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贺新郎·同父见和再用韵答之

Hexin Lang: Answering Tongfu, Using His Rhyme

辛弃疾

Xin Qiji

友情Friendship 报国Serving the State

老大那堪说。
似而今、元龙臭味,孟公瓜葛。
我病君来高歌饮,惊散楼头飞雪。
笑富贵千钧如发。
硬语盘空谁来听?
记当时、只有西窗月。
重进酒,换鸣瑟。
事无两样人心别。
问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合?
汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨。
正目断关河路绝。
我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁。
看试手,补天裂。

At my age, what is there left to say?
Such as I am: the breath of Yuan Long,
the kin of Meng Gong.
You came when I was ill, singing and drinking,
and scattered the flying snow from the tower-top.
We laughed that wealth and rank, a thousand jin in weight,
weigh as much as a single hair.
Who is there to listen to hard words that circle in mid-air?
I remember only: the moon at the western window.
We drink again, and change the zither.
Things are not different; it is hearts that differ.
I ask you: the Central Plain — how many times has it split,
and how often joined again?
Blood-sweating horses hauling the salt cart draw no one's care;
a thousand li spent in vain on the bones of a steed.
I watch until the passes and the rivers are cut off from sight.
Of all men I best pity you, dancing at midnight,
saying that a true man's heart is iron to his dying day.
See but that we try our hand —
and mend the great rift in the sky.
Listen

Meaning

Xin Qiji, in his late forties and out of favour, answers the patriot Chen Liang, who had come to visit him at Pengshan with a poem in the same rhyme. He recalls the night they spent together drinking and shouting until the snow on the tower top was scattered, and their shared contempt for wealth and rank. Then he turns to the state: the Central Plain, split and joined for centuries, whose capable men are buried the way a salt-hauling horse is abandoned or a thousand li of horse bones bought in vain. He praises Chen's iron-hearted resolve and ends on a single image — that they should try their hand at mending the rift in the sky, that is, at recovering the lost territory.

老大那堪说。似而今、元龙臭味,孟公瓜葛。我病君来高歌饮,惊散楼头飞雪。笑富贵千钧如发。硬语盘空谁来听?记当时、只有西窗月。重进酒,换鸣瑟。事无两样人心别。问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合?汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨。正目断关河路绝。我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁。看试手,补天裂。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] Two patriots in their forties, drinking together, and the first man answering the second in the same rhyme. <br>[Structure] The poem has two clearly divided halves: the friendship in the upper stanza, the politics in the lower, joined by the single line 'Things are not different; it is hearts that differ'. <br>[Imagery] The remembered evening is physical — illness, singing, drinking, snow on a tower, a zither changed for another, and above all the moon at the western window, the only man who heard them. <br>[The Close] 'See but that we try our hand — and mend the great rift in the sky' lifts the private grief of the stanza before it into a public task, and does so with the image of Nüwa mending heaven. The poem's force comes from its refusal to console: after 'a thousand li spent in vain on the bones of a steed', there is nothing to do but act.

