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行行重行行

Xing Xing Chong Xing Xing: Walking Again and Again

古诗十九首

The Anonymous Makers of the Nineteen Old Poems

山无情。
水无情。
杨柳飞花春雨晴。
征衫长短亭。
拟行行。
重行行。
吟到江南第几程。
江南山渐青。

The hills have no feeling.
The waters have no feeling.
Willow down flies, and after the spring rain the sky is bright.
A traveller's coat, at the long and short pavilions.
Intent: to go, to go on going.
Chanting on — how many stages of Jiangnan have I counted?
By Jiangnan the hills turn green, and turn greener.
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Meaning

A short lyric in the manner of the later Han folk song, in which a traveller watches himself travel. Nothing happens: hills and waters are indifferent, willow seed drifts in the clear weather after rain, and the road is lined with the long and short pavilions where people part. What can be counted is only distance — how many stages of Jiangnan the chanting has reached — and even that count turns to an increase, for the hills of Jiangnan are only gradually green. The poem is a record of a departure that continues after the words about it have stopped.

山无情。水无情。杨柳飞花春雨晴。征衫长短亭。拟行行。重行行。吟到江南第几程。江南山渐青。

Appreciation

[Structure] Eight short lines in irregular rhythm; the first four are a scene, the last four are a computation, and the two halves meet in the word 征衫. [Imagery] 杨柳飞花 is the parting tree of the Chinese road, and 长短亭 the posts where farewell was formalised; both are already conventions, and the poem's cleverness is to reduce them to three syllables each. [Voice] The speaker keeps repriming himself — 山无情。水无情。 is a complaint that the world ignores him, and 拟行行。重行行。 is the same complaint turned into a decision. [The close] 江南山渐青 refuses to end on a summation; the last image is a slow colour that keeps advancing, as the journey does. The poem's chief beauty is that it never says the traveller is sad — nothing does that for him, since 山 and 水 are, by definition,无情.

【白话串讲】 古诗十九首《行行重行行》:“行行重行行,与君生别离”——“相去万余里,各在天一涯”——“道路阻且长,会面安可知”——“思君令人老,岁月忽已晚”——“弃捐勿复道,努力加餐饭”——他写离别——与君生别离。 【意象与手法】 “行行重行行,与君生别离”以叠句起兴写离别;“相去万余里,各在天一涯”以空间写阻隔;“道路阻且长,会面安可知”写会面无期;“思君令人老,岁月忽已晚”以岁月写相思之深;结以“弃捐勿复道,努力加餐饭”以劝勉收束。语言质朴、情真意切。 【情感与主旨】 思妇怀念远行游子的诗,写离别之久、相思之苦与自我宽慰,是《古诗十九首》中离别相思题材的开篇之作,情感真挚而节制。 【名句点睛】 常考“行行重行行,与君生别离”以叠句写离别;“弃捐勿复道,努力加餐饭”以加餐饭写自我宽慰。

Background

The title line 行行重行行 opens the first and among the most celebrated of the Nineteen Old Poems, the long farewell of a wife from her husband a matter of a thousand li away. This short version takes that opening and the repeated 行行 rhythm but keeps only the traveller's side of the parting. The 长短亭 of the third line are the long and short post-houses of the Han and post-Han roads, five and ten li apart, from which the custom of farewell at a pavilion descended; 江南 as a destination of travel poetry likewise belongs to the later Han, when the lower Yangzi began to appear in verse as a place one could be sent to.

此篇为一首写羁旅写景的小令,题作《行行重行行》,author 记古诗十九首,kind 记诗。全词写羁旅:上片「山无情。水无情。杨柳飞花春雨晴。征衫长短亭」写山无情水无情,杨柳飞花春雨晴,征衫长短亭;下片「拟行行。重行行。吟到江南第几程。江南山渐青」写拟行行重行行,吟到江南第几程,江南山渐青。全词以羁旅写景、江南山渐青写其羁旅之情,含蓄深婉,是词中的名篇。此篇《行行重行行》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《行行重行行》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《行行重行行》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。

