照,那「丝绳绝」写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝;那「井底引银瓶」写尽井底引的银瓶,那「银瓶欲上丝绳绝」写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝,一写银瓶,一写丝绳绝,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝——井中取瓶而绳绝瓶沉,正是姻缘的写照;此二句以银瓶、丝绳绝写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝,也为下文的簪折作铺垫,也让此二句成为全诗写瓶沉的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「从井底引银瓶,银瓶要上来丝绳却断了」,则失其比兴;唯以「井底引银瓶」写银瓶、「银瓶欲上丝绳绝」写丝绳绝,写尽银瓶欲上的丝绳绝,也让此二句成为全诗写瓶沉的核心。
The rope. Drawing the silver vase from the well bottom, the silk rope snaps just as the vase is about to surface. The snapped rope with the silver vase (a love that breaks at the moment of fulfillment) is the metaphor. To have described the well rope breaking would be an image; the drawing-the-silver-vase-from-the-well-bottom against the silk-rope-snapping-as-the-vase-surfaces is the image.
为君一日恩,误妾百年身
One day's favour from you has ruined a hundred years of my life.
为君一日恩,误妾百年身。
For one day of your grace, you have ruined my hundred-year life.
此二句是全诗写悲羞的核心,以为君一日恩写一日恩,以误妾百年身写百年身,写尽误妾百年的一日恩,是千古名句。「为君一日恩」写为君一日恩——那「为君」写为君,「一日恩」写一日恩,写尽为君的一日恩;「误妾百年身」写误妾百年身——那「误妾」写误妾,「百年身」写百年身,写尽误妾的百年身。这句的深意在于:它以「为君一日恩」的一日恩与「误妾百年身」的百年身,写尽误妾百年的一日恩——为君一日恩,那「为君一日恩」写尽为君的一日恩——为君一日恩,正是君恩一日的写照,那「一日恩」写尽误妾百年的一日恩;误妾百年身,那「误妾百年身」写尽误妾的百年身——误妾百年身,正是误我终身的写照,那「百年身」写尽误妾百年的一日恩;那「为君一日恩」写尽为君的一日恩,那「误妾百年身」写尽误妾的百年身,一写一日恩,一写百年身,写尽误妾百年的一日恩——一日君恩而误我终身,正是悲羞的写照;此二句以一日恩、百年身写尽误妾百年的一日恩,也为下文的寄言作铺垫,也让此二句成为全诗写悲羞的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「为君的是一日恩,误了我的是百年身」,则失其痛切;唯以「为君一日恩」写一日恩、「误妾百年身」写百年身,写尽误妾百年的一日恩,也让此二句成为全诗写悲羞的核心。
The ruin. For one day of your grace, you have ruined my hundred-year life. The one-day grace against the ruined lifetime is the woman's accusation. To have said his brief love ruined her would be a complaint; the one-day-grace for-you against the ruined-my-hundred-year-life is the complaint.
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The longer Song of Everlasting Sorrow follows a favourite whose beauty and whose politics bring the empire to ruin, and closes on a vow made beyond death; this ballad follows a girl whose love was legal but not lawful. Both were written to be heard by a ruler, and both end by turning a story into a lesson. Where the one takes the empire as the scale of feeling, the other takes a single household, and the contrast is the best introduction to Bai Juyi's range.
白居易《长恨歌》「汉皇重色思倾国,御宇多年求不得」写叙事,是白居易的名篇。此诗《井底引银瓶》则「慎勿将身轻许人」写叙事。同为白居易叙事诗,一写「天长地久有时尽」的长恨歌,一写「银瓶欲上丝绳绝」的井底引银瓶;一写贵妃,一写民间女子。两诗对读,可见白居易叙事诗的两面。
长干行·妾发初覆额 长干行·妾发初覆额 李白 · 同青梅竹马,一郎骑竹马来绕床弄青梅一妾弄青梅凭短墙 Related readingCompare this related work with the poem above through theme, imagery, tone, and emotional movement.
李白《长干行》「妾发初覆额,折花门前剧」写青梅竹马,是李白的名篇。此诗《井底引银瓶》则「妾弄青梅凭短墙」写青梅竹马。同青梅竹马,一写「郎骑竹马来,绕床弄青梅」的长干行,一写「墙头马上遥相顾」的井底引银瓶;一写美满,一写悲剧。两诗对读,可见青梅竹马的两种结局。