【白话串讲】 辛弃疾写《贺新郎·同父见和再用韵答之》:“老大那堪说”——“我病君来高歌饮,惊散楼头飞雪”——“笑富贵千钧如发”——“硬语盘空谁来听?记当时、只有西窗月”——“问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合”——他写与陈亮的友情。 【意象与手法】 此词写与陈亮的知己之情与收复中原的壮志,以豪语写壮志,是辛弃疾的名篇。上阕写知己的相聚:「老大那堪说」写老大那堪说,「似而今、元龙臭味,孟公瓜葛」写似而今元龙臭味孟公瓜葛,「我病君来高歌饮」写我病君来高歌饮,「惊散楼头飞雪」写惊散楼头飞雪,「笑富贵千钧如发」写笑富贵千钧如发,「硬语盘空谁来听」写硬语盘空谁来听,「记当时、只有西窗月」写记当时只有西窗月,「重进酒,换鸣瑟」写重进酒换鸣瑟;下阕写国家的感慨与壮志:「事无两样人心别」写事无两样人心别,「问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合」写问渠侬神州毕竟几番离合,「汗血盐车无人顾」写汗血盐车无人顾,「千里空收骏骨」写千里空收骏骨,「正目断关河路绝」写正目断关河路绝,「我最怜君中宵舞」写我最怜君中宵舞,「道男儿、到死心如铁」写道男儿到死心如铁,「看试手,补天裂」写看试手补天裂。全词以知己之情写爱国壮志,写尽收复中原的壮志,是辛弃疾的代表作。 【情感与主旨】 此词写与陈亮的知己之情与收复中原的壮志,以豪语写壮志,是辛弃疾的名篇。此词作于淳熙十五年(1188)冬,辛弃疾在铅山瓢泉会晤友人陈亮(字同甫),纵谈国事,陈亮走后,辛弃疾寄此词。此词写知己与壮志:老大那堪说——写年已老大、不堪说起;似而今、元龙臭味,孟公瓜葛——用陈登(元龙)、陈遵(孟公)之典,写与陈亮意气相投(臭味相投)、如陈登陈遵般交谊;我病君来高歌饮,惊散楼头飞雪——写我病中君来高歌痛饮,惊散楼头飞雪;笑富贵千钧如发——写笑富贵千钧重如发丝之轻;硬语盘空谁来听?记当时、只有西窗月——写硬语(豪言壮语)盘空谁来听,只记当时西窗明月;重进酒,换鸣瑟——写重进酒、换鸣瑟;事无两样人心别——写事无两样而人心有别;问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合——写问神州毕竟几番分合;汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨——写汗血马(名马)拉盐车无人顾惜,千里空收骏马之骨(用千金市骨之典),写人才被埋没;正目断关河路绝——写正目断关河、道路断绝;我最怜君中宵舞——用祖逖闻鸡起舞之典,写我最怜君中宵起舞;道男儿、到死心如铁——写道男儿到死心如铁;看试手,补天裂——写看试身手,补天之裂(收复山河)。全词以知己之情写爱国壮志,写尽收复中原的壮志,是理解辛弃疾爱国词与知己之交的重要篇章。 【名句点睛】 常考「我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁」写报国壮志;「看试手,补天裂」写收复山河的壮志;「汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨」写人才被埋没;「笑富贵千钧如发」写轻视富贵;以及全词以知己之情写爱国壮志、豪放悲壮的手法。

Background

Xin Qiji (1140–1207), courtesy name You'an, titled Jiaxuan, of Licheng in modern Jinan, came south as a boy after his native Shandong fell to the Jin, fought in the resistance, and later served in the court at Lin'an, where his plans for recovering the Central Plain were repeatedly set aside. The poem was written in the winter of 1188 at Pengshan, when Chen Liang (1143–1194), the thinker and patriot known as Tongfu, visited him and they argued about strategy; this is his reply in the same rhyme.

此词写与陈亮的知己之情与收复中原的壮志,以豪语写壮志,是辛弃疾的名篇。辛弃疾(1140—1207),字幼安,号稼轩,历城(今山东济南)人,南宋伟大的爱国词人,与苏轼并称「苏辛」,是宋词豪放派的代表。此词作于淳熙十五年(1188)冬,辛弃疾在铅山瓢泉会晤友人陈亮(字同甫,著名的爱国志士),二人纵谈国事,陈亮走后,辛弃疾寄此词。此词写知己与壮志:「老大那堪说」写年已老大、不堪说起;「似而今、元龙臭味,孟公瓜葛」用陈登(字元龙)、陈遵(字孟公)之典写与陈亮意气相投、交谊深厚;「我病君来高歌饮,惊散楼头飞雪」写我病中君来高歌痛饮,惊散楼头飞雪;「笑富贵千钧如发」写笑富贵千钧重如发丝之轻——轻视富贵;「硬语盘空谁来听?记当时、只有西窗月」写豪言壮语盘空,谁来听?只记当时西窗明月;「重进酒,换鸣瑟」写重进酒、换鸣瑟;「事无两样人心别」写事无两样而人心有别;「问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合」写问神州毕竟几番分合;「汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨」写汗血马(名马)拉盐车无人顾惜,千里空收骏马之骨(用千金市骨之典)——写人才被埋没;「正目断关河路绝」写正目断关河、道路断绝;「我最怜君中宵舞」用祖逖闻鸡起舞之典,写我最怜君中宵起舞;「道男儿、到死心如铁」写道男儿到死心如铁;「看试手,补天裂」写看试身手,补天之裂(收复山河)。全词以知己之情写爱国壮志,写尽收复中原的壮志,是理解辛弃疾爱国词与知己之交的重要篇章。

