唐 Tang · 诗 Poem
宫槐陌
The Path of Pagoda Trees
仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔。
应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来。
Deep in shade, green moss runs thick.
The gatekeeper does nothing but sweep and wait,
Lest a mountain monk should come.
Meaning
This quatrain, one of the twenty Wangchuan poems, paints a small path in the Wangchuan estate lined with pagoda trees (gonghuai), dark and damp with green moss. The only sign of human activity is the gatekeeper sweeping, while the poet jests that he does it out of dread that a mountain monk may arrive. In four spare characters-laden lines the poem fuses reclusive landscape with an undertone of quiet, unhurried expectancy.
仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔。 应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] Wang Wei writes of the palace pagoda-tree path: the narrow way is shaded by the trees, deep in its gloom the moss is green; the gatekeeper only sweeps to receive, and fears a mountain monk's coming. <br>[Structure] The first couplet belongs to the scene, the second to the human response; the eye moves from the shaded path outward to the door, and the poem closes on a light, half-playful note. <br>[Imagery] The four images — narrow path, tall trees, deep shade, green moss — are all cool, saturated greens and greys, and they accumulate into a single effect of stillness. The porter's broom and the imagined monk are the only moving parts, and even they are stilled into metaphor. <br>[Tone] What is said is almost nothing, and that is the point: Wang Wei trusts silence and shade rather than statement. The poem shows how a landscape poem can be built from the absence of events.
【白话串讲】 王维写《宫槐陌》:“仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔”——“应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来”——他写宫槐下的小径。 【意象与手法】 此诗写山水,以闲适写山水,是王维的名篇。前二句写槐径:「仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔」写仄径荫宫槐、幽阴多绿苔——写尽槐径的幽阴;后二句写迎客:「应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来」写应门但迎扫、畏有山僧来——写尽迎客的闲趣。全诗以闲适写山水,写尽槐径的幽阴与迎客的闲趣,是王维的代表作。 【情感与主旨】 此诗写山水,以闲适写山水,是王维的名篇。此诗为《辋川集》二十首之一,写辋川别业中的宫槐陌。宫槐陌为辋川别业中一条两旁植宫槐(槐树)的小径,仄径(狭窄小径)荫于宫槐之下,幽阴多生绿苔;应门(守门者)但须迎扫,畏有山僧来。此诗以槐径写山水:仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔——写仄径荫宫槐、幽阴多绿苔,写尽槐径的幽阴;应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来——写应门但迎扫、畏有山僧来,写尽迎客的闲趣。全诗以闲适写山水——那「幽阴多绿苔」写尽槐径的幽阴,「畏有山僧来」写尽迎客的闲趣,写尽槐径的幽阴与迎客的闲趣,是理解王维山水诗的重要篇章。 【名句点睛】 常考「仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔」写槐径的幽阴;「应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来」写迎客的闲趣;以及全诗以闲适写山水、以平实写禅趣的手法。
Background
Wang Wei (c. 701–761), courtesy name Moji, was a Tang poet, painter and musician, later a devout Buddhist. He ranks with Meng Haoran as the leading landscape-poet of the era, and Su Shi said of him that he had 'painting in his poetry and poetry in his painting'. This poem is one of the twenty pieces of the Wangchuan ji, a cycle written about his estate at Wangchuan in Lantian, where he retired in later life and kept up a polite exchange of poetry with the poet Pei Di. The Palace Pagoda Tree Path is the lane between the trees; the 'gatekeeper' is the estate's own porter. Wang Wei's Buddhism and the company of mountain monks gave the late poet many of his themes, and the fear of a monk's visit here is half earnest, half playful.