Art

The poem works by subtraction. Each line is stripped to the point where it carries only one fact: a name, a verb, a condition. 山无情 and 水无情 are the same sentence twice with one noun changed, and the repetition is doing the work that an adjective of sorrow would otherwise do — the traveller's grief projects itself onto hill and stream, and then the hill and stream stubbornly refuse to respond. The middle of the poem is a catalogue that accumulates the apparatus of departure — willow, rain, weather, coat, pavilion — and then the accumulation stops. The closed form of the ending, 江南山渐青, is balanced against the reiterated open rhythm of 行行, so the poem ends where it began but with a colour in the place of the traveller's mood.

此词艺术上以「含蓄深婉、以景写情」见长。全词共八句,由山无情、征衫长短亭而拟行行、江南山渐青。起「山无情。水无情。杨柳飞花春雨晴。征衫长短亭」写山无情:山无情,水无情,杨柳飞花春雨晴,征衫长短亭;「拟行行。重行行。吟到江南第几程。江南山渐青」写拟行行:拟行行,重行行,吟到江南第几程,江南山渐青。全词以景写情,由山无情而征衫长短亭而江南山渐青,含蓄深婉,是词中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。

Allusions

Two inherited motifs are compressed here. 征衫长短亭 takes up the 长短亭 of the farewell roads: the long pavilion at ten li, the short one at five, where 折柳 and parting were performed, and the travel coat is the 征衫 of the frontier and frontier-farewell verse. The title's own 行行重行 行 is the opening of the Nineteen Old Poems' 行行重行行, 与君生别离 — the departure repeated until it becomes the whole of the poem. And 江南山渐青 accepts the convention by which the south was symbolised by green hills seen from a boat, as opposed to the northern symbol of dust and frontier stone.

词中「山无情」「水无情」「杨柳飞花春雨晴」「征衫长短亭」「拟行行重行行」「吟到江南第几程」「江南山渐青」等语,皆含典故故实。「山无情」写山无情;「水无情」写水无情;「杨柳飞花春雨晴」写杨柳飞花春雨晴;「征衫长短亭」写征衫长短亭(长短亭写送别之所,古有十里长亭五里短亭);「拟行行重行行」写拟行行重行行(行行重行行用古诗行行重行行之意);「吟到江南第几程」写吟到江南第几程;「江南山渐青」写江南山渐青。词人以行行重行行、长短亭等语入词,不着痕迹,而把羁旅写景之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。

Commentary

The piece has been read as a song of a travelling official, a soldier's complaint, or simply a serenade written in the folk manner; the safest note is the one the poem itself supplies, for it declines to name a speaker. Its reputation rests on the exactness of its economy — eight lines, no connotations beyond the two conventional ones, and an ending whose only movement is gradual greenness. Later readers of the anthology have preferred the fuller 行行重行行, with its 弃捐勿复道,努力加餐饭, but this compressed version is often thought the more modern in feeling and the more difficult to exhaust.

这首《行行重行行》,是写景羁旅之作,写山无情、征衫长短亭、江南山渐青之情,含蓄深婉。起「山无情。水无情。杨柳飞花春雨晴。征衫长短亭」——山无情,水无情,杨柳飞花春雨晴,征衫长短亭(用长短亭之意)。写山无情:山无情水无情、杨柳飞花春雨晴,征衫长短亭——山无情水无情、杨柳飞花、春雨晴、征衫长短亭;「拟行行。重行行。吟到江南第几程。江南山渐青」——拟行行,重行行(用行行重行行之意),吟到江南第几程,江南山渐青。写拟行行:拟行行重行行、吟到江南第几程,江南山渐青——拟行行重行行、吟到江南第几程、江南山渐青。这「吟到江南第几程。江南山渐青」,是全词之结:以江南山渐青写其羁旅。全词含蓄深婉,以景写情,正是词中的名篇。综观全诗,情真、景切、理深,三者浑融无迹,故能于短短数语之中寄无限深意,令人百读不厌。其含蓄蕴藉之处,正是中国古典诗歌以少总多、言有尽而意无穷的美学精神的生动体现。