Art

The poem is built on two stacked comparisons and one hard image after another. First, the framing of the friendship in allusion: 'the breath of Yuan Long, the kin of Meng Gong' makes the poet and his guest into the pair of Han figures who were famous for hosting and for pouring liquor, so that the reader arrives at the scene already inside a story. Second, the political half is made entirely of allusion again, and compressed to the point of bluntness: 'blood-sweating horses hauling the salt cart draw no one's care' for wasted talent, 'a thousand li spent in vain on the bones of a steed' for a state that buys symbols instead of results. Third, the two most famous lines are both single words: 'iron' for the resolve that cannot be moved, and 'mend' for the task that cannot wait.

此词的艺术特色可从四个方面解析。其一,以用典写知己。起二句「似而今、元龙臭味,孟公瓜葛」以用典写知己——那元龙(陈登)、孟公(陈遵)的典故写尽与陈亮意气相投、交谊深厚,以用典写尽知己之情。其二,以场景写相聚。「我病君来高歌饮,惊散楼头飞雪」以场景写相聚——那「我病君来高歌饮」写尽病中高歌痛饮,「惊散楼头飞雪」写尽豪情惊散飞雪,以场景写尽知己相聚的豪情。其三,以议论写国事。「事无两样人心别。问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合?汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨」以议论写国事——那「神州毕竟,几番离合」写尽神州的分合,「汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨」写尽人才被埋没,以议论写尽国事的感慨。其四,以豪语写壮志。「我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁。看试手,补天裂」以豪语写壮志——那「中宵舞」用祖逖起舞之典写报国,「男儿、到死心如铁」写尽报国之心如铁,「看试手,补天裂」写尽补天裂(收复山河)的壮志,以豪语写尽爱国壮志。四重手法,使此词以知己之情写爱国壮志,写尽收复中原的壮志,是辛弃疾的代表作。

Allusions

Yuan Long is Chen Deng of the late Han, famous for his proud, unsentimental house and for refusing to acknowledge an unimportant visitor; Meng Gong is Chen Zun of the Western Han, who kept his guests all night by breaking the axle of their carriages. 'Hard words that circle in mid-air' reworks the famous line 'a hard phrase hanging in mid-air' from the classical prose style, and the 'western window' is the usual figure for lonely talk. The salt cart is the old image of a steed dragging a cart of salt up the mountain of a king's fault; the purchase of horse bones is the story of the king who paid a thousand pieces of gold for the bones of a steed from a foreign state to draw men out. The midnight dance is Zu Ti's practice of rising at cockcrow to train, and 'mending the great rift' is the story of Nüwa who repaired heaven.