此诗写山水,以闲适写山水,是王维的名篇。王维(701—761),字摩诘,号摩诘居士,河东蒲州(今山西运城)人,唐代诗人、画家,与孟浩然并称「王孟」,被苏轼誉为「诗中有画,画中有诗」。此诗为《辋川集》二十首之一,写辋川别业中的宫槐陌。辋川别业在陕西蓝田,王维晚年隐居于此,与裴迪唱和,成《辋川集》二十首。宫槐陌为辋川别业中一条两旁植宫槐(槐树)的小径,仄径(狭窄小径)荫于宫槐之下,幽阴多生绿苔;应门(守门者)但须迎扫,畏有山僧来。此诗以槐径写山水:「仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔」写仄径荫宫槐、幽阴多绿苔——写尽槐径的幽阴(仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔);「应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来」写应门但迎扫、畏有山僧来——写尽迎客的闲趣(应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来)。全诗以闲适写山水,写尽槐径的幽阴与迎客的闲趣,是理解王维山水诗的重要篇章。辋川集二十首皆五言绝句,分咏辋川别业诸景,此诗咏宫槐陌。宫槐陌为辋川别业中一条两旁植宫槐的小径,仄径狭窄幽深,槐荫浓密,绿苔斑驳;应门者(守门僮仆)但须迎扫,恐有山僧来访。王维晚年奉佛,喜与山僧往还,此诗「畏有山僧来」正见其待僧之诚。
Art
The poem's craft lies in what it declines to say. First, plain description: 'A narrow path is shadowed by pagoda trees' states the scene flatly, trusting the noun-phrase arrangement to carry the picture. Second, colour: 'deep shade' and 'green moss' supply two hues and nothing else, and the green is qualified by 'deep' — enough to suggest damp, cool stone. Third, the plainness of the porter: 'the gatekeeper does nothing but sweep' replaces any description of hospitality with a single chore, and the adverb 'only' keeps the action minimal. Fourth, absence rendered as presence: 'afraid a mountain monk will come' invents a future visitor in order to make the present moment vivid. Note also the structural hinge — lines one and two describe the path's gloom, lines three and four the expectation at its mouth, so that the poem turns from place to welcome without a single connective word. The effect it aims at is ordinary life transfigured by inattention to it.
此诗的艺术特色可从四个方面解析。其一,以白描写槐径。「仄径荫宫槐」以白描写槐径——那「仄径荫宫槐」写尽仄径的荫槐,以白描写尽槐径的幽阴。其二,以色彩写绿苔。「幽阴多绿苔」以色彩写绿苔——那「幽阴」「绿苔」写尽幽阴的绿苔,以色彩写尽槐径的幽阴。其三,以平实写迎扫。「应门但迎扫」以平实写迎扫——那「但迎扫」写尽迎扫的平实,以平实写尽迎客的闲趣。其四,以虚写写禅趣。「畏有山僧来」以虚写写禅趣——那「畏有」写尽山僧的将来,以虚写写尽迎客的闲趣。此外,此诗前二句写槐径的幽阴,后二句写迎客的闲趣,由景及趣,正是山水诗「以幽写趣」的写法。四重手法,使此诗以闲适写山水,写尽槐径的幽阴与迎客的闲趣,是王维的代表作。此诗还善于以「应门但迎扫」的「但」字写迎扫之简——那「但迎扫」写尽迎扫的随简,正是以「但」写简,以「但」字写尽迎客的闲趣。又善以「畏有山僧来」的「畏有」写将来之不定——畏有山僧来,正见山僧或来的闲趣,以「畏有」写尽迎客的闲趣。
Allusions
The vocabulary belongs to the long tradition of reclusive verse. The pagoda tree (gonghuai) is the locust-pagoda tree, planted in rows before palaces and offices in the capitals, so that the path carries a half-bureaucratic, half-forest flavour. The narrow path (zè jìng) echoes the classics of mountain walking; the deep shade and green moss recall the mossy courtyard of the_Qingtang tradition, where moss is the token of a house nobody disturbs. The gatekeeper (yingmen, 'Answering the gate') is a term from the Classics for the porter who answers the door, and implies a household of some ceremony. The mountain monk (shanseng) carries the whole Tang association of hermit-Buddhists with eccentric and holy men. Little is quoted outright, and that is typical of Wang Wei: the allusions are submerged in plain speech and surface only as a change of register.