Prosody

Form Short lyric in the folk-song manner, in the form of a 小令 (a brief song of irregular line length)词(小令)
Rhyme Rhyme falls in the 庚青 group and is closely chained: 情 (hill and water, the first stanza), 晴 (bright sky), 亭 (pavilion), 行 (to go), 程 (stage or measure), 青 (green). The rhyme therefore traces the journey, from feeling to weather to road to count to colour.此篇为小令,句式长短错落。押平声韵:「情」「晴」「亭」「行」「程」「青」押庚青部韵。词体依词谱而定,小令短小,音节随情起伏,正与写景羁旅的含蓄深婉相称,也见其以小令写羁旅的自然。
Tone pattern The line lengths vary from three to seven syllables, so the rhythm is that of speech rather than of the regulated five-character verse; the short 三-character lines 山无情。 water无情。 and 拟行行。 strike like knocks, while the longer lines let the description unfold.句式上,「山无情。水无情。杨柳飞花春雨晴。征衫长短亭」写出水无情,音节明快;「拟行行。重行行。吟到江南第几程。江南山渐青」写拟行行,音节低回。全词音节随情起伏,由明快而低回,正合小令「含蓄」之妙,读来如写景羁旅、江南山渐青之音,含蓄而动人。
Reading note Because the piece is short and the rhyme is tight, the effect is of a stanza that closes on itself at every turn and yet keeps going. The pausing marks in the Chinese (。) do not alter the metre but do mark the breath, and the reader should treat 征衫长短亭 as a pivot: before it the verse groups of two short lines against one long, after it a single long line against the short close. The repeated 行行 is the one deliberate musical device, and it is untranslatable in sound — in English it can only be imitated, as the repeated word '行' attempts to do here.此篇为小令,是写景羁旅之作,也是词中的名篇。全词的艺术特色在于「含蓄深婉、以景写情」:「山无情。水无情。杨柳飞花春雨晴。征衫长短亭」写出水无情、「拟行行。重行行。吟到江南第几程。江南山渐青」写拟行行。全词含蓄深婉,以景写情。尤为精妙者,是「征衫长短亭」用长短亭送别之意;而「拟行行。重行行」化用古诗行行重行行之意,「江南山渐青」以景写旅,正是含蓄深婉的典范,为历代词选所常收。《行行重行行》一诗之所以读来声情并茂,正在于诗人以声韵配合情思、以节奏烘托意境,音节之长短、平仄之起伏,皆与诗意相为表里,此亦可见中国古典诗歌声律之美与匠心之工。

Line by line

山无情。

The hills have no feeling — the first of the two mentions that establish the world's indifference, and the line on which the whole poem's loneliness is quietly built.

山无情。

The mountains are heartless.

首句写山无情,起笔即见其景。「山无情」写山无情,「山」写出、「无情」写无情。一句以「山」写出、「无情」写无有情意,写尽山无情之情——山是无情的。以物起兴,含蓄而明快,是「以物起兴」的妙笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

The mountains. The mountains are heartless. The three-word line sets the cold scene: the landscape does not care. To have said the mountains were indifferent would be a statement; the three-word mountains-are-heartless is the statement.

杨柳飞花春雨晴。

Willow down is flying, and the sky is clear after the spring rain: the conventional parting tree, the spring weather and the brightening sky, gathered into one seven-syllable line in which nothing comforts and nothing harms.

杨柳飞花春雨晴。

Willow catkins fly in the clear spring rain.

此句写杨柳飞花春雨晴,是全词写景的关键。「杨柳飞花春雨晴」写杨柳飞花春雨晴,「杨柳飞花」写杨柳飞花、「春雨晴」写春雨初晴。一句以「杨柳飞花」写柳花飞舞、「春雨晴」写春雨初晴,写尽杨柳飞花春雨晴之情——杨柳飞花、春雨初晴。以景写景,含蓄而清丽,是「以景写景」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

The willows. Willow catkins fly in the clear spring rain. The flying catkins in the cleared rain are the traveler's spring. To have described willow catkins in spring rain would be scenery; the flying willow catkins in the clear spring rain are the scenery.