此词的用语深植于爱国与知己的传统。「老大那堪说」令人想到「老大」写年老的意象——「老大徒伤悲」,也令人想到「那堪说」写不堪言说的意象;「元龙臭味」用陈登之典——陈登字元龙,三国名士,豪气凌云,也令人想到「元龙豪气」写豪气的典故,更令人想到「臭味相投」写意气相投;「孟公瓜葛」用陈遵之典——陈遵字孟公,西汉人,嗜酒好客,也令人想到「陈遵投辖」写留客的典故,更令人想到「瓜葛」写牵连交谊的意象;「我病君来高歌饮」令人想到「高歌」写高声歌唱的意象——「高歌猛进」,也令人想到「痛饮」写畅饮的意象;「惊散楼头飞雪」令人想到「惊散」写惊散的意象,也令人想到「楼头飞雪」写楼头飞雪的意象——以豪情惊散飞雪;「笑富贵千钧如发」令人想到「千钧」写极重的意象——「千钧一发」,也令人想到「如发」写如发之轻的意象——笑富贵千钧重如发轻;「硬语盘空」令人想到「硬语」写豪言壮语的意象——韩愈「横空盘硬语」,也令人想到「盘空」写盘旋空中的意象;「西窗月」令人想到「西窗」写西窗的意象——「何当共剪西窗烛」(李商隐),也令人想到「月」写明月的意象;「重进酒,换鸣瑟」令人想到「进酒」写劝酒的意象——「将进酒,杯莫停」,也令人想到「鸣瑟」写瑟的意象;「神州毕竟,几番离合」令人想到「神州」写中原大地的意象——「神州陆沉」,也令人想到「离合」写分合的意象;「汗血盐车无人顾」令人想到「汗血」写汗血宝马的意象——大宛汗血马,也令人想到「盐车」写拉盐车的意象——「骐骥服盐车」写良马拉盐车、人才被埋没,更令人想到「骥伏盐车」的典故;「千里空收骏骨」用千金市骨之典——《战国策》郭隗以千金买千里马骨之喻劝燕昭王求贤,令人想到「千金市骨」写求贤的典故,也令人想到「骏骨」写骏马之骨;「目断关河路绝」令人想到「目断」写望断的意象,也令人想到「关河」写关山河川的意象——「关河冷落」;「中宵舞」用祖逖闻鸡起舞之典——祖逖与刘琨闻鸡起舞、立志收复中原,令人想到「闻鸡起舞」写报国的典故,也令人想到「中宵起舞」写壮志;「心如铁」令人想到「心如铁石」写坚贞的意象——「男儿到死心如铁」正是辛弃疾的名句;「补天裂」令人想到「补天」写女娲补天的意象——「女娲炼石补天处」,也令人想到「补天裂」写收复山河、弥补分裂的意象——「看试手,补天裂」正是辛弃疾的名句。全词化用元龙、孟公、汗血盐车、千金市骨、闻鸡起舞、补天的典故与意象,以知己之情写爱国壮志,正是辛弃疾「豪放悲壮」而善用典、承爱国传统写壮志的本领。

Commentary

This is counted among the very greatest of Xin Qiji's songs, and it has been much discussed as a document of his friendship with Chen Liang, whose own reply was even more defiant. Qing critics praised its swell of feeling; modern readers have noted how unusual it is that the poet can describe his own powerlessness in the same voice that describes his friend's resolve. It is usually read with the earlier 'Hexin Lang' of the same exchange, which ends on a separate note, and with Yue Fei's 'Man Jiang Hong' as the other great Southern Song song of the same purpose.

此词历来被推为辛弃疾爱国词的名篇,也是南宋词的代表作。历代论者对此词评价极高:清人评此词「以知己之情写爱国壮志,豪放悲壮」;近人更指出「我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁」「看试手,补天裂」写报国壮志,是此词的名句。在词史上,此词的特殊价值在于:它以十七句的长调写尽与陈亮的知己之情与收复中原的壮志——那老大那堪说的感慨,那元龙臭味孟公瓜葛的知己,那病中高歌痛饮的相聚,那惊散楼头飞雪的豪情,那笑富贵千钧如发的轻视,那硬语盘空无人听的孤独,那只有西窗月的记忆,那重进酒换鸣瑟的豪饮,那事无两样人心别的感慨,那神州几番离合的追问,那汗血盐车无人顾的埋没,那千里空收骏骨的悲愤,那目断关河路绝的失望,那中宵舞的怜惜,那到死心如铁的坚贞,那补天裂的壮志,都写尽了辛弃疾与陈亮的知己之情与收复中原的壮志;那「看试手,补天裂」更写尽收复山河的凌云壮志。此词与辛弃疾《贺新郎·把酒长亭说》(与陈亮唱和的第一首)同为与陈亮唱和的名篇,一写离别,一写壮志;又与祖逖「闻鸡起舞」的报国传统一脉相承,可见中国爱国词写收复中原的传统。对于今日读者,此词是理解辛弃疾爱国词与知己之交的窗口,也是中国词写报国壮志的经典——那补天裂的豪情,穿越千年,仍在诉说着到死心如铁的壮志。