此诗的用语深植于山水与闲适传统。「宫槐」令人想到「宫槐」写槐树的意象——槐树,也令人想到「宫槐柏梁」的意象;「仄径」令人想到「仄径」写小径的意象——也令人想到「曲径通幽」的意象;「幽阴」令人想到「幽阴」写幽暗的意象——也令人想到「荫翳」的意象;「绿苔」令人想到「绿苔」写青苔的意象——也令人想到「苔痕上阶绿」(刘禹锡)的意象;「应门」令人想到「应门」写守门者的意象——也令人想到「僮仆应门」的意象;「山僧」令人想到「山僧」写出中僧人的意象——也令人想到「山僧对棋坐」(白居易)的意象。全诗化用宫槐、仄径、幽阴、绿苔、应门、山僧的意象,以闲适写山水,正是王维「诗中有画」而善写幽、承山水传统写禅趣之本领。「宫槐」令人想到「宫槐」写槐树的意象——槐树植于宫阙而名宫槐,也令人想到「槐安国」的意象;「仄径」令人想到「仄径」写小径的意象——也令人想到「羊肠小径」的意象,以仄径写径之窄。「幽阴」令人想到「幽阴」写幽暗的意象——也令人想到「绿树阴浓夏日长」(高骈)的意象,以幽阴写槐荫之深。
Commentary
This poem has long been counted among Wang Wei's finest landscape quatrains and among the highpoints of the Wangchuan cycle. Qing commentators praise it as 'leisurely landscape, calm and natural'; modern readers single out the second couplet, 'the gatekeeper does nothing but sweep, and fears a mountain monk will come', as the poem's celebrated line, because it converts a domestic chore into a metaphor for welcome. Its special place in literary history is the way four lines manage to hold gloom and courtesy at once, so that the estate reads both abandoned and hospitable. It pairs naturally with Wang Wei's 'Bamboo Lodge' from the same collection — one a silent sitting in the deep forest, this one a swept path awaiting a guest — and with the whole line of hermit poetry running back to Tao Qian's 'Return to the Field'. The quiet of the place, and the vanity of waiting for it to be broken, still speak to readers today.
此诗历来被推为王维山水诗的名篇,也是《辋川集》的代表。历代论者对此诗评价极高:清人评此诗「以闲适写山水,幽静自然」;近人更指出「应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来」写迎客的闲趣,是此诗的名句。在诗歌史上,此诗的特殊价值在于:它以四句的五绝写尽槐径的幽阴与迎客的闲趣——那仄径,那荫宫槐,那幽阴,那多绿苔,那应门,那但迎扫,那畏有,那山僧来,都写尽了王维笔下的宫槐陌;那「畏有山僧来」更以虚写写尽迎客的闲趣。此诗与王维《竹里馆》(「独坐幽篁里」)同为辋川集名篇,一写「深林人不知」的竹里(竹里馆),一写「应门但迎扫」的宫槐(宫槐陌);又与陶渊明《归园田居》「户庭无尘杂」的闲居传统一脉相承,可见中国诗写隐逸的传统。对于今日读者,此诗是理解王维山水诗的窗口,也是《辋川集》的经典——那扫径迎僧的闲趣,穿越千年,仍在诉说着隐逸的闲适。此诗与王维《辛夷坞》《栾家濑》等同为辋川集名篇,一写「木末芙蓉花」的辛夷(辛夷坞),一写「应门但迎扫」的宫槐(宫槐陌);又与裴迪《辋川集》同题唱和,可见辋川唱和之风。
Prosody
Line by line
应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来
The gatekeeper does nothing but sweep and wait, / Lest a mountain monk should come.
应门但迎扫,畏有山僧来。
The gatekeeper is told only to sweep the path; we fear some mountain monk may be coming.
此二句是全诗写闲趣的核心,以应门但迎扫写迎扫,以畏有山僧来写出僧来,写尽迎客的闲趣,是千古名句。「应门但迎扫」写应门但迎扫——那「应门但」写应门但,「迎扫」写迎扫,写尽应门的扫径;「畏有山僧来」写畏有山僧来——那「畏有」写畏有,「山僧来」写出僧来,写尽山僧的将来。这句的深意在于:它以「应门但迎扫」的迎扫与「畏有山僧来」的山僧来,写尽迎客的闲趣——应门但迎扫,那「应门但迎扫」写尽应门的扫径——应门但迎扫,正是应门扫径的写照,那「迎扫」写尽迎客的闲趣;畏有山僧来,那「畏有山僧来」写尽山僧的将来——畏有山僧来,正是恐僧将来 的写照,那「山僧来」写尽迎客的闲趣;那「应门但迎扫」写尽应门的扫径,那「畏有山僧来」写尽山僧的将来,一写迎扫,一写山僧,写尽迎客的闲趣——扫径以待而恐僧来,正是待客的闲趣;此二句以迎扫、山僧写尽迎客的闲趣,也让此二句成为全诗写闲趣的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「让看门人扫扫路,怕有山里的和尚来」,则失其闲趣;唯以「应门但迎扫」写迎扫、「畏有山僧来」写出僧来,写尽迎客的闲趣,也让此二句成为全诗写闲趣的核心。
The Wangchuan villa poem is about expectation. The gatekeeper is told only to sweep the path; we fear some mountain monk may be coming. The fear is actually hope: the poet suspects a monk is on his way, and has the path swept in preparation. The word fear disguises welcome. To have said I hoped a monk would come and had the path swept would be an account; the gatekeeper ordered to sweep, fearing a monk is coming, is the hope.
仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔
On a narrow path the pagoda trees give shade, / Deep in shadow, green moss runs thick.
仄径荫宫槐,幽阴多绿苔。
The narrow path is shaded by the palace pagoda trees; in the deep shade green moss grows thick.
此二句是全诗写幽阴的核心,以仄径荫宫槐写荫宫槐,以幽阴多绿苔写多绿苔,写尽槐径的幽阴,是千古名句。「仄径荫宫槐」写仄径荫宫槐——那「仄径荫」写仄径荫,「宫槐」写宫槐,写尽仄径的荫槐;「幽阴多绿苔」写幽阴多绿苔——那「幽阴多」写幽阴多,「绿苔」写绿苔,写尽幽阴的绿苔。这句的深意在于:它以「仄径荫宫槐」的荫宫槐与「幽阴多绿苔」的多绿苔,写尽槐径的幽阴——仄径荫宫槐,那「仄径荫宫槐」写尽仄径的荫槐——仄径荫宫槐,正是小径荫槐的写照,那「荫宫槐」写尽槐径的幽阴;幽阴多绿苔,那「幽阴多绿苔」写尽幽阴的绿苔——幽阴多绿苔,正是幽处苔生的写照,那「多绿苔」写尽槐径的幽阴;那「仄径荫宫槐」写尽仄径的荫槐,那「幽阴多绿苔」写尽幽阴的绿苔,一写仄径,一写幽阴,写尽槐径的幽阴——仄径荫槐而幽阴生苔,正是幽径的写照;此二句以宫槐、绿苔写尽槐径的幽阴,也为下文的迎客作铺垫,也让此二句成为全诗写幽阴的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「窄窄的小路被槐树荫着,阴凉处长满青苔」,则失其幽静;唯以「仄径荫宫槐」写荫宫槐、「幽阴多绿苔」写多绿苔,写尽槐径的幽阴,也让此二句成为全诗写幽阴的核心。
The setting is quiet. The narrow path is shaded by the palace pagoda trees—the trees named after the palace, though here in a country retreat; in the deep shade green moss grows thick. The moss is the evidence: no one walks this path. The cool darkness and the undisturbed moss measure how rarely visitors come, which makes the expected monk all the more welcome. To have said the path was shaded and mossy would be scenery; the mossy shade measuring the emptiness of the path is the stillness.
Study
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Related Reading
Wang Wei's 'Bamboo Lodge' opens 'I sit alone in the deep green bamboo, / Strumming my lute and long into the sighing.' This poem, by contrast, opens on a path swept for a visitor. Both belong to the Wangchuan cycle: the first writes of silent sitting where 'no one knows me in these woods', the second of an expectant doorway where a guest is half feared and half hoped for — one static, one responsive, and together they show the two states of the same reclusive life.
王维《竹里馆》「独坐幽篁里,弹琴复长啸」写山水,是王维的名篇。此诗《宫槐陌》则「应门但迎扫」写山水。同为王维辋川集诗,一写「深林人不知」的独坐(竹里馆),一写「畏有山僧来」的待客(宫槐陌);一写静,一写动。两诗对读,可见王维辋川集的两种境界。
陋室铭 Inscription on the Loushi Cottage 刘禹锡 · 同写苔痕幽居,一苔痕上阶一幽阴绿苔 Both write of a mossy, sheltered dwelling; the Loushi Cottage has moss creeping over its steps, the Palace Pagoda Tree Path has deep green moss.Liu Yuxi's 'Inscription on the Loushi Cottage' says 'moss creeps green over the steps, / and the colour of grass comes in at the curtain.' In it the guest is admitted and the host stays unmoved by lute and Buddha. Read against Wang Wei's path, where nobody comes except a mountain monk the porter half fears, the two show the two brush-strokes of Tang writing about a quiet dwelling: one puzzles its owner's contentment, the other lets the emptiness stand uncommented.
刘禹锡《陋室铭》「苔痕上阶绿,草色入帘青」写幽居,是刘禹锡的名篇。此诗《宫槐陌》则「幽阴多绿苔」写幽居。同为写苔痕幽居,一写「无丝竹之乱耳」的陋室(陋室铭),一写「应门但迎扫」的宫槐(宫槐陌);一写刘禹锡,一写王维。两作对读,可见唐人写幽居的两种笔法。