征衫长短亭。

A traveller's coat, at the long and short pavilions: the road, the stations of parting, and the traveller's own garment, which is the only human thing in the poem.

征衫长短亭。

Traveler's robe at the long and short parting pavilions.

此句写征衫长短亭,是全词写羁旅的关键。「征衫长短亭」写征衫长短亭,「征衫」写征旅之衫、「长短亭」写长亭短亭(送别之所)。一句以「征衫」写征衫、「长短亭」写长短亭,写尽征衫长短亭之情——征衫行于长短亭。以亭写旅,含蓄而深婉,是「以亭写旅」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

The traveler. Traveler's robe at the long and short parting pavilions. The robe at the pavilions (the traditional parting places) is the traveler's station. To have said he paused at a parting pavilion would be a stop; the traveler's robe at the long-and-short pavilions is the stop.

拟行行。

Intent: to set out, to set out and go on setting out — a decision rendered as an onomatopoeia of footsteps, and an echo of the title of the anthology's first poem.

拟行行。

I am about to walk on.

此句写拟行行,是全词写将行之态的关键。「拟行行」写拟行行,「拟」写打算、「行行」写行而又行。一句以「拟」写打算、「行行」写行行,写尽拟行行之情——正打算行而又行。以行写旅,含蓄而深婉,是「以行写旅」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

The decision. I am about to walk on. The three-word line states the renewed departure. To have said he prepared to leave would be a move; the about-to-walk-on is the move.

江南山渐青。

By Jiangnan the hills turn green, and keep turning green: the poem's close, a slow colour that carries the journey forward and declines to sum it up.

江南山渐青。

The hills of Jiangnan are turning green.

尾句写江南山渐青,是全词立意的落点。「江南山渐青」写江南山渐青,「江南」写江南、「山渐青」写山渐渐青。一句以「江南」写江南、「山渐青」写山渐青翠,写尽江南山渐青之情——江南之山渐青。以景写旅,含蓄而深婉,是全词最动人处,也是「以景写旅」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

The south. The hills of Jiangnan are turning green. The greening hills of the south are the journey's destination. To have described the southern hills would be scenery; the Jiangnan hills gradually turning green are the scenery.

Study

Word focus

无情 Without feeling, indifferent. Applied to hill and stream, the word is the poem's whole complaint restated as a fact about the world; the traveller's grief, in other words, is only real because nothing outside him answers it. 「无情」写山无情,是写出水无情的关键。「山无情」着一「无情」,写无情——着一「无情」,写山无情,见其山之漠。两字写尽无情之态,是「以词写景」的妙笔。「无情」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
征衫 The coat of a traveller or soldier, short for 征衣. In 征衫长短亭 it is the one piece of human clothing in an otherwise impersonal landscape, and it is what makes the distance seem walked. 「征衫」写征衫长短亭,是写征旅衣衫的关键。「征衫长短亭」着一「征衫」,写征衫——着一「征衫」,写征衫长短亭,见其旅之征。两字写尽征衫之慨,是「以词写旅」的点睛之词。「征衫」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
长短亭 The long pavilion at ten li and the short one at five, where farewells were exchanged; by extension any post-house on the road. The word gathers the whole custom of parting into three syllables, and so turns a journey into a ritual of goodbyes. 「长短亭」写征衫长短亭,是写送别之亭的关键。「征衫长短亭」着一「长短亭」,写长亭短亭——着一「长短亭」,写征衫长短亭,见其别之亭。三字写尽长短亭之景,是「以词写别」的点睛之词。「长短亭」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
渐 Gradually, by degrees. Because 江南山渐青 is the last line, the adverb gives the close its forward movement: the hills do not simply become green, they are still becoming green, and so the poem stops in the middle of its own process. 「渐」字写江南山渐青,是写出渐青之态的关键。「江南山渐青」着一「渐」,写渐渐——着一「渐」字,写山渐青,见其山之渐。一字写尽渐青之态,是「以一字写变」的点睛之词。「渐」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。

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