Prosody

Form Ci — the tune Hexin Lang (long register, two stanzas, 116 characters)词·贺新郎(长调)
Rhyme Entering-tone rhymes in the 屑 and 月 groups (shuo, ge, xue, fa, yue, se, bie, he, gu, jue, tie, lie), one rhyme held throughout — the harsh, closed sound of determination.贺新郎,押「说」「葛」「雪」「发」「月」「瑟」「别」「合」「骨」「绝」「铁」「裂」韵(入声九屑、六月),一韵到底,音节悲壮激越
Tone pattern A long tune of unequal lines; with entering-tone rhymes stopping every line, the poem sounds like a series of short, hard sentences — appropriate to a poem that argues.此词为贺新郎,双调一百十六字,押入声韵,一韵到底,音节悲壮激越,正合感慨的悲壮激越。
Reading note A hundred and sixteen characters, rhyming throughout on entering tones, which in Chinese give a clipped, blocked cadence: the rhyme never opens, so the verse presses. The absence of any rhyme-shift is also the argument — one rhyme, one unbroken complaint. Read the upper stanza as conversation, the political questions in the lower as challenges, and the last two lines as a decision.此词为贺新郎,双调,上阕「老大那堪说。似而今、元龙臭味,孟公瓜葛。我病君来高歌饮,惊散楼头飞雪。笑富贵千钧如发。硬语盘空谁来听?记当时、只有西窗月。重进酒,换鸣瑟」,下阕「事无两样人心别。问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合?汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨。正目断关河路绝。我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁。看试手,补天裂」,押入声韵(说、葛、雪、发、月、瑟、别、合、骨、绝、铁、裂),一韵到底,音节悲壮激越。全词以知己之情写爱国壮志:上阕写知己相聚(老大那堪说;似而今、元龙臭味,孟公瓜葛;我病君来高歌饮,惊散楼头飞雪;笑富贵千钧如发;硬语盘空谁来听?记当时、只有西窗月;重进酒,换鸣瑟),下阕写国事与壮志(事无两样人心别;问渠侬:神州毕竟,几番离合?汗血盐车无人顾,千里空收骏骨;正目断关河路绝;我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁;看试手,补天裂)。诵读此词,宜以激越的语调读「我病君来高歌饮」的相聚,以悲愤的语调读「汗血盐车无人顾」的埋没,结句「看试手,补天裂」要读得激昂而有力,方能传达出辛弃疾的悲壮激越。辛弃疾词以「豪放悲壮」著称,此词正是其唱和爱国长调的典范。

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我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁

Of all men I best pity you, dancing at midnight, saying that a true man's heart is iron to his dying day.

我最怜惜你中宵起舞,说道男儿到死心如铁。

I most admire your midnight sword-dance; you said a man's heart is iron to the death.

此联是全词写壮志的核心,以中宵舞写报国,以心如铁写坚贞,是千古名句。「我最怜君中宵舞」写我最怜惜你中宵起舞——那「我最怜君」写我最怜惜你,「中宵舞」用祖逖闻鸡起舞之典写中宵起舞,写尽对陈亮报国之志的怜惜与激赏;「道男儿、到死心如铁」写道男儿到死心如铁——那「道男儿」写陈亮所说的男儿,「到死心如铁」写至死心坚如铁,写尽报国之心如铁。这句的深意在于:它以「我最怜君中宵舞」的怜惜与「道男儿、到死心如铁」的坚贞,写尽知己的报国壮志——我最怜惜你中宵起舞,那「中宵舞」用祖逖闻鸡起舞之典写尽陈亮中宵起舞的报国——中宵起舞,正是立志收复中原的写照,那「我最怜君中宵舞」写尽对知己报国之志的怜惜与激赏;道男儿到死心如铁,那「道男儿、到死心如铁」写尽陈亮所道的男儿心志——男儿到死,心如铁石,那「心如铁」写尽报国之心的坚贞;那「中宵舞」写尽报国的行动,那「心如铁」写尽报国的坚贞,一写行动,一写坚贞,写尽知己的报国壮志——这既是写陈亮,也是辛弃疾的自况:男儿到死心如铁,正是二人共同的报国之志;此联以知己之情写尽报国壮志,下启「看试手,补天裂」,是辛弃疾爱国词的核心。若换作直说「你我都有报国之心」,则失其用典;唯以「中宵舞」用典写报国、「心如铁」写坚贞,写尽知己的报国壮志,也让此联成为全词写壮志的核心与千古名句。

The midnight dance. I most admire your midnight sword-dance; you said a man's heart is iron to the death. The Zu Ti rooster-crow allusion and the iron heart are Chen Liang's and Xin Qiji's shared vow. To have praised the friend's resolve would be a praise; the most-admired-midnight-dance against the man's-heart-iron-to-the-death is the praise.

看试手,补天裂

See but that we try our hand — and mend the great rift in the sky.

看我们一试身手,补天之裂。

Watch us try our hands to mend the crack in the sky.

此三句是全词的收束,以补天裂写收复山河的壮志,是千古名句。「看试手」写看我们一试身手——那「看试手」写看一试身手,写尽试手大展的豪情;「补天裂」写补天之裂——那「补天」用女娲补天之典,「补天裂」写弥补天的裂痕(喻收复山河、弥补山河分裂),写尽收复中原的壮志。这句的深意在于:它以「看试手」的豪情与「补天裂」的典故,写尽收复山河的凌云壮志——看我们一试身手,那「看试手」写尽一试身手、大展宏图的豪情——试手正是报国的开始;补天之裂,那「补天裂」用女娲补天之典写尽收复山河的壮志——天裂尚可补,山河分裂亦可弥补,那「补天裂」以补天喻收复中原、弥补山河分裂的凌云壮志;那「看试手」写尽试手的豪情,那「补天裂」写尽补天的壮志,一写豪情,一写壮志,写尽辛弃疾与陈亮收复山河的凌云壮志——男儿到死心如铁,正为看试手、补天裂,正是全词豪情壮志的收束;此三句以补天裂收束,写尽收复山河的凌云壮志,也让此三句成为全词收束的千古名句。若换作直说「我们要收复中原」,则失其豪情;唯以「看试手」写豪情、「补天裂」的典故写壮志,写尽收复山河的凌云壮志,也让此三句成为全词的收束与千古名句。

The mending. Watch us try our hands to mend the crack in the sky. The Nüwa allusion (mending the broken sky) is the recovery of the lost north. To have said they would recover the central plains would be a vow; the watch-us-try-our-hands against the mending-the-crack-in-the-sky is the vow.

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Word focus

怜 The 'lian' of 'wo zui lian jun zhong xiao wu' — 'to pity, to prize'. It is deliberately the humblest of affectionate verbs, and it lets the poet honour his friend without claiming any superiority in the shared resolve. 「我最怜君中宵舞」之「怜」字是写知己的关键字,一个「怜」字写尽对知己报国之志的怜惜与激赏。怜者,怜惜、爱惜也。辛弃疾以「我最怜君」写中宵舞,这个「怜」字至少有双重意味:其一,写怜惜之深——那「我最怜君中宵舞」写我最怜惜你中宵起舞,那「怜」字写尽对陈亮中宵起舞的怜惜——怜其报国之志的执着;其二,写知己之情——那「怜」字更是写知己——最怜君中宵舞,正见知己相惜之情,那「怜」字写尽与陈亮的知己之情。以「怜」字写知己,正是辛弃疾写壮志的枢纽——若换作「爱」「慕」等字,则或失其怜惜的深情,或失其与「中宵舞」的配合;唯「怜」字,以一字写尽对知己中宵起舞的怜惜与激赏、知己相惜之情,与「道男儿、到死心如铁」的坚贞相合,写尽知己的报国壮志,也让「我最怜君中宵舞」成为全词写知己壮志的名句。
铁 The 'tie' of 'dao nan er dao si xin ru tie' — 'iron'. It is the hardest common noun in the language, and by making the heart of iron the poet says the resolve is not a matter of feeling but of composition — neither heat nor weather can change it. 「道男儿、到死心如铁」之「铁」字是写坚贞的关键字,一个「铁」字写尽报国之心如铁的坚贞。铁者,铁石、坚铁也。辛弃疾以「心如铁」写男儿,这个「铁」字至少有双重意味:其一,写坚贞之坚——那「男儿、到死心如铁」写男儿到死心如铁,那「铁」字写尽报国之心的坚贞——如铁石般不可动摇;其二,写壮志之烈——那「铁」字更是写壮志——到死心如铁,正见报国壮志之烈,那「铁」字写尽至死不渝的报国壮志。以「铁」字写坚贞,正是辛弃疾写壮志的枢纽——若换作「坚」「刚」等字,则或失其写心志的铁石之坚,或失其与「到死」的配合;唯「铁」字,以一字写尽男儿到死心如铁的坚贞与报国壮志之烈,与「我最怜君中宵舞」的怜惜相合,写尽知己的报国壮志,也让「道男儿、到死心如铁」成为全词写壮志的名句。

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贺新郎·把酒长亭说 Hexin Lang: At the Long Pavilion, with Liquor 辛弃疾 · 同辛弃疾贺新郎寄陈亮,一离别一壮志 The two poems of the same exchange with Chen Liang — the first farewell, this one the answer.

The earlier song opens 'at the long pavilion, drinking, I say...', and turns to the ruined rivers as a criticism of the whole landscape; this one answers it and turns to the friendship and to the Central Plain. Read in order, the two form a correspondence: the first describes parting and the waste of a generation, the second the man who is still willing to mend the sky. Together they are the fullest record of that meeting.

辛弃疾《贺新郎·把酒长亭说》「把酒长亭说。看渊明、风流酷似,卧龙诸葛」「剩水残山无态度」写与陈亮的离别与感慨,是辛弃疾与陈亮唱和的第一首。此词《贺新郎·同父见和再用韵答之》则「我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁。看试手,补天裂」写知己的报国壮志。同为辛弃疾贺新郎寄陈亮,一写「把酒长亭说」的离别(把酒长亭说),一写「看试手,补天裂」的壮志(同父见和);一以「剩水残山无态度」写国事,一以「汗血盐车无人顾」写埋没。两词对读,可见辛弃疾陈亮唱和词的完整脉络。

满江红·写怀 Man Jiang Hong: Written with Feeling 岳飞 · 同写爱国壮志,一靖康耻一补天裂 Two great Southern Song songs of the same purpose — one in anger at the court, one in friendship.

Yue Fei's song opens with 'my hair stands on end before the railing, in the clearing rain', and its famous stanza is about the shame of Lijiang still unavenged. Xin Qiji reaches the same conclusion by a very different road: he speaks of friends, dice and wine before he speaks of the state. The comparison is instructive — the same purpose arrived at from a general's fury and from a poet's grief.

岳飞《满江红·写怀》「怒发冲冠,凭栏处、潇潇雨歇」「靖康耻,犹未雪;臣子恨,何时灭」写收复中原的壮志,是爱国词的名篇。此词《贺新郎·同父见和再用韵答之》则「我最怜君中宵舞,道男儿、到死心如铁。看试手,补天裂」写报国的壮志。同为写爱国壮志,一写「驾长车,踏破贺兰山缺」的壮志(满江红),一写「看试手,补天裂」的壮志(贺新郎);一以「靖康耻,犹未雪」写国耻,一以「汗血盐车无人顾」写埋没。两词对读,可见南宋爱国词写收复中原的共同的壮志与不同的感慨。